Chapter comments on the chapter of the book D & O System

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OllieZ
Instead of the copy-pasting you should have skipped the parts or not mentioning it too much
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Dayside
man that was a whole lotta copy paste
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DivinDragonEmperor
why gryffindor? i hoped he'd be different and not go to that and go somewhere like ravenclaw where he can abuse the sh1t out of his library
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Abanmagan
Oh i wanted it to be ravenclaw
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Vansmoke
yes, no senseless drama with shorting hat!
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Jaeeee
I feel like the OC is just a fly on the wall. And I also feel this will be dropped soon.
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Mike_Lu
That's why I posted the chapter next day. It doesn't require much work to copy and paste and a bit of edit.
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Tonyorobsky
A chapter with little content 😔
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_MASTER_
This chapter..meh do a mass release not any was than 10 chapters
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GREEN_p34nutZ
only good for first 5 chapter, turn out be good but his choice action was bad after that become bad to worse,,,
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StellarJade
Question: Is this going to be a 'let's help Harry while following canon to the letter' kinda novel? Cause it feels that way.
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lordkc
Good Story!! But I feel that brother and sister bond should be strengthened a bit. Hermione feels too distant with her brother.
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Kilian
I liked this chapter. It is understandable that you used most of the official plot for this.
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Manuekmgc
thanks for the chapter
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MarkuzBlack
thanks for the update
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MustacheNinja737
Thanks for the chapter~~😄👍
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