Grammar is fine but when pov switches it is awkward. No world background information besides the mention two cities. No descriptions of characters. I don’t know what anyone looks like. I don’t know anything about the character’s personality, features, and past. All I know is that he was new to this world.
The story and MC development very bad, there is no clear information about cultivation and magic training or upgrading, the story should be about blacksmithing, but 2/3 of it about useless fighting and killing. All the time when he's blacksmithing someone will assassinate or make trouble for him.
At beginning with small materials the MC gained a lot of skills, but after 2nd level no skills and he's not even using 5% of them.
Realy not worth reading and the story till now free on qidian.
Translator/Editor are decent. That's about everything nice I can say.
The characters are pretty shallow. Female is in love with the MC and doesn't really think about anything except that. MC doesn't really think deeply about anything, and just kinda does what he feels like. MC's adoptive dad abandons him and walks away with no preparation, thought, or forewarning. The system's a cheat, not a tool, so there's not really any opportunity for the MC to grow as a person. There's some sudden scene transitions that leave you reeling. World development is... all right, I guess? In terms of structure and rules, at least.
The idea for the novel was great but the writing is excruciatingly bad. First it is so fast paced that it gives you headache.2nd MC is so stupid you want to kill yourself after reading just 20 chapters.all in all it is actually not worth reading by spending money.
great book should read 10/10 if you're looking for some light reading that's not too heavy the sorry starts off a little bit ambiguously and the characters background before he transmigrates isn't clear it's still and interesting concept and read
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