stupid Beta character. he has powers that can be considered OP, but he is too naive and caring. was repeatedly targeted for assassination, his student was injured and even lost his hand. but every time when he takes revenge and wins, he will let go of his enemies. there is no tendency to cut down the enemy at the roots so that the enemy cannot take revenge and give a warning to other potential enemies. this was why he was still constantly being attacked. or you could say, this is the format of the author's story: forging, being attacked by assassins, revenge, releasing the remaining enemies, forging, and so on
I like it
Wonder if there will be more chapters
Since it's been 2year's
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the story has potential, BUT the author didn't put any thought in it.
system? too simplistic.
story? one way line of copy/paste plot.
character development? nonexistent or jumpy
power level? just put a name and it's okay?
place? structure wise, no good. distance, no good.
in short; is the author a newbie? if not, take some vacation and improve it after some good rest.
sincerely, a simple reader.
Iβm halfway thru the story and itβs an alright read. The story stays pretty active howeverβ¦
The mc is dumb. He gets all these elements but only uses fireball to fight if his sword doesnβt do the trick. He always leaves behind survivors for them to retaliate. And never really learns from his past mistakes.
Fight scenes are bland and anti climactic.
I wouldnβt say the book is bad but I also donβt think itβs great. It is an okay read if you donβt have anything else to read or are waiting for other books to update.
Does anyone know author socia media ?? asking for friends ( im love hate speech)
Does anyone know author socia media ?? asking for friends ( im love hate speech)
Does anyone know author socia media ?? asking for friends ( im love hate speech)
Does anyone know author socia media ?? asking for friends ( im love hate speech)
Does anyone know author socia media ?? asking for friends ( im love hate speech)
Yo I really dont mind the young master trope in a western fantasy novel, But seriously only the MC got a first and last name and its a chinese name? If you want to do a western fantasy name use a western name. Seriously its not hard. Its like me writing an Wuxia Novel with a main character called Mark or Hidan or some other non chinese name while everyone else gets a chinese name. It really breaks the immersion a novel should have.
It's just stupid an inconsistent, I don't know how else to describe this mess.
His system is barely explained but features just disappear and we're given arbitrary numbers that don't mean anything. Additionally the main character seems to be unaware of the concept that actions have consequences, or at least I have to assume that considering how he acts. In pretty much every situation he faced he had better options he chose to ignore. He'd have half as much trouble if he used his brain for once and handled things a bit more discreetly. The antagonists are personalitiless inconveniences with just as little of a brain as the Mc and don't even get me started on the "romance"... Even the harem writers on here are doing a better job at that.
The story line is good but some chapters that was not elaborate to the end of the chapter. MC character and orher character were considered good. Overall is an intresting novel. Keep up the good work.
and another author who believes that all the horrible elements that we see far too often in Chinese fantasy novels is part of the genre. I hate novels that start out with an idiotic young masters used as cannon fodder, these characters lack character depth and as a result their actions always feel so stupid and dumb. It's as if in the modern world you have the kid of a millionaire ruin his father's business by being completely open about that his father and he himself have no clue about running a business and are just there to skimp as much money from the business as possible. Nobody who hears this would want to invest in the business, including banks, and if the people who work for him are treated badly it also result in no one wanting to buy their products anymore. There is no long term strategy and it is such a cop out to just say law of the jungle or strength speaks (one of the main reasons why countries as a concept appeared is because it makes it easier to make money and exert control, law of the jungle is not compatible with making it easier to make money and exert control. Such behavior would only be realistic if the concept of countries is not used, eg every city is a city state that is fully self sufficient).
In these kinds of stories my opinion of the mc is heavily influenced by the opponents he has to face, if he has to face a lot of idiot young masters than that is far less impressive than if he has to face someone who can actually think up a plan and it's not just a 'I'm stronger so I win' kind of situation
Looks like someone put a gun in the authors head and forced him to write a book within one day.
Everything is so rushed... Don't recommend. There are better crafting themed novels out there.
This novel is death, not finish.
Fortunately i always check last chaps whenever i see completed tag. Save me from waste so much coin. Learn from experience.
man, what is this? another abandoned novel. I think this is a short and direct plot one, but seems the 200 chapters was not a complete one. I feel cheated when reading this novel by the end.
No build-up. The author is simply rushing. He just went to another city for power leaving his girlfriend and the shop of his master, before his master returns. And that is just after some days getting his power. No sentiments. The girlfriend is introduced in the first chapters but after that, there is no role for her.
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Not so Great the character development is so flat it's transparent. the major issue is that the romance side of things is boring there is not communicating between the characters and the waifu has no personality.
Good novel. Thanks for the chapter Author π
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Novel is not finished, Author just gave up at 200, which I am happy about as the plot started becoming more annoying and poorly constructed. He intervenes in matters which he has no reason to just to get the cool scenario author wanted, people do things without the story explaining them or backing them up. every villian was one dimensional and boring, throwing their whole being at assassinating mc. As he rises in strength so does every enemy he meets, even the city lord of a small town is stronger with no explination
A las personalidades les falta como que algo...
Villano 1 - Villano 2 - Villano 3
Conocido 1 - Conocido 2 - Conocido 3
PrΓ‘cticamente lo ΓΊnico que se puede usar para diferenciar a los personajes son los nombres.
Lo peor de todo es el MC, donde el autor es un falso, propone "no pelear y seguir forjando, proteger la tienda de su maestro, ayudar a su prometida" pero lo primero que hace es ir a pelear contra una marea de bestias, abandonar la tienda de su maestro y dejar a su prometida, un kpo la vdd
1:Cliches are so many its unbelievable.
2: he keeps using the same situations
3:there are a lot of plotholes, ull notice them quickly
4:story is kinda original but wrong execution
I would like to point out that the name of the system he awoke is "world creation system" and not a blacksmithing system, so he should be doing more than blacksmithing such as formations. pills and ruins(pocket formations)
Muchson