this story is amazing and fantastic I love reading this story bez it is different from other stories and different everything in this story and storyline I am always check for update for excited to read new chapter just like new lesson
First of all, I would say that the synopsis is misleading. I hated Arthur at the first site and I should have guessed that he wasn't the ml. Though the story is quite unique in the way that she doesn't do back to him as she deserves much better.
It would be better if you add in the synopsis just a line would be enough that Arthur is not the ml.
got the book as a recommendation from the app , started reading because bored , by the end of 1 chapter got hooked , can't get enough of the book . this night too will be a sleepless night because of this book . plotting , plot twists and the characters are good loved them but in some chapters the same thing was repeated ,that's the only complain . so far so good ,love the story and thank you author for this great book .π₯°β€
While the storyline is interesting, the grammar is not great. Would be so much better if it could get some quality editing. Great ideas for the plot line but unless it is cleaned up a lot it's a difficult read.
The story line is good. The character description is nice. I read few chapters here and there I notice that it needs polishing. I advice the author to seek and editor for finer output. Keep up the good work.
I won't lie, I have been completely thrown by this novel I am at chapter 56 and its a completely different story than chapter 1 which seemed to change again in chapter 8 and then again in the 30's. I have read very few novels that kept me guessing like this one. The begin was tough to read there may be some triggers for some of readers in those earlier chapters if the story did not due a complete 180 I would have probably stop reading.
Overall I really enjoyed this novel and its getting more engrossing as it continues I look forward to see where the author takes it. The characters are interesting and so is the setup.
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Hii guys I m the reader of this book. This is one of the story which I like to read, And it's has lots up and down, and I will definitely suggest you this story to give a try.
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somebody plz reassure me tht Arthur is not the ML so that I hv the motivation to continue with the story.
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author bhaginee,I love you ,your story is really amazing ...may be I will sound creepy and others may find this is too much but for that scum ex husband you should have given some more punishments like tamisram, kumbipakam,rauravam,lalabhaksham,sarameyasanam,sulaprotham and when he says he is hungry he should be given krimibhojam..I don't find it wrong to punish him like that coz he deserves to be tormented ,death is too easy for those who cant respect another human life.Anyway I like your novel and keep going on ...may you have healthy life without obstacles so you can keep updating the story π π π
Wow, I was expecting the usual plot, but boy has it changed. The excerpt doesnβt follow through with the chapters and the ML is not who you thought. The story is interesting, just that I didnβt expect the change in direction and genre.
Thank you for this wonderful story author-san. If I can do what I wanted I wouldve left comments on each chapter and most of the paragraphs. HAHAHAHHAH I love the way you wrote your characters. I cannot wait for the our male lead to put in the effort to winning the female lead's heart. Love how she's not some weak and poor rich girl.
Patiently waiting for updates.
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this is called a story ...... everything is on top notch π....i love the charactersβ£οΈ ..... Reggie's character i love the most ....Thank you author for such a mind blowing story βΊοΈ......and i request you please do add some magical actions that will boast the story ππ....
Good job so far
The story is going steadily and thrilling
Hoping to get more chapters with thrilling events and lots of suspense
Can you make the episodes longer, it's kinda short
yo this book is legit and got me hooked. its a fresh plot cuz hello FL family not bitchy, no stepbrother or sis. AND I just want Esther to never go back to him.
As far as I've read up to chapter 22 the story kept me going on, not because I'm fond of CEO stuff but the narration and the emotional emphasis along with the perfect sprinkles of cliffhangers (leaving scenes in the middle deliberately, clever move author) I still hate Arthur although I loved the chosen name 'Garcia' reminded me of the classics. Esther seemed emotionally driven woman fo me though idk if she will change and listen to her brain or not after waking up from comatose. The most loved character of mine is old grandpa Benjamin (cranky and powerful savage old man) I hope the author will resume the story soon. And I wish Esther not to be pregnant from that night of **pe, please. Please!
I love stories about Royalty, and sometimes I wished I came from a royal home, where I would have people do things for me, and get all the attention...lol. I am very interested in this book author, and can't wait for more updates.
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honestly....this storyline is a bit attractive (not a bit but it's totally interesting )in my own preference ..in my opinion ...she deserve better man than her (ex)...but they arent divorce yet ...so ....i will use scum to change it...so the conclusion is i love this webnovel and esther or whatever the fl 's name deserve a better man than THE SCUM ....okeyh i am done ....forg7ive me for using harsh words ...but what can i do...it just i really ii hafta curse right now and here we go !(****)...okeyh right bow its okay right and also the SCUM asking us (netizens or we readers to curse him )eventhough it just a novel but author or whonever publishing this book....LISTEN CAREFULLY ....I WILL SUPPORT U GUYS 4 EVAH .....
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