Reviews of The Girl With The Broken Family by Sashly_Levis - Webnovel

The general idea of this book might be interesting to explore but for sure it lack depthness. The characters written are a bit shallow if I may say. Also lack of coherence, it is a pity as it may have the potential if the author can go a bit deeper in describing the inner co flict and problem resolution. The problem of the siblings are easily washed out it is just like you hiccup and drink water,fine. The story is really lack of nuance and in all honesty shows how lack life experience the author might have or lack of research the author should do for this type of novel. Everything may be more interesting if the author invest more time in the story plot and characterization and more impir Anyway, thank you for trying and hope as time goes by, the quality of writing improves

A very interesting book! The plot is really good and the writing style is very nice. Hope to read more chapters. Good job. Keep it up author!

Another good book from this lovely author. I must say I am now a big fan of your works. This is the best author. Keep it up 😍 and to those who are doubting whether to read this or not please read this 😍

I really liked the plot and the progress of the story. Liked how the main character was displayed. I loved how different feelings and emotions were explained. Good job, author.

Great plot and story line. The synopsis is well written and sparks a flame to follow the light and read your novel. [img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]

It was the synopsis for me. There's mystery, drama and very intriguing chapter by chapter I loved it very much. I see good books here everyday and I know this won't be my last. Good luck to the author

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It's so sad what Charlie went through You are a great Author, when I clicked the link to read this book although I haven't finished reading it but, i knew i will not be disappointed and truly I wasn't, Good job author and keep it up

I just started reading it but first few chapters got me to read it more. The plot from beginning is interesting and the introduction of the mc is done very neatly with all the details not only the mc but other characters traits can be seen with each line. Can't wait to see how her life is going to turn.

A dynamic family relationship, with roles independent. With full performance and confidence. ... sometimes charm and emotional domination have their opposite sides, the passing of an unexpected event. Life goes on and for the better. You are part of the problem but the solution is unbeatable. Lovely story ...

The synopsis is very catchy. I mean everything is so on point. The book is so professionally written. We can already see that the book is doing great. Good luck to the author for more success.

this is really really interesting plot..as it talks about teenage girls... its the different plot which is very much interesting to read.. and each and every episode will put in cliffhanger..so author cant wait for more episodes🤭🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

What a sad story. In a good way of course. This is solid melodrama folks. It is engaging to read and has a lot of good elements to tjr story.

Wow 🤩. This book is lovely and well written. I recommend this book. The brilliance of this novel starts from the beginning. Keep it up author, well done.

Very fascinating story looking forward to see how it ends. Just a little constructive criticism though you keep switching between third person and first person other than that your story is a go. Once this story is polished it'd be a hit. Wonderful plot and settings. I can see the characters growing little by little.

Well done. It has an easy flow with a clear setting and a plot with no confusions. It is pretty clear what you want to say to the reader and you just say it. Keep up the good work. You are doing great.

This is a pretty good book! Its very interesting. I have to point out how this story grabbed my attention when I first set my eyes on those words. Dear author please keep writing more. There should be another interesting chapter for this book.

Beautifully written and packed with suspense.You'll cheer for Charlie and ache along with her.Complicated and engrossing, this book has it all ❤️

The emotions I got from just reading the synopsis was enough to make me wonder how things will end up for our lady. Looking forward to more chapters as we go on a journey to a better place for our Fl I hope

Well, the story is very interesting and the plot intrigues me. I am looking forward to the next updates. Good job keep it up! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]>w<

Loved the storyline and the content writing was on point. The characters were fun to read. It is engaging and promising to the readers. keep going on :)

You have done a great job putting this book together Author🤑🤑🤑 there is alot of suspense that makes me wanna read on from chapter to chapter!!!! Kudos to you🤗🤗🤗

You didn't stop surprising me with all the suspense that you have to offer.... everything is on point, l mean one minute I'm crying and the next I'm smiling!!!! I like the chill that I'm feeling Author🤩🤩🤩🤩

Quite an interesting story you have there. I liked it very much. The characters are interesting too. I curious to see where the story goes and ends. Kudos to the author.

great start, good synopsis and I love how the story begin!! I already like if because of the title, and I think this would be a fantastic story! good job!

Poor mc😭😭😭😭😭😭 she had to suffer a horrible mother, horrible!!! anyway. Wonderful book author, please keep writing and keep it up. I hope her mother and junior brother pays for this though. I really love Rebecca 😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Right away from the synopsis, one can easily pock interest. I love your selection of character names. I am in love with this book. Bless up. Keep winning. Can't wait for the next and next. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌