Reviews of The Bloodline System

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4.78

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TimVic
I'm shameless but in this situation I'm not. Just because it's a system story don't mean it's gonna be cliche. I always bring new, unique and something fresh to the table. The plot, the characters, scenes, world background, expect all these to be mind-blowing. I don't like to info dump so you'll have to read more to know about a some things. Your feedback determines if this is gonna be dropped or continued. Peace out ✊
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Dragon81702
Will this story gonna be continued? If Yes then when? ......................................................................................
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I_am_your_Master
Here's my review about this novel (chapter 1 to 18): First, The MC did not transmigrate from nowhere nor reincarnation of someone. So it's normal if the MC is childish or a bit immature from the start but I think it will get better. Second, MC family consist of 4 people including him of course, his mother, father and I think a ten year old brother. But they literally ignore MC's existence due to his bloodline is lower than F rank while his brother has an A rank bloodline so the MC's parents dotes on his younger brother so much. Third, the world background is easy to understand and there's no war happening between the two kind of races; human & skarlovs and mixed bloods from the time being or in the surface pft. But discrimination about race and bloodline are common thing and too strong even ignoring their child just because of a very low bloodline. Fourth, MC's system is a bit strict or not just a bit lol. It have a daily, weekly, monthly and yearly quest but the reward is also reasonable. There are 7 attributes that are strength, speed, agility, perception, bravery, charm, intelligence. --- I almost give up this novel because of the paragraph of Gustav in the first chapter. I am almost a sinner, author please forgive me. Your novel is so satisfying, can't wait for your update. Sigh, it's my first time to write too many words. So please, support the novel for many chapters. I want to read it so bad.
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slimes_are_cool
Read this you won't regret it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;):)
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ColdFlowingStream
I really really love this novel i feel so sad that i didn't find it later to read more chapters, but also glad I did as well. I am having so much fun reading this.
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BlackRock54
I'm liking this so far. though i must say that i do have a nagging voice behind my head that keeps saying 'Just get to the point' every chapter. But i know better than that. I understand that quickly speeding through a story is not a good thing most of the time for authors. So please keep doing your Best author and good Day to all Who read this.
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Cain_s
Need more chapters for exact review. The character design is pretty good up until now. It's good to see character development. Hope he doesn't become a simp again. Also, tell me that the romance part isn't going to be anytime soon. I also want to know if the mc can copy or steal the ability from others? There aren't many chapters for writing on story development and world background. Keep up the good work.☺
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Vinayak_
I’ve caught up to the 19 chapters released and it was a lovely read. I like rational and calm MCs and this books seems to have such an MC from my experience so far. The characters are deeper than your average novel, but does leave for more depth to be desired. Literally everyone other than the cook and 1 mysterious teacher hating on MC cuz MC has weak bloodline is understandable but tiring. The power system was honestly a bit hard for me to understand ( zulu, etc are the corresponding names to the different levels in power and for some time i wasnt sure about the order of said levels ). I’m sure i’ll understand with time though. Also it’s kind of annoying that he hasn’t used his bloodline extraction ability yet. What’s the point if you don’t use it at all ? Overall I do think that the author is doing a solid job and should keep up the work. Cheers.
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Kirk_Shaw
Great story so far ................................. .................. . ............................................................
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Kneel_you_peasant
Extremely good! Update more, author. *************************************** *************************************** ***************************************
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NovelGreed
Can't wait for more chapters. Love it, Love it. *************************************** *************************************** ***************************************
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A_men_skeree
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Eloebhose_Emmanuel
Writing quality is really good, the story development is top notch, same goes for the character design (I really love it alot). Updating stability and World background wasn't left out too. I rate this work an overall 5.0
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Seventh_Bat
the minimal things are grammar and clichés. the character design is very good as well as the story development. the aliens invading earth is cliché but it makes up with the peace treaty slightly
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DaoistORB0QY
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PoeticSonic
grammer, maybe a few here and there, English isn't my first language nor am i too proficient so as long as it's readable and fluid then i really don't care for the small mistakes so 5/5. character design, the character design is dog shit. it's too bad, even most eastern fantasy novels aren't that bad, i don't even know where to start...actually i do, i will start from the very first few paragraphs. the author starts with a "glimpse" of the future of how in 3 years the MC is gonna be op and guess what the people chant his name as? they call him "crimson lord" dude, the cringe level was so high it covered me like a coat, it would have been ironically less edgy if the people chanted "edge lord" lmao. he took the "im trash so i get abused and bullied" way too fuken far and he didn't give valid excuses yet. forget committing suicide, I'm surprised that he's alive, and for someone as "trash" as him, why does everybody put so much energy into torturing him and putting him an inch away from life and their lives revolve around it like wtf?! also, the author like to tell rather than show, he says that the mc is smart but the mc keeps on doing dumb and stupid things. when it comes to other characters, if they aren't literally trying to kill the mc ust because he has a "trash" power, they are shitting on him about why he still didn't kill himself. and all of them are very obnoxious like holy shit, i would have killed myself whether i have a strong or weak power by virtue of me having to hear these people talk on a daily basis. that goes for the system too, it's annoying as ****. overall 3/5 just cuz i think there is potential for the story and i don't want to lower the rating too much stability...well it's pretty stable let's hope it stays that way, for now, there haven't been too many chapters.5/5 story development, i like the fact that it's gonna have to do with space soon enough and meeting new species so on and so forth and that's mostly where the 4 starts to come from, i took only 1 star which is something very generous as what we saw in the first chapter as a glimpse to the future was hella cringe but i can see many ways the author can improve upon it so by the time it's the period where the glimpse of the future showed, he could change things so it isn't as cringe. also, the story is very very forced, like a constipated person trying to take a shit.
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Sekundos
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IEatMapleSyrup
This is my first review on this website even though i’ve read many novels, this one is really appealing and makes me look forward to all the jaw dropping the mcs acquaintances will be doing in the future. It’s going to feel great. Also he better steal his brothers stuff one day as revenge. Please Author-Sama
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Jozan
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every thing is very much fun and enjoyable to read. the MC Gustav is disgustingly weak mentally and physically his parents hate him due to his useless bloodline which is the set up for the perfect revenge plot. Just hope he doesn't pull a redo of healer on his crush. due to the author's unique requirements for updating its kinda annoying because there is lots of potential for this
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Josh_Dan
This author never fails to amaze me with his ideas and spectacular writing style. To me he is one of the best, if not the best author on webnovel. If it sounds like I'm blabbing, pick up the novel and give it a try yourself.
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Mcdavis_Octavia
Author of godly abomination returns comes through with another one. I don't know how his writing quality keeps getting better and better when it's already one of the best on webnovel. This is a must read and I can tell that this story is gonna be at the top soon.
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MahNameJosh
Ok, so I don't usually leave reveiws but I definitely enjoyed what I have seen so far and am looking forward to the rest. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
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ChristineWalter2
I love the world background, character build up and story development within the first chapters. What I only wish for are more chapters of this sweetness from the Author!
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Lebanon123
I'm usually a silent and low-key reader, but I just had to review this. It's so enthralling. Just recently joined Webnovel on recommendation and on recommendation I read your other novel and was so mesmerized. I saw u had another novel and decided to check this out. And Omg! Keep it up bro. I wanna see the end of this✌✌
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Magecrafter
This is a Five star for me!!! After seeing Godly Abomination returns written by the same author i already knew this would be fire! And i was not disappointed. Most people have a cliched mentality when it comes to System novels, but this is out of this world, literally. The character is totally relatable, and his power unique. This is going down as legendary. I honestly wish i had more power stones to vote. You all should read this, its absolutely phenomenal. Lovely !!!
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annederxee
Hands down to this story. The author's writing really drew me in and I can feel what the mc is going through. It almost made me cry (not to be dramatic but that's how vulnerable i am with these topics) Definitely need new updates! 🥺
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Aliyah_Jasmine
hmm, I already know the author from the other book. That story that he made, its never disappoint me. you doing a new story with a new gems of yours. I read the following paragraphs with a seriously face LOL. it's make me feel that I was in that story. There a part of story that make me smile and never except that thing never happen. This is my honest review do your book. . . . . . . ouh yeah right...I forgot to tell you something...You are the one of my favorite author in webnovel. sorry if the review is bothering you.
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