Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 11 being a mercenary while recuperating of the book 10 trillion karma reincarnation:
kengan system in the Baki world
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Author if I could help a bit, I feel like when guihun is being used charisma should go up to 10 because releasing 100% meaning oppressing enemies similar to raian in the tournament also increasing bloodlust and change in 'aura' that's why they were perfect for Assassination. Don't know how many times I've said this but possible OC Hanma, eh eh 😉 *sigh* please.....
Nevermind the depressing moment, all I have to say is make 1-3 Chapters, 1 of them should be meeting Alexandra (possible mini fight where Kai bi*ch slaps her around) next one is life as a mercenary showing him killing or eliminating his targets then last one meeting Olivia and going to Tokyo.
Great fanfic so far been Re-reading when no Chapters have been coming out between days. Keep going strong with great Chapters and story!
I can tell the author that the story has improved and this is very encouraging, but I noticed one detail you write only from the person of the hero or from the second person, I hope you add dialogue from third parties thereby revealing the characters of the second or third plan and, accordingly, the hero, thanks for the hard work and keep up the good work.
The human limit is stupid for me... Just look at Oliver biscuit, Yujiro and pickle. I can say that all three have different strength with Pickle 1st,Biscuit 2nd and Yujiro 3rd.but it didn't mean Yujiro weak, it just that his technique is stronger and honestly, at their level, even a normal slap can destroy your inner organ... So in my opinion, 100 as human limit is stupid and you even make it all the same. I vote for no limit author..
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