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PancakesWitch
Author supporting its own work with a self-review, I hope any new readers check it out if they want to hear some more about this novel!
This novel is about Frank's journey as a World Traveler, a Title given to him after he awakened the World Traveling System on his sleep!
After such event, he is sent to another world straight away! and needs to adapt to the situations and learna bout these world's story, and about the many threats, monsters, and enemies that shall cross his path!
Although at first he is confused about what to truly do, he quickly becomes aware of his purpose, and what he must do to save his own world, Earth!
And it is not as if Earth is not filled with supernatural things, in fact, it is filled with them to the brim!
This novel is something I've always wanted to write, a merge between modern superpower novels alongside monster hunting, world traveling, isekai, and more!
The fun literally never ends, as Frank explores the infinity of the multiverse, and all the fantastical worlds, filled with powers, treasures, allies, and enemies!
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fantasy_prime
I liked the story, I mean there are some repeated and old cliches but even more originality! But at last, I have to say...
WHAT A STUPID ENDING!
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SlimeQueen127
Don't mind me jus a passer-by πΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈπΆββοΈJust trying to become a comment master so I need your helpoh I kinda like your novel to I even cried in his fight with the insectiod and that's dark
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ALEXPHARO_PLAYS
I like it the only downside is the author has made all his stories with the same overall vibe of power and the story is awefully similar to a manhwa called the gamer but itβs good nonetheless . Sad no continuation tho
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AncestorDuck
One of PancakesWitch's better works.
In this one, the system is not as bad as in the other works... I mean the number of words per chapter just because of the system interface.
Grammar is readable, and the story itself is quite good.
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BotDetector
Grammar isnβt that good but itβs still readable. The only thing I dislike about this novel is the way he speaks to others, heβs way too polite when he shouldnβt be
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Dr_of_nach0
Best author on this app. Best fact abt the main character he likes futas
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Riebee
So the good then the bad of this story.
A very good read overall, good characters and world building. I enjoyed the story and would read more books by this author as long as the bads mentioned below are observed and followed.
However, there was too much word padding at the begining and ending of the chapters. Use the Author's notes to talk about your other books. Also we do not need word for word recaps at the begining of every chapter that are several paragraphs long. And towards the end restating the same thing two or three times in different ways to meet the word counts left me disappointed. Also the ending was a bit lackluster due to your loss of interest/inspiration as you stated.
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Aishat_Olajide
This is one of the best book i have ever read. I love it β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€π
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Kaiju150
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Arodicus
Iβm a little over 100 chapters in. I like the story but I dislike the character building / character interactions. The mc makes no sense and is very dumb. He leeks his power to kids and continually reveals more powers to the people in his world. He is supposed to be mentally mature and he thinks a ton. The author has the mc ramble on and on in his head about things but the moment he is talking with people he doesnβt think at all just says stuff and trusts people too easy.
The mc op power is pretty entertaining. So far he has only visited one other world after 100 chapters.
Story reminds me on the Korean web comic the gamer but not as well written.
Almost every character stammers and gets flustered every time they talk with the mc. Even godsβ¦
If you can get past the conversations and supposed mature mind of the mc and just pay attention to whatβs going on the story is pretty great.
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Hayden_Warburton
Good Story with lots of potential, however I felt there wasn't enough action involved and is more like a slice of life story. The story development is extremely slow. The main character hardly abuses his own ability of travelling to other worlds which I feel like the main objective of saving Gia gets lost somewhere down the line or is just developing to slowly. Also the many characters are introduced in my opinion as it becomes a little chaotic. However the Author doesn't forget about these characters and no one fades away in the background. The power system is a little unique too. This at the end of the day is my honest my opinion. But there were times I had to force my self to keep reading so I didn't drop it to early. Slice of life just isn't me i guess. I enjoy a good Action packed novel with romance and maybe a harem but not to many members as it becomes too chaotic.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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isekai_seeker
Before i start my review i would like to say that i finished the book and my talk about minor spoilers though i will try to keep spoilers to the minimum.
This book shows us how even the most normal looking ordinary people can have a quite eventful life or extraordinary talent or a troubled past or all of those like the mc of this book.
He feels just like a normal student you might find in any highschool could be said to even be a boring person at the start
But as you read more you will find out just how hectic his life actually is you might even feel bad for him considering he literally dies more than once(remember that he is the harbinger of death).
You will see how an ordinary student grows in power personality and maturity till he becomes someone who can shake the entire universe yet he doesn't forget himself in power or neglect those close to him.
Though the part about being a harbinger of death takes a little while to appear in the story so you might need a little patience.
the ending felt a bit rushed but at the same time its not truly the end as with all the other books from pancakes it is connected to a shared universe meaning the mc and his allies will appear again in another book
which is why as i am ending the review i won't be saying goodbye but i will be saying till we meat again
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Iles
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DaoistcecnBC
Although I love this story, I feel like I could be longer I mean the process in the last 50 or 60 chapters could have been stretch within 100 or more. But I definitely enjoy this novel, I mean I love how Frank got to travel to a least another world other than Terra, and the world of monster to be exact. I fish we had a few chapters of him going to the vampire world, and we getting to know the Moon Goddess, her children, and her name. Also getting to know Arthur, and MerlΓn. MerlΓn for them most part.
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K_Kaisa
This novel is so good. Pancake witch character building in this novel is insane. Every character has or goes through their own trauma within the story. But the pain they go through isnt used as a plot narrative to create false drama or as a flimsy excuse to allow the mc to act without moral. Each back story deals with real issues that people go through everyday. Being othered for looking differnt, child abuse, substance abuse, racism, poverty. The characters strive, overcome and make peace with their pain, their past. They do so by finding and relying on each other, becoming stronger as ordinary people and as godlike super magic people.
My only issue is that it took pancake 600 godamn chapters to get to my favourite genre and now I have to wait for more content π©.
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THE_BUGGED
its so great that i read it seven times already . The content of this novel, although i want to spoil some parts for it for others but I wouldn't now right ππ
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sleepyeye
for those interested in the world traveling aspect of the novel,
does he go into different worlds? yes
can he move back and forth between those worlds? yes
how often do we see a new world? very slowly, counting earth as the first, he enters his third world after 600+ chapters, if thats bad or good depends on your taste.
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John_Kula
This is another quality edition to the PancakesWitch multiverse of novels! The big focus in this one is on the characters and their backstories and stuff. This does give more depth to the characters and the backstories are not badly written or anything, but I can't help but feel like they drag on a little longer than they should. Most of these backstories take up 3 to 5 chapters when I feel like they could have maybe been shortened to 2. I don't know, I just feel like we spend a little too much time learning about the past of these characters when the present of these characters is more interesting. I'm not saying don't do it anymore, but maybe just move things along at a more brisk pace. I feel like that would help improve the story's pacing (at least in my opinion).
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Spencer_Baskin
excellent book best I have ever read. ..........................................................................................................
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Big_T_Big_H
The story is very good. The only complaint I have is that as soon as the mc married one girl all of a sudden he turned into this supreme I get every girl that sees me harem guy. Kind of cringe worthy. The other think is that the author now re uses the last 2 paragraphs of one chapter in the beginning of the next and promotes his other books in the chapter making the word count of the actual chapter decrease dramatically. Other than that I absolutely love the story
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Alaxus99
Another wonderful novel by PancakesWitch. Same as her other novels, its an amazing work. A wonderful art we can say. Amazing characters design and development and world background.
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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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TheFlyingPig2
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Hey Author I Have Seen All Your Works Here In WN
They Are Almost The Same
So Is It Possible If All Of Your Main In All Novels Has The Same Lineages?
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