Disciple greets readers I hope you all can really use your imagination to paint your own word because I think someone would call a planet being this close to the earth illogical, but when that time come's I don't wanna describe every detail and make it boring.
I can mayyyyybe, promise chapters until June but imma be gone probablyy for june and half of July for exams and my grammar isn't perfect because I speak mostly creole, but English isn't hard for me so I promise better grammar.
This piece of work is amazing! Nice story, great concept, and good potential! Though, a few grammar mistakes here and there. But, it didn't disturb the understanding of the story. Would love to see how the story develops. After reading a few of the released chapters, it has already hooked me up. Can't wait for more update. Thank you, author, for producing good work for us to read! [img=recommend]
Writing Quality is excellent.
I love the story Development and also the Character designs were awesome!!
The storyline is so unique .
I really love it. I hope for more from the author.
keep it up author.
The Celestials send their regards!
The story has depth from page one. Even though there is a lot that it was not explained regarding the whole nine sky, but that is how to slowly build up a good solid foundation for the story.
Keep up the good job.
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
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very good plot and it kinda slow and haves me craving more action i liked the authors other works but the errors, I think the author needs an editor.
Author only lost points on errors but is very descriptive
Wow Author, you have done a brilliant job here! I really love the way you described the characters and the settings. I really really really hope readers give your novel a chance💓💓💓💓💓💓.
All the best.
Author-nim, you already have the good ingredient and that is your writing style. It's descriptive enough for readers to grasp the imagination you've put into your book. I hope this book of yours would be noticed :))) And I hope everyone who reads this would give this a try :))
There is a lot of wholesomeness here for a story that includes butchers! I like it! Really light-hearted and sweet moments in the middle of more serious stuff, there certainly is a balance and I am living for it! I liked the joke about smoothie machines. Never thought that butchers could be so cool.
Since I skimmed it through, I've only understand a bit of it, but so far, the story is great. Also, not only was he good at describing etc, I also loved his writing skills!
I'll be expecting great more things to come from ya!! Good luck!!
After giving this a good scim read I've come up with a couple of pros.
First of all, I like the world-building, although its cliche with the sky warrior thing, it's interesting since uncles are notoriously known to be pedophiles in the books.
I enjoyed seeing how this will go, how far the author can take his/her imagination. Good book.
Also better start updating more dude, u got me hooked, now you owe me 100 more chapters, get writting