Reviews of The Tribrid Girl by Darkswan - Webnovel

Great start author! Really enjoyable read so far, story flows and descriptions are creative and imaginative. Keep up the hard work author, I will look forward to your updates.

I really like the story, the premise, the characters and the start... also, the cover since I play her a lot xd. But overall, I would want to see more, great job author!

Nice start from the beginning, everything is explained well and in detail. I feel the story is interesting and makes you curious about what will happen next. So far I have read 4 chapters and it us going really well. I hope the author keep up the good work [img=recommend]

At the start of the first chapter, the authors description made me feel like I was there. But sadly, it soon turned to someone telling me. Honestly, the author shouldn't only learn about descriptive writing but grammar and why you don't put too characters talking to one another in the same paragraph, other than that, it's fine. Recommended to new readers on the site.

*I stumbled upon this novel because it doesn't have any systems or magical thingies that *cough* scars Webnovel. I really like the concept and the first few parts of the story. However, (although I made the writing quality 5/5) it still has its improvements. I hope this would help your writing career. Pros: The author can beautifull describe the female character and the stories that would affect her. The concept is really great, and the background is rich. Cons: There are tons of descriptive texts. Although this might appear "showing" to others, but for me it looked like it was telling (especially the nose part and the life of the girl) (and I know that this information must be shared to readers, showing a scene where Octavia lives her life alone inside a orphanage instead of telling it. There is a few mixed and match tenses from here and there. But....that's a really difficult topic to learn.

Your story deserves a five star for sure. Nice start from the beginning, everything is explained well and in detail. It is a a refreshing read, even the cover is attractive. Kudos to the author.

the start was great, the description of the world was quite vivid. it was a good read the description of the character too was great enabling the reader to picture her perfectly in the minds eye

A well-done story, surely. It has a fairy tale sort of vibe, which makes the world seem bright and beautiful. The characters are cute and lively. On the flip side, there are a number of structural errors, which the author very much improves upon in later chapters. To the author: Well done! Keep writing and polishing your technique!

A very beautiful Read indeed. The story flows and develops beautifully and in a very natural manner, where nothing seems forced or out of place. Well, the biggest issue here on WN is poor grammar, actually most of the people here don't have English as their first language, so they kind of suffer and makes us readers suffer with them too, but not with this story. The grammar is perfect. Well, there is always the room for improvement. I am really, really looking forward to Octavia's Journey ! 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓

This is a wonderful story, I love the twists and it flows really well, the author is really creative, I wish you good luck author. keep up the good.

I like the way the author describes the characters. The plot is unique, and all the characters are interesting. I am looking forward to reading more. Added it to my library

A five-star review because of the way the emotions and incidents are depicted by the author along with the book cover and the involving storyline.....A book that introduces female strength and adventures... With a nice hint of romance to make the book overall, superb! Best of luck to both the author and the book!

OMG, I loved reading this book. It was amazing. From the plot to the descriptions of the setting to the twist and turns and trials the mc had to overcome. Good job, author.

A refreshing read. A story about a young amazing innocent beautiful young girl. She was an orphan loved by all. She even captures the eyes of the royal family. The story has amazing descriptions and was easy to follow like a crystal clear spring flowing, that is how this good story is.

okay here is a shameless review I give my story a five star because I tried really hard to create this one and I hope my effort was worth it and I personally think this is my best book so far.

Gday friends! This book is pretty good so far, and the worldbuilding is good. The spacing and writing improved the further I got in, but please capitalize the first letter of the quotes of people talking. Other than that, it is pretty good so far :)

You do very well in describing your world and characters. The imagery you create just makes them seem so real. Just be sure to check your spelling and capitalization and break up your paragraphs when you have dialog. Otherwise, this story shows much promise.

Story developing fast, it could use some more work but good so far keep it up, a job well done, oh and soryy for the shameless reviewing, love this book my friend

Off to a good start! I love the vivid descriptions and the narrations in the story. The world building is superb, too. There are minor errors and will be better if the dialogues are separated. All in all, you still did a good job and keep it up, dear author! ^^

Love the new chapters I can see the story growing and your MC is really strong too, waiting for the other chapters. Loving the flow, keep it up Dark Swan.

i love this so much.. you have an excellent writing quality❤... keep up the good work ❤ can't wait for the next chapter... you're an amazing author✨

I really enjoyed the story its great. I am already speechless but aaaaahhhhhhh iits so aeeeeeeeesome. The novel is sooooooooo fanta magnanimous

Wonderful job, I wanted to get more books from you and I did, love this story too, keep up the good work. Kudos to the author. Wish you all the best.

I liked how the story started off at the beginning of the chapter and it intrigued me to read further. The writing style is well written. Very promising characters. definitely recommended for reading. keep up the good work, author!

Vivid and full of imagery. The author has successfully created a new world in this novel. It also has an interesting plot. Thank you, author!

Wow I must commend this author Samayah Kassim and also she is an amazing kind wonderful and hardworking friend to me who books are been liked by myself Vanessa dowlatram I must say congratulations to her on this next amazing book can't wait for the next chapters to be released to be honest I don't usually read these types of books but I gave it a try and I must say this book meaning the writing quality and others need all 5 stars to the best and I must say to her that I wish her all the best in the future and may the perfection of hers prove who she are and may she keep shining and shining in writing these novels as days goes by good luck and her books are the beat books I have ever read in my life keep it up my friend from yours sincerely and truly friend Vanessa dowlatram........🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖

Your writing quality was superb! But what I can suggest was to break your paragraphs because it was too long. Your sentences have to be put an enter (↩️)in between so it will be pleasing to the eyes and easy to read. All in all, likeable characters. Engaging plot, Lively actions, vivid narrations and awesome plot progression! Kudos and Peace! ✌️ Also I will boost your views to 1 thousand! I hope this hel**!

Wow😍 I found a gem. This story is really great. The chapters were so interesting and well described it hooked me till end. I know its too early to review, but, but, but, the author did a great job and deserved some praise. Hope to be consistent or improve more. Good luck!! [img=recommend]

The description is very clear and the choice of words used are beautiful, I have only read the first few chapters but the plot is quite interesting!