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NomsterWasHere
The synopsis alone was an eye-opener. Chapter 1's use of "the man" or "the woman" was a welcome surprise, as the "he/she" description that most authors use when withholding character names can depersonalize the actions of characters, in my opinion. I felt like I got to know them by a nickname, instead of just by gender alone. Reading further, the writing is articulate and intriguing enough to make you want to keep reading!
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Sonder_Ella
Hi, I can't stop reading it. I have already added this to my library. Your writing style is what kept me hooked. It was worth reading. Happy writing! :)
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Jo_J
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Something original! Something new, here... I read it with pleasure! After a few chapters, I know where are you from :) I mean in the sense that I know what kind of books/movies you like, and I can see some influences... The plot is interesting, the characters also, the descriptions are nicely written! Gooood work!
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Mel_Aniv
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear new readers, please give this novel a chance and I assure you that you will be surprised in many ways! 🙏
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kuhaku_sora
Well, this is an interesting read. I can fully grasp the first few chapters of the story. It feels as if I am inside of the novel, watching their every bizarre movements. I really like it, and I can't wait to read more of this in the future~
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Everlasting_Chaos
I have only read few chapters but it is interesting. The first chapter left behind a mystery that intrigued me. The writing quality is also really good, just some edits are needed. The story is engaging and so is the character. If you like villainess story, then this is the one for you. :D
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HelenBold
Simply wow! From the first chapter, I was swept off my feet! I would like to see a movie or an anime after this story. The author manages to make you feel like your actually there. Great job, and keep going!
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Allister_Nelson
This is my favorite Webnovel I've read so far! Super gripping, such professional writing I'd find it in a bookstore, but with the tight plotting, mystery, steamy scenes, and a hardcore "villainess" of my favorite manga, anime, and manwhas! I am going to stay abreast of all updates and root you on!
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cBLaISrLIFEma
What is this? Why is this so great? Gotta read this one! it's very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!
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miu_hozuki
Great start to a great story. I like the author's style and the atmosphere that is created in the episodes. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
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Sara_Wilcox
This book is a surprising find. The opening is a bit confusing, but it makes you want to keep reading. The level of cockiness in the FM is hilarious! Bravo author! I look forward to updates😁
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fmreca_
Oh my god! I just added it to my library. I am impressed and hooked on chapter one already. I love it already! I'm certainly looking forward to reading your next chapters. [img=recommend]
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MrWritter
Amazing, I was surprised by such a way of writing, I love the fluidity with which you handle your story, I hope for more development in the future, I will be waiting.
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Andrew_Oak
Great start to a great story. I like the author's style and the atmosphere that is created in the episodes. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
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Aisha_Jin
Wow! Just great! I have no other words to praise your work because I lost 'em. By the way keep it up so that I can cheer you up! [img=recommend]
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Dani6
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The confusion is real from the get go, hurtling us down the rabbit hole. The writing is stabilizes us inside the characters headspace, leaving us just as confused. Very interesting read!
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novel_lights
This is a great book with an interesting plot. I like how the author makes the character setting to grow with every word she/he places in. Good one you have here author!
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Gabuji
The visuals the story gave me was very enjoyable. Your way with words kept me interested and the story direction was also very interesting. I'll be very happy to stick around.
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BlindBandit
It's a good read. The writings are clear to the point, with a bit of work it would be even more promising. all in all its a good read, good luck! Kudos to you.!
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Princess_G_Enigwe
Absolutely amazing. every single product was on point. you deserve more than five stars[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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Seth_Baham
Howdy! I read your story and a bit of your prologue so far. Ive got to say, chiefkiss. your writing style is very fluid and articulate and allows for so much creativity to flow onto the page. Your world is really cool and the concept of your main characters are great and original. I see you upload a lot so please dont stop haha!
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EruRizen
Wow, wow, wow. I can't stop saying wow. This is beautifully written and some parts of the story made me imitate a tomato -cough- for a few moments. Of course, they were perfect for research purposes. The novel is good so far and there are a lot of details written. The author did a great job in writing this book.
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SAIIIE
So, ths book is amazing, it even popped up on my suggested. You making big move Mineva, keep writing it's amazing. Also, keep this plot, it has six paths (naruto pun)
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Sailow_Sanchez
Well damn. I saw the prologue after reading this but I'm definitely going to read that first before continuing I love the way the story unfolds so far but I feel I should the prologue first[img=recommend]
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Maryixxx
Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤ I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story to be read by us. Keep writing, Author.
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Tsukasa_
Splendid book. The story was very well interpreted. Well, it was a confusing start but after reaching the end everything made sense! Hope for more chapters and keep up the great work!
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calfikydra
I love it so far!! The author shows great talent. I was a bit confused at first, but nearing the end of the first chapter, it all came together, and it startled me. I love the writing techniques the author shows off, and the story and plot is very intriguing! Great job! <3
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DaoistTMudcd
The story is fantastic even if there are just a few chapters, the author's writing style draws me in I had no idea it would be like that in the second chapter at first, but it's a good surprise that every chapter gets me riled up. For me a It's a 5 star please keep on releasing chapters <3
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Mel_Aniv
Overall a nice read! This gets me riled up and excites me to read after the chapters! Nice cliffhangers at the end. More power to your writings and more readers to come! Peace ✌️
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