Reviews of Potion Bar System

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Brandon_Dawson1
it's going good so far I like it keep up the good work I enjoy reading and I like an in-depth explnation it makes it like you see a movie of what your reading in your head
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pulse_zero
I dont really know what to write but you have to in order to post a review. As always Rachel makes a good book. Easy enough to understand with an interesting plot
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RachelRuth
The sloshing liquid in the vial glows a beautiful blue—its properties unknown, only alluring and magnetic. It promised something exciting. How would it taste? What are its effects? Can you back out after taking a sip? To that I say, "Drink, Drink, Drink!" This story is a little different, a little familiar. Yes, it has its own gimmicks involving a Drinker wanting to be an Alchemist, and you already have an idea of the end... he becomes a Hero with a Bar. It's a tale as old as time. No doubt, this Author will put their own spin to it and flair, and one can only hope that you stick around for the final shot. The protagonist is already strong, but like all of us will commit errors in judgement. He's not perfect. He can be biased. He will be wrong even. There are different sides to him. He will get stronger. Quick Shots: > Writing Quality: Decent. Author runs it through Prowritingaid too. > Story Development: Slice-of-life mostly. But there is progression. We already know what happens at the end, except for the details :P > Character Design: Primary focus on the Protagonist, however there are times where other characters also shine. Multiple POV. > World Background: Shares the same world as 'Races: Online' (VR Smartphone App) so it is developed enough to enjoy with unique features inspired from The Wandering Inn and other LITRPGs. > Stability of Updates: Not insane updates. Initially slow, but it will be pretty stable unless Author takes 'writing breaks' too rest hands and wrists from strains of carpal tunnel. Won't drop though. Note: Will go 'Premium' in the future. However, I also plan to include a free story in the Auxiliary Chapters, which you can probably enjoy without it being locked in exchange for Power Stones.
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priyabolagani
This is one great story I have come across. And also a different story where it has alcohols with potions. Just the thought is enough to make it different from others. All the best author!
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Ziiro101
"My potion is too strong for you to handle, Traveler!" Kdjxnckdknxkckcndkckcnfndkckmcmcksndkcodndkdokcndmsocockskoxckdnoxckdnkdkcpdkdmockdmd
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Deadra_Beats
hidden gem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AnnaMark
Great Author with another great work🥳... Unique concept along with new blowing ideas... And I fell in love with your thoughts and ideas about potions and I am excited to read more chapters. Thank you so much for such a great precious Work... I am sure this work will be definitely hit big and you will earn a lot more along with spirity prize... Congratulations once again Author... Lub u 😍
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TheBlips
Oh, Rachel! Rachel! Rachel! How can you write a male novel so well? You should teach me how to write ML novels! Anyways, I think the novel is funny. I like that the concept is unique. The writing is good too so, its a package! Goodluck! I hope you win SPIRITY!
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jonatham
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Grey_Turner
The whole concept feels fresh and has a lot of potential! The story is even a stand alone book or read with "Races" I recommend everyone to read this!
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kuhaku_sora
As always, RachelRuth has done it again! I really love your novels, especially this one. It's about potiooons. Who could have thought of that!!! I can't wait to know more about the story! Cheers, and best of luuuck for the contest~
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Destiny_Aitsuji
Po-potions and a-alcohol?! *drools* This is like the guilt-free version of everything I need in my life right now. While it doesn't have many chapters yet, it is still a good idea to bookmark it for a later date.
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