Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1 : Transmigration of the book Naruto : The Wind Calamity

I like the story so far, although the thought process was a bit too rushed in my opinion. I believe he accepted it too easily, although it did say it took 5 hours to get clarity. But I wish the thought process was a bit slower, something like where it takes him a while to figure what he will do and how many years for each event. The sudden "that will happen this many years from now, this will happen that many years from now" kind of felt unrealistic. I don't mean to be rude to you, but trying to give criticism. Sorry if the comment upsets you though.

so Itachi is 1 or 3 year older than him??

Put this in the Fanfic seaction

Great 👍😁 Keep it up

I have tears in my ears (not because of the chapter but its still a great chapter) we did Boys and Gals we got pass 2000 stones I'm been here since the beginning of the year ty for the chapter and have a good day

The flow of the book felt a bit rushed. But a good start so far. 😄👍

Starts good

Thanks for the chapter 🥰

Thanks for the chapter Author 🙂

good job!

I like the story so far, thanks

I thank you for the chapter.

Good job author. Thanks for the chapter

Let's see if this one is good

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So far, I like what you doing. I just hope my vague recollection of the Naruto anime I watched 5 years ago is enough.

Thank

Thank

Eh... Kind of meh, but rarely are the first chapters of transmigration fanfics really good, so I can't really judge too much from that, I hope the quality improves in future chapters... Something cool would be to rewrite this first chapter in the future, probably your writing has evolved over time and would make this first chapter more enjoyable...