Reviews of Mated To The Enemy: Loving The Wolf by Khawla_Amini - Webnovel

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aNim
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aNim

I'll admit, I have a thing for nicely written first-person stories! This is one such novel, and so far, it hits all the marks. Great and elaborate language, memorable characters... I want more!
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Wolfgirl1215
As a huge fan of vampires, and having written a novel about vampires myself, I cannot express how great it was to see such a well crafted representation of them. I love the concept of this, vampire royalty, touches of forbidden love... oooh it's great! The descriptive elements are fantastic, it's really engaging, and the author has a wonderful ability to make the story really immersive. Not to mention there are some great character dynamics which really add another level to this novel. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this will go!
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Prommy_Halibut
Okay, I'm not usually one for werewolf and vampire novels, but boy this got me extremely hooked in the first few chapters. I love Tiana and I think her character is really well made. I always enjoy a strong female lead! Also, just in general, the writing is just so pretty and the ideas of the vampires' powers are just amazing! Great work overall, and I honestly can't wait to see where your book goes! It has potential hehe[img=recommend]
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Sabrii_Williams
This book is actually really good, but the character development is crazy she becoming stronger; then I even imagine I actually think this is an amazing and good-written book.
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Cher_Yan
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
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Edel_Li
Okay, dear! This was an interesting beginning. The fact that you are setting the bg first is useful, so the reader knows a few points already. Vampire x Werewolf's stories are not easy as they are used by many, so I give you a point for your ideas. Readers, if you are into Vampire x Werewolf's, give it a try! Note for author: Please, take out the "POV" lines. Those are totally unnecessary. It's terribly redundant.
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Jo_J
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Jo_J

That's completely not my 'cup of coffee', but I like your style of writing. Always your characters are expressive and the plot is captivating. Besides, from the beginning, the reader can feel that you have an idea for all the story. All the best,
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Jake_Aroling
A good read, interesting fantasy elements and some classic werewolf action. This can definitely hold your interest, I highly suggest reading this!
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Mr_Empty
Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.
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BigMarch
This is well written with on the edge of your seat excitement & sweet romance. Love this book! Definite must read! Can't put it down! [img=recommend]
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DonDenis
good book so far with some interesting characters, like the idea, apart from few things the author will polish in time the technicality of the book is okay. Good luck author.
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silent_walker
She implemented her imagination well... Though I can't say much about the story as I've inexperienced in this genre. The review is on what I thought about the writings. There are several basic errors... but it could be solved with a few weeks of effort... So, study the art well. The grammar is on the poorer side... with lots of redundant words disrupting the flow... my advice is to use all the necessary application.... it helps a lot. But there will be few errors, so recheck everything twice or thrice before publishing. If you're serious enough... might as well look for an editor or proofreaders... or you could learn in yourself. And at last, I think, females would find this book appealing if you solved those problems GOOD DAY WRITING...
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Jin_Daoran
Love the gothic old-style melodramatic cover on this book, is the first thought that came to me, haha... In a vampire-werewolf romance story, very appropriate. Maybe a little less dark on the title font? A bit more silver-ish perhaps. The grammar is excellent, and that's not a small thing. The main character's voice is interesting, but as romance leads I like MC personalities to be immediately distinct. Though there's only four chapters, and most of it is still situational data, so I expect something more interesting to crop up in the near future. Star-crossed lovers, political intrigue, enemies to lovers, and supernatural powers - all ingredients of an interesting story! Good start! Keep on writing, author!
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Kikiyobear
Your story is off to a great start. There are a few points which made it hard to follow grammar-wise but none the less i havehigh hopes I'll once again enjoy cross-mating
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Author_Enigwe
Just my type of book. Synopsis :✔✔✔✔ Story development:✔✔✔✔ And interest spark :✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔ You deserved a five star rating because for me, this is exactly what I love. Fantasy Romance novels
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heyitsmejovi
The synopsis is interesting and quite catching. I am not really a fan of vampire stories but this novel got my attention that made read it. Looking forward for more exciting chapters, author!
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MatchaMilk
What can I say other than the fact this story pulls you in immediately. What I love the most about this is definitely the wonderful writing style that fits perfectly to the story. It's descriptive and we can feel the MC's emotions vibrantly. The concept and premise of this story is intriguing and makes you crave for more. The story also flows perfectly giving the reader a sense of allure. This has to be on everyone's reading list! Give it a try and you'll love it!
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Madym
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Madym

Well Done! Since there are only 4 chaptes in this work, I can't say much about the character development but about I liked the idea of "Basic Information" at the starting. It kinda gave a basic knowledge of the things inside. Now talking about the writing quality, I think it is good, understandable not so errors or typos so really easy to understand. The only thing I would like to complain about is the lack of chapters rn but since the first chapter was 6 days ago so can't complain much about that too. All in all it is a good work, you have done a great job author.
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Megana4
The synopsis is catchy and interesting. I’m a huge fan of the vampire/werewolf genre. The first five chapters engaged me to read again and again. The flow of the story is not fast nor too slow. The writing style is well written and the dialogue is decent and on point. The MCs are well portrayed. Highly recommended for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
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JustLikeWriting777
The plot is interesting as well as the synopsis. I like how it's going so far and I like the main character. Your story background is well-made as well :) I'll keep reading.
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Luzparadise_
I couldn't really say anything since it only has 4 chapters but this is really interesting and written really well. I love the first part on how the way you describe the race/types of the werewolves. This is pretty interesting! Looking forward for more chapters.
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Septic_Red
This story seems great. I like how you categorized the werewolves and explained a few races of them. Although, that part of basic information should be put as an auxiliary volume (I'm just saying). The MC seems alright, the grammar it is in a good shape and the plot seemed good enough.
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kuhaku_sora
The first few chapters are very engaging to the readers! The author lay all of the information that we need to know to read the story! I would like to add that the concept and the book cover is fantastic!
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Maryixxx
Wow! Such a great and well-written book! I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
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kenshilove
Good imagination of the author so it has so much potential. The prologue of the story is well-written and built. I would say that the story is about pro worlds.
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Nancy_Jim
This is a nicely-written first person narrative. Technicality aside, this book is enjoyable. The story goes indepth from the start to geer you up for what comes next. It's truly captivating. Nice job
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hansora
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hansora

I love the premise of a vampire princess fell in love with a werewolf even though I couldn't connect with first POV kind of stories well. This book has a good start and the writer elaborated the details vividly. The only downside is the incorrect words, using of marks etc, you should pay more attention on that. The FL was trapped in between her desire and duty as a princess. As the only royal child, she has to marry the man her father the king chose himself. This kind of setting often makes me think how pitiful the FL is. I hope to see how she break away from the clutch of having her life determined by someone else rather than herself. Next, I'm curious and eager for the ML to make his reappearance. I wonder if he feels something to the FL as well
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Bunny_Junnie
First of all, I have to thumbs up for your good story. I love this genre and so I fall for this story. Synopsis is the most attractive and it will attract anyone to read your story. First chapter is really well defined and it's understandable. Nice work! Keep updating and keep going! I appreciate it!
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kpthe1
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kpthe1

I love this kind of romeo juliet stories and adding the a werewolf and a vampire to that is a godsent. Interesting story line and the world backround is decent. Great work!!! waiting for more chapters!!!!!!
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meixiaolian
There are few errors of spelling but I gave it a five star review because it didn't cut my immersion of reading the book. the world-setting which is a great job done by the author and I also believed that the author could improve more. The first chapter is intriguing and good job author for writing it.
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