The writing, Story Development, and Character design are so great and smooth although the moment you introduces another character is a little weird. (in my opinion anyway)
ngl, this is good. the first two chapters are interesting enough for me to read it entirely. just mind where you should put commas, also noticed typos but besides those, anything is all good!
I've read this book and I am honestly impressed. the plot is doing well and is really interesting. the writing style also makes it easier for me to understand the story even more. good job author!! it's an absolute magnificent story.
its so good and catching well plotted and it makes you read more to find the mystery hidden in the novel. great job mate🥰🥰. i will be glad to have more chapters so excited.
Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. The words flow perfectly together making the read worth admiring. A great read.
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