I will now be uploading 14 chapters a week, that means 1+ chapters a day. Updates will usually be 2 chapters a day, but if I only upload 1 that means one of the other days will get an extra chapter.
Written: 30/06/2021
Hiatus is over you guys! Get ready for more action-packed shenanigans and misadventures!
Written: 01/06/2021
Extremely sorry but this will be on hiatus for a couple of days while I sort out some irl issues. I'll upload the same amount of chapters as the days I missed once I get back though!
Written: 24/05/2021
The book is amazing...author has written this book very well...plot, story background, characters are perfectly described...the author has done great job...highly recommended!
The progress of the story is overall great. The story development of the background is great. The classifications and depiction of the story will make the readers interested in the story. The synopsis is fine crafted to grasp the user's attentiveness. It makes a user remember the story plot and keeps aspiring for longer.
As well as the other reviewers say, this is on par with published books in the stores. The wordplay was so engrossing that it made my mouth to savour each word that came out of my tongue. Also the choice of words were accurate. Kudos!
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Pretty interesting story ngl, the characters are well made and the story doesn't have noticeable mistakes so it's a 10/10 to me. Read it it won't disappoint you.
Interesting and different idea. I did not notice any grammatical errors and due to the few chapters, aroused my curiosity for the next few. I recommend it to anyone who likes the genre! Keep up the good work!
Interesting premise. Writing quality is good. Story development is also smooth so far. World background seems cool as well as the character design. Do give it a read.
Wow, you sure know how to write the details. I can almost imagine what's happening in the story as a movie playing in my head. Keep up the good work man 😉
the first sentence is gripping is say, the world described was also giving great info to the mind's eye making the readers perfectly relate to the location of the character...[img=update][img=recommend]
I can picture the world very perfectly. The grammar is good and full of literary sense. Compared to other contracted novels on this site, it's one of the best. The only thing the author has to worry now is the plot.
Well written! Character is interesting, story hooks you right away. Pace is good, and plot is fresh and interesting. Keep writing, get above 15k words and I am sure you'll be ranked!
rewriting my review sinc you updated, story so far is amazing! the perfect mix of action and humor in my opinion hehehe, cant wait for the rest of the chapters!
I like it overall. Your play with words and how you describe the situations along with the background are spot on. Your character build up is nice too especially equipped with such nice choice of words. It's a chef's kiss for me.
This is a cool story and a engaging one! There are rich words describing the sentence, which makes the chapters interesting! I like it! Definitely going to add this in my library!
Your writing quality is really great. It attracts readers to read it. And the fact that you described the background as well as the character so well, deserves praise. Keep it up, author!
The flow of the story is overall great. The description of the background is great. The descriptions, as well as depiction of the story, will make the readers immersed in the story.
The synopsis is well crafted to grab the users attention. It makes a user think on the story plot and keeps wanting for more.
Very fine writing with the right amount of humour and detailed, vivid description of scenes.... it's a delight to eyes.... nicely written... You definitely have a shining and brilliant future !! Hoping to read a lot more from the author 🤩 Kudos!! [img=recommend]
Senpai, your writing skills is one of a kind, I really appreciate every words, it had an heartfelt rhythm to it. Overall, this pretty awesome. Am also adding this to library chest.
The way of ur writing is what makes me feel enchanted coz I lack this skill. The story is pretty much interesting as far as I see. Hoping to see more of this good content in the future. Just keep updating.
The writing is very tight. For a first novel, this doesn't read amateurish at all. I can sense some Joe Abercrombie in there and I'm a fan of stark and dry humor. Adding it to my library.
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