Chapter comments on the chapter Mage in Cultivation World [1] of the book Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

would be good if you would use a grammar program. You mess up tenses quite often and misuse words, which makes reading those sentences confusing.

one thousand years old grandpa yet still act like a teenager.

Hey … Um …. To be honest from just the first chapter I don’t like the mc’s character design …… He seems like a country bumpkin for a 1000 years old Sage . To be a Immortal- Magus is not a Joke …. Although author seems to be a noob but at least you should think a few more ways to make the character more smart if want to introduce him as a 1000 years old man . He could use spells to pry peoples talk or use hypnotic spell to make people talk , he should pry what the strange energy is as all wizards and mages would do …. And many more right away ….. overall the first chaps intro itself gives a …… you know

if magic can't be compared to cultivation does that mean that lucas will learn cultivation

thanks for the chapter

does he still have the sword?

Thanks for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

Well, who knows how excentric a 1000 years old immortal mage with suicidal tendencies from another world would be ? We can't judge him with our common sense. Does he have any reason not to act immature?

Well, at the end, most of fictional powers are just some kind of energy manipulation, unless we are dealing with powers regarding laws and concepts. I think them as the origin of energy, and many other things.

I really want to read this, but the grammar is bad. It's hard to enjoy. Good luck!

Thx

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yeah, it will be explained why he still have that kind of personality

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Thank you, brother. Good to see you doing this story

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"Absence of stupidity makes things unrealistic." "YohananMikhael" I heard if you can comprehend this quote. You will summon heavenly tribulation and if u survive that u will able to create worlds / universe with your own hands just like the author.

good to see that other people think the way i do magic and cultivation is not to be compared

alrigth Im hooked