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JustJoeKing
Amazing VR book. Great characters, interesting system. Rational characters. Up there with the best VR stories I have read .
Eagerly Waiting another few hundred chapters.
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_Dane
I'm making this when chapter 128 is out. The characters and world of this book feel so alive, each with a backround and personality you can really feel. The world is really thought and fleshed out. The quality is consistent and has been good for the whole time. I feel like with more time the novel will become really popular and succeeded as long as the author continues and gives themselves breaks when need be. I look forward to the progression of this book and would highly recommend it as one of the best reads on this site. I know my review doesn't do justice for this but I hope it will atleast help persuade ppl to read!
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DyaAran
This is awesome!
The writing quality is great. It was flawless. There were so many lines that could be made as quotes. The way Lorn sees life is on point.
I loved where the story began. The story was developed in a way that could attract readers immediately.
Since it's a video game-related novel, we can expect a very good world development as the story progress.
Also, Lorn is pretty much an attractive character.
It was a good read for me. I have already added this to my library and will continue reading to know what will happen to Lorn in the future.
Keep up the good work author!
I wish you the best of luck!
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Daoistl0mM19
Oh wow- there are so many things about this book. The characters are not 2D at all they are they feel so much more real than that and definitely much more supportable! This is actual GOLD!
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Bunny_Junnie
Yup! It's sooooo good. Keep it up author! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Freylingo
Late review but here's a 5 star, I think you fairly deserve it as the book didn't fail to entertain me as a reader, plus the writing is great there's really nothing I can complain the book is amazingly done.
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Nerdy_Joker_101
"Now comes the part where I relieve you, the little people of the burden of your failed and useless lives. But as my plastic surgeon always said, If you want to go, go with a smile" -- The Joker.
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POW
I'm happy with my work! It's very good!
If you disagree, you're just wrong! (for legal reasons this is a joke)
But anyway, if you have criticisms and things you think that are better changed, this is the prime time to voice it! The novel's short enough so I can actually fix stuff easily! (but please don't think I'll do anything you ask of me!)
When the novel becomes too long, I'll never change anything ever so don't lose your chance!
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ShoeInk
Read up to chapter 6. My thoughts are thus:
Quality: 5/5. Pretty easy rating to give, the writing and editing quality is superb. Not a jot or a title out of place.
Development: 3/5. Not to say that it isn't interesting, but there's a lot, and I mean, A LOT, of exposition and "telling" as opposed to "showing", though I assume that beyond where I stopped is better about it. Not that exposition is bad, it's just, y'know, abused a little. I'm just one of those kinds of guys that despise walls of text, sue me.
Character design: 4/5. I haven't really seen much of our main character other than his personality, which so far is pretty interesting.
World Background: 4/5. Other than a few glimpses of his interactions with those in the real world, there wasn't much, but I'm assuming most of the world-building will come in later chapters.
Overall, deserves a 4.2 in my opinion. Keep up the good work, it's got potential.
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E1even_
wow ok it's awsome. the quality and story is all good. it feels like im reading very popular novel. This story makes the readers want to keep reading.
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Freylingo
Love the concept of unlucky MC finding a way to solve a problem and encountering so much fun staff along the journey. The characters were well written, the plot is indeed intriguing. Definitely worth trying.
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LORDOFORIGINALINK
It’ s pretty interesting right now the mc has a mission and is in a tough spot it’ pretty good and leaves reader hooked
I recommend keep up the good work author
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Ice_Princesss
Your writing quality is superb. I love the way you describe the characters. The fact that he has a debt to pay and that his debtor's sold him reminded me of how brutal some debtor's are. The synopsis is short, but straight to the point and I like that. Overall, a great job considering it's only 8 chapters. All the best, author!
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JI_Ah44_LEE
The start of the book alone is already intriguing 👌👌
looking forward to read more about this book. Recommending this book people. keep it up writer 👌
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OneClaudia
I read the sypnosis first and ''sell him as a guinea pig!'' made me want to read this book even more and i did, all 7 chps btw and it was interesting to see the MC journey, hope he succeeds in his personal mission.
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Rayne_Rue
hey, guys please support this book !! this author's work is amazing .
I recommend this novel, keep it up, author.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Ultimatedaywriter
Its a good story about a guy down on his luck and looking for a way out. I'm not sure if the company he's working for will do right by him or liquidate him when its over. It was a fun read.
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