The story is very good. Really good. But when it brings together several universes such as Marvel, Harry Potter, Percy Jackson and God knows what else is in this place, the story became very heavy and full of inconsistencies.
Other than that, the romance is great. The evolution of Rose (I imagine her as Danielle Rose Russell) and the romance is excellent.
I don't know why some people even gave this a 5-star rating, when in fact, it's really really bad. Terrible grammar. Terrible dialogues, and a poor reading experience that would give you migraine.
I am now, officially rewriting this, I am still not the best writer but I can confidently say that I have improved dramatically since I first started to write, as of now, this stories, and all of my other stories will be turned into a NO HAREM Fanfiction, The chapters will get deleted and I will post a mass release when you least expect it. Then I will return to a stable normal schedule.
Female Harry Potter this story is, but she looks nothing like her Male Counterpart.
Mc X Rose
Have a good day.
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Um, I just want to say, that this could have been so much better, if the grammer was better, also the author seemed to forget about his wishes, and he rarely ever uses his knowledge to become stronger, however, I giver you a three star review because if you ignore all of the flaws, it can become a decent read, and I rather enjoyed myself reading this story.
author with negative qi, at least review your story, incoherent story most of the time, it says a parallel world but forces the plot completely. Stupid
horrible writing, lots of enchimenuo chapters to make it feel like a big story (30 or more), seriously... I found words like habbou or stundre. the idea of ββthe story itself is very good, but it was wasted in many degrees by this author.
I thought this was going to be a nice, no harem fanfic. it may not be but I stoped reading 1st chapter when he asked for "immortality for him and his wife/wives"
i HATE the way the dialogue is written,but other than that the story seems fine so far
but seriously,ARE YOU WRITING A NARRATIVE OR A SCRIPT?! you dont do dialogue the same in both!
Are you still going to do the mass chapter release???????????????????????
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I didn't write five stars because the out of place word sentences confuses me, but the story itself is very interesting, all the romances that I have read so far have never been developed, and is always fascinating to see a female version of the main character with reincarnated mc, I have seen a photo...and she was adorable, totally different then her male counterpart. I am looking forward to more
The story gets better later on, but this is pretty interesting so far, I will drop this because the author doesn't seem to be updating. If you do I will add it back into my library, wish you luck author.
I tried to read atleast 10 chapters before rating but I couldn't, the grammar nazi in me was about to go crazy.
The setup follows the normal isekai cliche, OP powers foreknowledge etc etc. I can't comment on the plot as I didn't make it far enough into the story. The MC follows the same path as other MCs, atleast within the first 7 chapters, saving the damsel etc etc.
The story definitely has some points that need to be worked on. Spelling, grammar, punctuation and capitalization. I highly recommend getting a beta to proofread/edit your work OR using Grammarly (it's free btw). The story has potential it's just getting drowned out by easily fixed mistakes. Please start editing your early chapters, a lot of potential readers will drop your story just from chapter 1 alone. First impressions matter.
Overall the story is good for a first-time author. With a little tinkering it'll be a pretty good read. I'll most likely come back and reread from the beginning to check for improvements. Keep on writing!
I am very sad to say this is not a white supremacy book. When I saw gran wizard I was very happy but once I started reading I was disappointed to find out that wasn't what the book was about.
(This is a joke)
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Its ok, but why did you drop, The story was going good the story was very good, why why did you drop!
ts ok, but why did you drop, The story was going good the story was very good, why why did you drop
The mc has op power of infinite magic but got magic
exhaustion doesnt even really use his other power.
The mc has knowledge of what Harry Potter but doesnt use.
He doesnt even train knowing of what is coming so he must have mental problems
An interesting story but your grammar leaves much to be desired. There are a lot of times I'm unsure what is happening in the story. There are some things I quite like though. Like the overall story idea and some of the ways you incorporate them.
Iβll be honest I was getting more and more pissed off Every chapter .
1. Rose having a Phoneix mother
2. Mc looking weak compared to rose
But the wrist that Author puts in ch 88 is ingenus which made me give it other chance
As a person that started writing my own fanfic on webnovel that incorporated a female version of Harry Potter, it was suggested to me that I check this one out and I did so The conclusion eventually was that I had no complaints about any of the categories I can grade on here. That being said, it's still not my preferred style. Just saying that I, as a reader, did not care for the manner in which the marvel crossover was implemented does not mean it is bad, and I saw no reason to punish the author with a bad review for a difference in tastes
It starts out pretty interesting, but the author ruins it by piling on more and more crossovers in a flippent hab hazard manner.
The story could have been very interesting but most of it is spend puzzling out what the hell the author is writing in the first place.
I'd have loved to see the author take the story more seriously and done a proper crossover between hp and mcu instead of whatever pops in his mind all the time.
It would have been less chaotic and better structured.
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