Armored Soul AS

just a trial to see if this would work. if you would leave feed back let me know what you think of the premises. if I get enough "yays" I'll fill out a plot line and chapter board. This is practice for another book I'm planning on doing so any help would be awesome.......please don't look as House of El it is rubbish and hurts my soul when I reread it. A rambling mess that I doubt I would be able to keep track of. Thank you for reading this leave your impression. My inspiration is the idea of Ronin Warriors the idea has alot to offer.