Cranal Lord first novel

This is my very first novel so I would love for you guys to give me advice.

Abraham is a man who came from nothing in the poorest country of the world and made something out of himself, but nothing lasts Abraham falls from grace and finds himself on the verge of death only to be transported to a world of cultivation full of demons and immortals. he promises to enjoy the second chance he gets and become more than he ever was starting with changing his name. watch how Abraham goes about living his life.

Don't expect op mc or a plot armor. The MC is a very calculative selfish one who will do anything to achieve his goal.