His and Her New Exciting Life

This is my first novel I'm publishing, if you have any constructive criticism please let a rip. The cover is not owned by me, if the author of this image wants me to stop using it please contact me and I'll take it down.

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Will lives a boring life in a small town dreaming of something exciting like a visit to a big city with the wonders it holds. however that's not meant to be.

A tragic event places him in a new world with a strange twist.