I Can Summon Golems ICGS

Kade gets teleported to an MMORPG like world with forty-three other beings not all from his world. They are given the task to beta test the world before it becomes accessible to their four worlds in a weeks time. Kade who has nothing to lose but himself decides to take this opportunity to make something of himself. Will he succeed or does fate have her webs too tightly spun around him?
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This is my first time writing so I am learning as I go. Please keep your criticism constructive and if you have praise don't hold back. There is a saying that says, "Authors are fragile," and that holds true in this case.