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Paul lives in a World full of People with Special Powers. He and his Clan don't have these kinds of Powers granted by the Gods. The consequences are, that his Clan has to suffer under the oppression of the other. But someday Paul decided to break free. To break free of the rules and oppression this world forced unto him! Will he be able to prove himself?
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This story is impressive! The words used to tell the story is so easy to understand and imagine. It's like you're in the world of the story itself and witnessing each chapters! I can't wait with the next chapters!
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Thw story is great and easy to understand. i like how the plot is that you starting from the bottom and are now trying to make it to the top. only problem on my side is that the chapters are too short. other then that i'd give it a solid 10/10
So far so good, the intro can still be better, but the plot's direction is already looking clear within the first few chapters. Hope the story keeps improving, as the foundations are already there.
This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this story will fare well in the future! Congrats author on the job well done! BTW, I am from review swap thread...good luck reviewing!
A novel with promising potential. the MC's story is quite nice it's hard to see an entire weak clan instead of a weak MC in strong clan. i'm saving this novel in library and advise others to give it a try as well.
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Me as the writer myself just want to say, that this Novel has a lot of potential. So please consider reading it. And then let me now what youre thinking! I'm reading every comment, and I'm also answering every Comment! So please ask, comment, review what you like and how you like! And i also want to thank you for all this great support! I may be young but my brain isn't !