Already read the Spanish version, truly one of the best fanfics out there, and one of the best naruto fanfics overall, highly recommended.
Character Development: Great character development and excellent use of already existing character's backgrounds to add them to the story and keep them there without disappearing.
Story: Great fanfic with quite an original plot edition, great comedy and a badass protagonist with a great and interesting background story.
Harem Members: One of the best characteristics of the series, the author somehow was able to keep a great number of females in the series giving each of them good development and keeping them active through all of the series, you could say that even the least important one of the harem appears quite a bit of times, the girls don't join just because MC is MC, there are steps to go with each of them until they decide to join all according to their original personalities of the cannon.
The only "bad thing" would be how the author will handle grammar since his original language is Spanish but then again, we Spanish readers will support.
Have a good read.
Greetings to all, here the author of the story.
As I said in the synopsis of the story, this is a story that was originally written in Spanish and I am translating it with Google Translate and helped me with Grammarly, so I'm sure there will still be mistakes.
Referring to my story, what I did was take the original events and modify them at my convenience, and with this, I can make a plot that is familiar and at the same time different.
The personalities of the characters are the closest to the original personalities of each of them, of course, I have modified them as well as the plot.
My protagonist, Kurama Uzumaki ... I am not going to talk about him because I want you to know how he is and has an idea of โโhis personality for yourselves.
Now the important thing, the speed in which I am translating this story is one chapter per day (In the worst case, I will upload 3 chapters per week). I can't translate anymore because I have to go out to look for work, write a chapter of my other story and do my personal affairs.
Thanks for all, epicccccccccccccccccccc story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I do not mid the edgy part at the start hoped mc would become better but it kept going downhill and the start was annoying enough no character development.
Okay, there are initial problems with the novel, I won't close my eyes to that, but... In a fanfic, I always look for fun, and I don't criticize the grammar too much, as long as it's readable. The point is, this fanfic is so much fun, I died laughing several times in it, and just making me have these reactions is a win for me.
Great fanfic though grammar is debatable but overall great dunno why people hate this after all itโs free nd better than 70 percent of the novels on this platform.
actually first 10 chaps are not bad, you get some taste of what to expect, after that japanease words starts to get annoying, after 20 unreadable.
story gets absolutely idiotic from some parts like evil minato, characters originally from naruto are completely different than we know them, its a chore to read it for me. dropping
Gostei muito mesmo, gostaria que tivesse mais fanfic assim, alguรฉm sabe se tem uma igual/parecida com essa?
Gostei muito mesmo, gostaria que tivesse mais fanfic assim, alguรฉm sabe se tem uma igual/parecida com essa?
I think the Author of this is not English speaking major as it had quite a lot of issues. I dont like the -kun and -chan in the names. I especially dont like the Foxy nickname and I think Minato's character just became something else entirely.
More than half characters are pedophiles and the story makes no sense at all. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Worst fanfic ever read.
To many unnecessary japanese honorifics that it make the chapter cringe
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Translation of huge Naruto FF into English. huge. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โไบไบไบ๏ผใ๏ผพฯ๏ผพ๏ผไบโ
FANTASTIC Read! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
hmm,, some relationships are forced as far as i can tell, and i dropped it because i cant handle the cringe..
its like ,, engrish version of japanese words, made me cringe everytime man..
someone would shout " BAKAAAAAAAAAA' cmon man,, just write idiot there why hurt me, ive nothing against you. and the jutsus were written in english with japanese words,, idk man,, not my cup of tea, i prefer " fire style: fireball jutsu" instead of "katon: gokakyou no jutsu"..
all in all, cringe killed me.
I have a question and it seems I can't get an answer any other way, is the Extra chapters side story or are they chapters that come after the main story like a continuation of the main story, I haven't read it yet I just noticed that it "ends" at 347 and I wanted to know if that was the end of the story or if the Extra chapters actually continue the story
Should probably add a furry tag, what with the MC gaining fox ears and a fox tail. Had I known he would be some kind of abomination I wouldn't have bothered with it.
it's a readable story but the messy timeline and messy character change to suit the story in a bad way is not a fun thing to read still i recommend it to those who don't have anything else to read
Unique story and well written however it was a bit to long winded for my tastes, also to much emphasis on romance and stuff. but if you are into that stuff by all means its a good story
Absolutely revolting. The pedo content is out of control. Example: Literally hours after the MCโs birth, one of the characters is hinting at having a sexual relationship with the baby. And the mom approved it.
None of the chapters act like their canon counterparts. The world is almost unrecognizable.
The MC has Fox ears and a tail which would be bad enough, except every other paragraph someone is bringing up the fact he has Fox traits. They call him foxy-kun or rub his ears.
The author must have some weird fetishes because the main character gets sexually assaulted many times in this fic. I absolutely detest this fic.
DO NOT READ IT. IT IS AWFUL.
it is a shame that I can't claim that the author (om webnovel) wrote this themself, howerver I am relieved to say that the time and effort put in to this translation (and eddeting the lesser written parts) paid of.
It gives a new view of the Naruto-verse and does't follow the standart eddited version of the orrignal that most fan-fictions use.
Over all I am greatly enjoying the book and am glad to see that I can still happily read the following chapters for a long time.
Sorry i'm dropping this, to much unnecessary drama in my opinion, most of the time i'm confused about what is happening when the mc meet kurama the mc tell kurama the naruto plot but when he go to the ninja academy he literally doesn't know anyone as if he never know the naruto plot.
Author i liked ur strory better than those shitty fanfics on wevnovel about naruto, who don't try get canon girls bcs afraid of messing strory while they don't relize they already did. ๐ keep it up:)
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