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KATAKURIROX
A great fan-fiction. Very well rounded with fantastic concepts. The grammar is near perfect and the character development speaks volumes of the author's writing skills.
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Medalha
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UsaTtoki
Still waiting for an update.
I've been rereading this over and over while waiting for that update which I'm looking forward to.
Everything is so well placed together. It's laid out simply and the development is smooth, but at the same time it's complicated. The MC does everythi g he can to apply changes and is far from passive. The quality of the writing is great and the plot is well-planned.
I'm looking forward to more and to see what else he would do.
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Tekorei_com
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h0zer
next chapter please? ............................................................................................................................................
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slayer2923
ONE OF THE BEST FANFICTION I EVER READ 100% I RECOMEND THIS TO EVERYONE
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Slesk
Author I don't know if you know but someone just shamelessly ripped off a lot of the concepts of your story for another fanfic and basically re-wrote it passing it off as their own. Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector is called and it's basically your fic with some alterations.
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Baneofthedragon
Truly marvelous work, i consider myself a critic and though i am not a very good one, i did get a degree in it nonetheless so i critic i am, i have high praise for this novel and i must say, quite the take on harry potter verse, amazing work on the characters from being bland and you seem to have a great mind in protraying the end goal, i'm impressed. My only regret and steep criticism is the stoppage of updates as i see here that the update stopped 3 months ago. I would really like the author to continue this novel and to contact me if your having any problems and to see if i may have a way of helping you so you may conti une on this endeavour. Thank you
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meetmonarch
I really hope this story continues on. It has been a long time when it was updated. If not , I hope author can Inform us.really missing it.................................,............
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bruce12
It was so good! Please finish it. I loved it and need it to have an ending. This muggle needs the magic of this story in his life without it I'll die.
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castanho
De longe a melhor fan fic de harry potter, a unica coisa que me desagrada e nao ter mais capitulos, a abordagem de como a historia muda da rota original e muito boa, e o protagonista nao e um cara que fica op do nada, ele cresce com o tempo e nao faz tudo sozinho.
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Daoist690716
Awsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee^eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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TheGeniuses
This is an awesome book. The story stays interesting. It gives us insight into the protagonist‘s mind. His actions can actually be understood and aren‘t completely random. He isn‘t Mary Sue as he has his own weaknesses and we get to know how he gets stronger and let me just say this it isn‘t due to lucky encounters - plot armor. What is even better is the HP universe finally gets a responsible actively acting ***** who isn‘t busy only dealing with his own sh*t but actually has the time to listen to minor characters, has a fully functioning moral compass he is actually willing to act upon. It‘s one of the best hp ff I‘ve ever read and a bonus is that it‘s not a harem. So if you are like me who greatly appreciates good world building, likes characters who have a clear motivation and are willing to work hard for it, cunning and decisive with a dash of a romance that isn‘t full of drama you will greatly appreciate reading this.
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dscot345
This is probably one of the best OC Harry Potter fanfiction I’ve ever read.it is so well done. It is great to see a story where the Muggleborn actually fight back organized and fight back and isn’t being saved by a pure blood or a halfblood but one of their own.
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Alexander_the_grey
I really what you’ve done with the characters and how you’ve developed the way someone could tackle the problems plaguing the British wizarding world. This is one of my favorite Fan-fic’s, not just Harry Potter but as a whole.
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Mohd_Zulhilmi_90
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MisterOtter
This was without a doubt the best HP fanfiction I have ever read. It added so much to the original story without going off the rails or having the mc be a side character. I hope the author is doing great with whatever they are doing now and I hope someday they either finish this story or write another one.
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TheRookWhoRemains
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Will_Caruso
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Haroon_Patel
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Spill
Just a better HP fic them I readed in all sites, amazing background and character design.
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Madanananam
Love the MC one of the best fanfic characters i have had the pleasure of reading about. I like how he naturally just fits himself in the lives of the other characters and how he actually cares about them instead of seeing them as pieces to defeat Voldy.
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Madanananam
Its a great book. The only reason I'll post anything critical or sarcastic is cause there are ways to improve in my opinion. The beginning felt a bit rushed and the characters aside from MC and Dumbles didn't have as much depth as they could have. But again great book. Love your work. Looking forward to the ending even though I'll be sad when I actually get it.
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DonnutHermit
It's amazing how an author can create a fanfic like this. Very diferent from most of the fics out there, this one has an original MC that does not know the entire plot via reading books or/and watching movies, the MC was a "nobody" in the first line untill he decide to help. It's nice to see an MC strugling with the discoveries and planing thing with the little knowledge taht he has.
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Astromus01
I only have one thing to say about this "novel"....... A WORK OF ART EXQUISITELY DRAWN AND PAINTED IN THE PLACES THAT HAS TO BE PAINTED. My congratulations to the Author for showing all his ability to create novels and I say that I literally create novels because this which I believe in my opinion is far removed from what HP films are and shows us a different perspective and I think better than it is the works of a great franchise as IS HP. I have nothing more to say. Saludos desde Bolivia Autor-San.
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DaoistLingMing
all i can say is that IT IS FANTASTIC. the MC of the story and the development of the story was epic. kudos to author hope he continous to produce more content like this in the future.
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adeskenjin
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reading1dao1god
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vicky111mudi
Hah....this novel is coming to an end and it is sad... But all good things must come to an end... I supposeHah....this novel is coming to an end and it is sad... But all good things must come to an end... I suppose
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