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monty6032
underbar everywhere kiling book when you listen it in app. Extremely annoying listen it hundreds Times in one chapter
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SahabaCloud
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
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akinsanya_ibrahim
The updating is too slow... I normally don't do reviews on post, but I had to do a review on this.... After the last chapter, I left for more than six months and only two to three chapters are posted... The story is very great and it's worth following but the updates needs to be a little faster
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Almighty_Chaos
Although the book is interesting the rate at which the chapters are entering can make it boring...quickly leading to people dropping this and you can just read this for free on the Lightnovel app
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Camoblast
great story, but author updates MAYBE once a month. Even on his Patreon, which is ridiculous. last I checked, he was making over $1500 a month for less than a chapter a month.
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Austin_Musonye_2340
Sorry to tell the author this but he is ruining a great novel in the aim of greed he hardly puts any work and releases four chapters a month and yet he is asking for such a high price for patreon. This is just a kind note but if he wants this story to grow and rival with others at top ten he should be willing to put In the work of at least releasing two chapters a day
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Konnor
If u could update more I would give u a 10/10.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Frizepize
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Xmegro
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siniestracalceta
if your looking for a Great World building and the most funny system interaction i have read to date, then this is your Must read, and personally, i love every chapter, and i recommend it to everyone, but i absolutely need more chapters than just 1 per week at best
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QoraShayton
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Phillybanks62997
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Essy_Atoo
Awesome story............................................................
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cerberus4452
The updates take a long time like 2 and a half weeks to get new chapters.
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cerberus4452
The updates are so slow. Like one chapter every two weeks
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Robinator1103
The writing and development of both characters and the world is very good. Little to no errors in grammer or spelling. Not to mention all of it is free. My only issue is that it updates really slow, but this is most likely due to making sure the writing is amazing, which, once again, it is so I am patient.
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ekatn
Debo decir que me encanta esta novela , el desarrollo tambiΓ©n es de mi agrado, esperaba muchos capΓtulos con el mc negΓ‘ndose a su sistema pero me gustΓ³ la forma en la que se acostumbro rΓ‘pidamente sin alargar las cosas.
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SaltedSwordGod
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SaltedSwordGod
Very good
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Crucial_tommy
Bro ur work is great. I mean I don't miss a single minute after it has been updated but your updating needs to be a little bit... Oh who am I kidding, a lot faster. Other than that, your novel is awesome in all possible ways man. ππ
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Cjya
writing: 5/5 so far it's good and you would understand them over your pov
Story Development: 2/5 since you know the update wasn't that stable that you would easily lose their plot.
Character: 4/5 so far, the characters were all good and they have this unique personality that would make you love/hate them at the same time
Updating: is decent, You see the problem is the Update but it wasn't like the others where they would just drop it because they were lost in the story or don't know how to configure them.
World background: The world background absolutely catch my attention, but I wouldn't say I love them, since the other place wasn't very detailed...
It's just my own conclusions...
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cerberus4452
the worst updating speed of all of time 1 chapter a week would be more then fine not one every 3 weeks. :) aaaaaaaaasshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhH hs
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SEISHOKU_SHA108
WOW I THOUGHT YOU DROP THIS BOOK
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Echo_Effect
It is very enjoyable to read, with many twists. While I do not like how every "development" turned out, it is one of my favorite stories on Webnovel.
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CrimsonLaw
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nikolatesla
SΓ³ good,,,,,,,,,.......................................................,................................................................................................................................,,.................................................................
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cerberus4452
Need more chapters every week not 3. :) .bgeuidicivufuiwududuudusufieiddufuudifufifidudueue7f7g7f7ueucif7r8v7if88r8fiuciiqifi0sofiic
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Dobrozlo
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