Webnovel Author: Lazyy - Fanfic Collection

Lazyy

1mth

Replied to Sokk3

Guess I just lost motivation for writing, mate. Honestly, I might do a re-write of one of my stories one day but who knows? All depends on whether or not I have time with how much work I've got with my job lately.

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Movies · Flaming_Lines

Lazyy

1mth

Posted

Started out pretty alright. Decent beginning of a relationship between the MC and Leah (bitter shapeshifter girl in the original Twilight movies/books), and I could see it becoming a cute and natural relationship...then the author got indecisive. Out of nowhere Rosalie is suddenly revealed to be the MC's mate. That's fine, I guess, potential for a similarly cute and comforting relationship with a lonely Vamp and then Leah and the MC can have a more sibling-like friendship. Then the author puts up a poll or something to decide who the protagonist ends up being paired with...and Leah wins. So a single Rosalie was added to the story for literally no reason and is relegated to a desperate stalker, pretty much. I'm not reading a story where the author lacks basic foresight on where they want their plot to go. It just doesn't say good things about the fanfics future. Not to mention the MC's main motivations are 1) getting high and 2) eating. He literally has no other hobbies or whatever. So, odd decisions by an indecisive author who seems to keep flipflopping back and forth between Rosalie and Leah (on who gets with the MC) and a boring protagonist...all together it doesn't make for a compelling story. I'd honestly recommend a re-write.

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Movies · Flaming_Lines

Lazyy

6mth

Replied to SoldierOfWisdom

Not every magic system. It's only recently that magic in certain forms of media (mainly anime) gives the user the ability to enhance their body's physical performance and even then its rarely permanent. Like Reinforcement in the Fate series, which is temporary physical enhancement. Traditional magic doesn't give you the option for a stronger body - just look at Harry Potter or DnD. You don't see Wizards or Sorcerers in those universes showcasing superhuman strength unless it's a racial trait and never with magic.

I nodded. "That's right. Apparently I would do great in any class, but they boiled it down to Magician, where I could rise to a High Ranker in no time at all, or to a Warrior, where I could make use of my natural physique. Of course, a man's passion lies with the sword, so I picked that."

The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory

Lazyy

6mth

Posted

Criminally underrated Chainsaw Man fanfic.Characters are great, you care about them, they interact in natural ways you don't often see on Webnovel, they actually grow as the story progresses--they're just good, well-written characters. Especially the MC. His growth as a character is amazing.Story Progression could do with some work. The relationship between the MC and his love interest is rushed at first, which was hella confusing because it came out of nowhere, but it does become more natural as the story progresses.Writing quality is great. Probably not perfect but I didn't see anything when reading through it and neither did any mistakes break my immersion (so there's no easy to spot mistakes).More than anything, this feels like it could actually take place in Chainsaw Man. It's not a one dimensional power fantasy where the MC drools over Makima or Power or Himeno and just breezes through life. It's difficult to properly explain but it's just dark enough to be taken seriously while still injecting comedy to keep things a little light just like the original Chainsaw Man series.

With Bare-Bones

Anime & Comics · grandsetter

Lazyy

6mth

Replied to beticok

Ah, yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for explaining it to me 👍

Furrowing his brows, Gal asked, "Really? Their brother managed to claw his way to the Rank of Saint without any natural talent, yet they pursued the mystical arts? Were the three of them not close...?"

Mushoku Impact

Anime & Comics · Einlion

Lazyy

9mth

Replied to PriamustheBright

A bunch of juiced up gymbro-lookalikes surrounding a fucking amazonian of a woman. Worst part? I remember her. The coach for the swim team, Nagiko Uwabami (A/n - from a work by Ando Hiroyuki; the one with the cat woman and the holy numbers are '444306'. She makes an appearance near the end) and an absolute babe. Sure, she's as pretty well-muscled as an athlete should be...but she's also got a massive rack and a fantastic ass. Not to mention, from where I'm looking, her muscles do pretty much nothing to detract from her feminine charms. But maybe that's just me and I have an undiscovered muscle mommy fetish...Who knows, really.

So What If I'm In A Hentai?

Anime & Comics · A_Pretty_Calm_Guts

Lazyy

9mth

Commented

Mommy...sorry...mommy--Ahem, anyway, I'm pretty sure this is who the Author is talking about.

A bunch of juiced up gymbro-lookalikes surrounding a fucking amazonian of a woman. Worst part? I remember her. The coach for the swim team, Nagiko Uwabami (A/n - from a work by Ando Hiroyuki; the one with the cat woman and the holy numbers are '444306'. She makes an appearance near the end) and an absolute babe. Sure, she's as pretty well-muscled as an athlete should be...but she's also got a massive rack and a fantastic ass. Not to mention, from where I'm looking, her muscles do pretty much nothing to detract from her feminine charms. But maybe that's just me and I have an undiscovered muscle mommy fetish...Who knows, really.

So What If I'm In A Hentai?

Anime & Comics · A_Pretty_Calm_Guts

Lazyy

9mth

Commented

ch 0 1 Regrets, Classroom And A Stark Discovery

So What If I'm In A Hentai?

Anime & Comics · A_Pretty_Calm_Guts

Lazyy

9mth

Commented

So, he's a typical manlet Japanese MC. That's a shame.

Height: 165cm

Doki Doki Literature Club: Breaking the System!

Video Games · Yamiru

Lazyy

1yr

Replied to Gulf_Alpha_Yankee

Looking at the gore I'd just committed...I really didn't feel like a human anymore. Which was true. Half of my bloodline is made up of two non-human bloodlines. Xenomorph and Fanalis.

Marvel/DC: The Fighter

Movies · Lazyy

Lazyy

1yr

Replied to Darth_Evolution898

I don't know bro, if you genuinely love someone, is it mandatory to beat them half to death? Abandon them and go have a kid with a bug lady? Nolan definitely makes up for his bad decisions but he still made them. Not exactly something Mark can forget easily.

He gave a fatherly smile that I almost let myself believe in, his deep voice matched with his comforting tone almost had me tearing up as he said, "You could never disappoint me, Mark. Never."

Invincible: How Does One Stop Being Vincible?

TV · DaoistBruceSmith

Lazyy

1yr

Replied to The_man_The_myth

To normal Humans? Absolutely. But when we're talking about bullet proof aliens with super strength and the ability to punch holes in continents? No. Ki weapons are good--great, actually--but that's because they're *Ki* weapons. Ki Weapons basically ignore durability if you have enough Ki pumped into them. Normal weapons don't have the same luxury.

Walking down a street heading towards a store was a very muscular man standing at 5'7". He has long spiky black hair reaching down to his thighs with a single shorter bang hanging over his face. He has red-irises and visible pupils with a fuzzy brown belt wrapped around his waist. His outfit is shown to be a red sleeveless shirt with black baggy pants and red boots with a brown backpack, a folded black scythe with a slight red hue across its edge on his back underneath his backpack, and a pair of black headphones on his head listening to rock music.