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Xyves

6mth

Commented

I hope you get better soon. And please edit the chapter after the "Bad News" so it wont mess with the Chapter order.

ch 55 Bad news : (

Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Xyves

6mth

Commented

the correct name to use here would be Isaiah since Valper doesn't know him under the name Kiba

"How do you like the final product of my experiment, Kiba? Considering that you are no more than a failed prototype…" Valper taunted Kiba, "Erwald Galilei is my perfect masterpiece…"

DxD: Infernal Destroyer

Anime & Comics · Addyctive7

Xyves

6mth

Posted

My Review will probably change in the near future or with more Chapters but I recommend you to use an App/Site/program to grammar check your text. I Dropped Chapter 8 into "Grammarly" the site I use, and it found a bit over 100 Mistakes within a 1014 Wort Chapter. 46 of which you could fix with the free version and within probably 3 Minutes of Work, the rest would need the Premium Version so don't mind them for now. I HIGHLY Recommend you to use a site to check your Grammar.

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Xyves

6mth

Commented

first time in his life? he already went outside last weekend to summon boss monsters though?

A long while later as I dealt with the Guild and Ganesha members guarding the gates to Orario I then for the first time in this life, left the city and headed south of Orario quickly in case there were Evilus members in wait for me. But luckily there was nothing and no one on the lonely roads leading to Orario that bothered me other than a random squad of surface goblins that broke through the forest I was traveling through to attack me.

Terrarian in the Dungeon

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

Xyves

7mth

Posted

The Writing Quality is okay, i have seen WAY worse but also better. The Story's Progress is all over the Place. Sometimes its rushing stuff and other times it's just dropping random knowledge to fill 2 or 3 chapters in. There are quite a few things that get explained with ridiculous reasons or no reasons at all. The Character of the Main Char jumps between 2 or 3 different "Personalitys" and the Story has no Concept for Time at all.

Card Apprentice Daily Log

Games · IGotStones

Xyves

1yr

Commented

i think there is a typo at the end. reunited while 5,000 meters apart. that would be round about 5 miles

ch 1360 Reunited 5,000 Miles Away

Fey Evolution Merchant

Eastern · Amber Button

Xyves

2yr

Commented

hellsing abridged refernce ?

ch 173 Chapter 173: Victor and Scathach. 2

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

Xyves

2yr

Posted

i like the story till now, it looks slightly fast but its okay but you have to slow it down a bit in the future. also im mad if that foxgirl dies 😂 doesnt matter if shes a demon or not. just "tame" her.

Reincarnated Golden Emperor

Fantasy · Evil_Dragon

Xyves

3yr

Commented

Maybe the MC can "gift" the spear to the Father of the kid in return for a favor. Like supporting him or something like that. Otherwise, it wouldn't be so great to have the finance minister against you because you stole their Family heirloom. Syrin has a blacksmith who could make him a few spears anyway.

ch 121 C116 [CLICK BAIT SEXY INANIMATE OBJECT?]

Second Chance: Summon System

Anime & Comics · AlienWarlord

Xyves

3yr

Commented

i really like the story so far. but please give Mu Wuying a few moments of happiness. i mean a spirit of love should deserve a bit love. and if im not wrong his villa still has a few empty rooms so he should be able to protect her. if he develops a relationship with her doenst matter much to me but at least give her the right to choose what she wants.

ch 64 The strength increases explosively (part 2)

Samsara Online

Games · XIETIAN

Xyves

3yr

Commented

Her mentor should realize that her flame and spirit are still there so she couldnt be dead. Her spirit at least would die with her. If the other two realize this is random or up to the author.

ch 164 Chapter 164: Mishap!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

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