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  • Perverted Otherworlder

    Perverted Otherworlder

    Fantasy

    4.3

    My name is Lyon, I'm 19 ,your everyday college student .. I got transfered to another world... I should be happy... yes.. I should.....but why am I crying ... ah yes... I'm on the balcony of some castle , the Queen is giving speech and I standing in front of her ... naked...

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Wallabalooza: Terribly, terrible start. It reads like it was written by an overexcited, careless teenager, both in grammar, presentation and content.
I looked at the newer chapters, and they seem better, but leaving the beginning half of your story in such an unreadable state is a great way to never get any new readers. The beginning is everything. I highly suggest you spend a bit of time going back to edit that horrifying mess of a start before you write any new chapters.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 month ago
I can answer but I won't answer :D

All I can say is let the story tell its tale. :) View More

The_Rad_One: I asked in the previous chapter but will this be another novel where the mc doesn’t get anywhere with the girls and just gets more? Thank you for the chapter

Perverted Otherworlder · C139
1 month ago
Thank You for the notice, I will report the issue.

Have a nice day! View More

wibon11892: Hi Big_Yellow. I'm writing to inform you that somebody has copied your story and uploaded it to Amazon. It is currently listed as "Lost in Another World", uploaded by author "James Bruce". If this isn't you, scroll to the bottom of the page. Under "Report an Issue" there's a tab asking "Do you believe that this item violates a copyright?" Click the blue Report link under that and fill it out. Alternatively, you can try contacting Amazon customer support.

Perverted Otherworlder · C133
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
First off, the plot is quite interesting for what it's worth. The ability to give a healing power may not be popular among its genres, but the author should be able to play it really well.

This is a good novel to read when you are in a cafe and enjoying your afternoon coffee View More
Days Of Future's Past
2 months ago
Reading Status: C0
First off, the leading quality of the story so far is the top-notch world-building. You can expect your imagination is enhanced by the author's wording. I can't say much about the story itself since is not that far off yet, but this is a good novel to read for general. View More
Rise of Myth: Heir to Valor
2 months ago

EyeStorm: Yeah finally 😂 I thought "sniff" "sniff" I thought Author san stop writing this

Perverted Otherworlder · C99
2 months ago
Thanks for your opinion and sorry for your bad experience. Yeah the first few chapters is indeed bad, i will try to edit it when i have time.

Thanks for the critic! Have a nice day! View More

DaoOfTheLonely: I tried reading a few chapters, but just couldn’t shake the feeling that this was written by a child. Quite a few problems in grammar, but more than that is how unnatural the characters act. Author, I guess you have some ok ideas, but wait until you hit puberty before trying to write.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Yes, i was sick for the last 2 days View More

NeetReader: So, is this novel still ongoing?

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Thanks for the response bro, Yeah the first 15 chaps or so were not edited yet,
My skill in writing is ... well... 4 months experience lol and I'm a slow learner
so sorry to hear your bad experience
If you can just pull through 50 chaps in, you might saw an improvement ... or maybe not...

Have a good day :D View More

KaneRafael: This is beyond trash!!!

I can't believe anyone who reads would actually see this piece of shoddily collected words as a suitable read!!!

It is not only a waste of time and space it is disappointingly poor in every sense.

No coordination in the writing.
World building is non-existent.
The characters have no builds.
The descriptive prowess of the writer is nothing to write home about.

This is a waste of time.

Do not read this.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Lol Lyon is not that pussy View More

Texan_Terrorist: Hope the MC will not be forever virgin, I've read so many novels that does that, and in Japanese aimed, you get harem but not ***, or at least ecchi.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Hey, thanks for the feedback, I see, I will try to improve it then, thx a lot

Have a nice day :D View More

waspish: This might be more bearable if it wasn't filled to the brim with nonsensical SFX. Looks more like the script of a would be anime than a novel honestly.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Hey, thanks for the feedback, I'll try to improve it even further and beyond

Have a nice day :D View More

21Trashy: I couldn't finish the first chapter, the writing quality was close to the same level as a automated translation. A 5 year old could construct better sentences. I have to reread most sentences 2-4 times to find out what the hell the author is trying to communicate.

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Yeah, I forgot to edit the early chaps, thx for the heads up. Have a nice day :D View More

blimko: Dog**** spelling and grammar. Its like MTL. As of chapter 10 or so, the world building is great though.








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Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago

Darkdelusion: In ch 15, he did not enter, did he?🤔 He was still wearing pant and seemed to be using outer flesh

Perverted Otherworlder · C44
1 year ago
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Perverted Otherworlder · C31
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: You want comedy? read this
You want true harem? read this
Perverted MC? read this
NOT DENSE MC? read this
OP MC? read this
Having a bad day? read this
Having a good day? read this
Having exam tomorrow and you don't feel like studying? read this
Parents are not home? read this
Why did I write this? read this
Okay stop. read this
STOP. read this
F*ck this. read this

Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago
Reading Status: C23
You want comedy? read this
You want true harem? read this
Perverted MC? read this
NOT DENSE MC? read this
OP MC? read this
Having a bad day? read this
Having a good day? read this
Having exam tomorrow and you don't feel like studying? read this
Parents are not home? read this
Why did I write this? read this
Okay stop. read this
STOP. read this
F*ck this. read this View More
Perverted Otherworlder
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: hey guys what happened to feng rao?

God Of Slaughter · C1074
1 year ago
hey guys what happened to feng rao? View More
God Of Slaughter · C1074
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: Fear and prostate to Evil Monarch
on a side note




PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS PREMIUM
PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS PREMIUM
PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS PREMIUM
PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS PREMIUM
PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS PREMIUM

Otherworldly Evil Monarch · C438
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: Wentian : "Survive? LMAO, by nigga"

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1067
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: Give up? Really?

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1053
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erotic Scenes? I'M IN !!

Stealing the Heavens
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: Give up? Really?

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1053
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: sleepless indeed...

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1022
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: the maid is qingcheng, prob 90%

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1019
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erotic Scenes? I'M IN !!

Stealing the Heavens
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erotic Scenes? I'M IN !!

Stealing the Heavens
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: I don't really care about all these premium or not, I just want to say thank you for the translator translating this.. I'm not a buddha or anything. I just a human being appreciating this work, so.. Thank You for bringing this story to us and keep up the good work

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1002
1 year ago

Big_Yellow: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erotic Scenes? I'M IN !!

Stealing the Heavens
1 year ago
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