Webnovel Author: Mithren - Novel Collection

Mithren

2d

Replied to yavier

I don't speak that language. Please be respectful enough to reply in the same language.

The eagle, diving toward the drone, was struck by the Pea Bullets and experienced intense pain. More Pea Bullets hit the eagle in succession, causing it to screech and lose some feathers. Realizing it was outmatched, the eagle cried out sharply, abandoned its attack on the Drone, and fled.

Super Invincible Battleship

Sci-fi · Diving Fish Out to Sea

Mithren

4d

Commented

Smoking is stupid."Smoking for fun" indicates a severe ignorance or stupidity.

Zhou Ning exhaled deeply, noticing half a pack of Su cigarettes on Doctor Liu's desk. He took one out and lit it up. He wasn't much of a smoker and had started smoking just for fun, but at this moment, he really needed a bit of mental relaxation.

Novice Forensic Doctor

Urban · Princess Xue'er

Mithren

4d

Commented

I thought there were three skid marks and only two checked... maybe I missed something

"Both admitted to illegal racing on the Northern Outer Ring Road, betting on who would win Su Manli. The loser would back out. Neither, however, confessed to hitting anyone.

Novice Forensic Doctor

Urban · Princess Xue'er

Mithren

4d

Commented

lol. -2

Forensic Doctor Level: -2

Novice Forensic Doctor

Urban · Princess Xue'er

Mithren

5d

Commented

*Shop not show

"Show Owner Jun, wait a minute!" It was little Wei, whom Jun had not seen for a while.

Cultivation Starts With Selling Talent

Eastern · Cryo_Knight

Mithren

5d

Commented

That herb selling kid would be a good choice. Sure he'll have to wait for a return on investment but it's a good choice

Jun acquired this talent scroll recently and planned to use it to recruit an alchemist for himself.

Cultivation Starts With Selling Talent

Eastern · Cryo_Knight

Mithren

5d

Commented

missing a word here

Many Qi Condensation Realm cultivators have to for many years just to be able to afford it.

Cultivation Starts With Selling Talent

Eastern · Cryo_Knight

Mithren

5d

Commented

A price of tokens. Does this mean it's a talent he can buy and then sell?

[Sword Dao Talent (mortal grade high-level): Sword dao aptitude increases by three times. Sword type techniques comprehension increases by 50%. After absorbing this talent, anyone will be able to reach the level of a sword cultivator. (Enhanceable) (Price: 40 tokens)]

Cultivation Starts With Selling Talent

Eastern · Cryo_Knight

Mithren

6d

Replied to Moon_The_Femboy

My comment is still valid regardless of the points you put forth. It is redundant. Efforts to clean up, proof read, and otherwise improve the presentation of the story makes the read more enjoyable for the readers and helps the story do well. I however wonder if you're possibly an internet troll as you've kindly demanded that I "sush up" and otherwise attempted to invalidate my opinion. Should you be a troll I ask you attack with great creativity and fever as I'm a bit bored and welcome the distraction. In the off chance you truly meant no offense I'm game for civil discourse

Chapter 2: Archer (2)

Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top

Games · HomieLv1

Mithren

6d

Replied to Jacob_Kerner

That's true when walking. The author has it running. A bears hips and supporting musculature are not designed for bipedal movement and thus makes such movement clumsy and less powerful.

The Black Bear was truly frightened of the human's cunning, to the point it turned and ran.

Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points

Eastern · Smoke Painted

Mithren

9d

Replied to Kingspence999

The guy did end up following up with a comment that he was trying to do sarcasm and meant nothing negative. I think he was aiming for funny/sarcastic but missed the mark. But yeah. Many people seem too eager to make their 'bit' that they fail to take the time to think things all the way through. I myself am occasionally guilty of this as well even though I try to avoid doing so.

Exp- 4/20

Legendary Shelter Survival Guide

Fantasy · sahejRocks

Mithren

9d

Commented

bears can't run on two legs

Although it was down to two legs, its fleeing speed was still astonishingly fast.

Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points

Eastern · Smoke Painted

Mithren

9d

Commented

it can't run with two limbs

The Black Bear was truly frightened of the human's cunning, to the point it turned and ran.

Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points

Eastern · Smoke Painted

Mithren

14d

Commented

Math isn't 'that' difficult

To be honest, when Yan Fei saw the extra 20 million cash in his bank account, he felt dizzy and could hardly believe that he had become a multimillionaire overnight. Once the demolition was completed, he would immediately receive the remaining 80 million in balance, becoming a true billionaire. Others might not earn so much money in their entire lives, but he had obtained it effortlessly, and aside from thanking his parents, he had no other thoughts.

Super Invincible Battleship

Sci-fi · Diving Fish Out to Sea

Mithren

15d

Commented

Eagle's don't hunt at night. Owls do

The eagle, diving toward the drone, was struck by the Pea Bullets and experienced intense pain. More Pea Bullets hit the eagle in succession, causing it to screech and lose some feathers. Realizing it was outmatched, the eagle cried out sharply, abandoned its attack on the Drone, and fled.

Super Invincible Battleship

Sci-fi · Diving Fish Out to Sea

Mithren

15d

Commented

So at most an hour a day. Seems too limited to me but does give room to grow

Of course, if the flight wasn't operating at such a high intensity and the speed was reduced, the drone's flight duration would extend appropriately but definitely not exceeding 1 hour. Once the Energy Points were depleted, the Drone Avatar would enter standby mode, unable to operate further until the Energy Points naturally recharged.

Super Invincible Battleship

Sci-fi · Diving Fish Out to Sea

Mithren

15d

Commented

I dislike that. In my opinion it'd be better if he actually charged it. like through physical contact or with some kind of cost

Energy resembled the drone's battery power, representing its range and operational capabilities. Flying and other actions would consume energy, and if the energy points were to be depleted, the drone would enter standby mode, unable to perform any operations. Energy points would automatically restore to 100% at midnight every day.

Super Invincible Battleship

Sci-fi · Diving Fish Out to Sea

Mithren

17d

Commented

He receives no money. How is he to leave a copy? Writing materials weren't cheep in feudal society.

Therefore, after leaving ten basic martial arts manuals at the auction house, Ling Xiao returned to the Ling Family to heal his grandfather, which was crucial.