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MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C6
I promise that's the last, with all the explaination you wanted.
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Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
Relax bro whatever i don't have thé détermination to keep doing it, i already told you that the characters like : oh trash or the servant who bullies makes no sens, they ré not interesting just lack the fiancé who drop him and it would have been the perfect cliché xianxia
Anyway bye bro delete my review if you want WE won't ever see each other anyway View More

Demonic_angel: Either show me how it's written or stop telling me how it should be written when you don't even read it

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
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Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
You can't, but there should be a beggining and yours was bad as hell. Whether it' the granpa, the member sof the clan or the mc they were ugly View More

Demonic_angel: Your 4th point , so I can develop deep characters in just 6 chapters .

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
No use for your sarcasme, being able to say if a novel is good or not doesn't mean you're good to write yourself. I stopped this story long ago, not enough determination to keep doing it. I never pretended being the master of writing. You're showing what's hiding behind your little shell eh. View More

Demonic_angel: Why don't you continue your story king of ant. I want to see the masterpiece skeleton of your story

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
Okay then i will also keep it simple

1°) I used ****ty because you deleted my first review, in wwich there was no insult, only saying it's bad and cliché. Insult to every author come down to earth bro, you're too high in the sky. Was it civil to delete my review, even if you don't like it ?

2°) I can judge because i've experience, if you had the same as me you wouldn't say that. You're not able to face reality ? Sorry not my issue. I don't give advice because i can't give any, it's not about the flesh of your story (which alsoo seem bad) but even the squeletton itself is corrupted and broken. It's like if someone jump from a bridge, break his leg, and then ask you why you didn't give him adivices about it. You still want one ? If the idea is bad from the begining then the best may be not to do it at all, satisfied ?

3°) I am not allowed to have expectations on the quality of what i read/eat/learn ? My experience has a price, i have high standard of consommation. You said that many people would like it and of course it's true, but it's only so because theyre not used to xianxia, after a feww years they would find it just as bad as me. I'm not being prententious, i''m not the only one with this experience, there are plenty others, but many wont even take the time to make the review when they find bad novel like your own. That' why you're so high scored.

4°) I'm not happu to criticise someone effort. I understand that you worked many hours on that, and yet again i'm sorry that i have to give you such harsh words. Maybe you only write for fun, but i have to review your story just like if you wrote it intending to publish it later or anything like that. So i will be truthfull and say it again, your story is bad, and will only be apreciated by this young and inexperimented public on the web, it has not chance of working other way. Something can be cliché but feel nice with elements like deep characters (that's an exemple yet again), but yours dont possess it. If you really intend to mae writer your job and use this book then you should write it again and again, because there are far too much issues.

5°) I hate numeroting my arguments.

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Demonic_angel: I'll keep it simple here

1) Your judging a book with words that are blocked like ****, is an insult to every author if you're doing it just after reading initial 5-6 chapters . You should atleast keep things civil or give suggestions about to improve the story.

2) No matter which story you read. Don't judge them too soon. It's not an essay, it's a long novel that will have it's ups and downs. I already mentioned that the story improves after initial chapters in the sypnosis if you even tried reading

3) Don't put your expectations on me about making what you want. there are many who don't want what you want. That's why there are positive reviews as well. Mostly from those who read 30+chapters

4) If you feel happy criticising someone's effort without giving them even a chance, then I'm happy for you. Keep it up

That will be all

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
I''m not a webnovel editor so what ? Do i havve to be an historian to know history ? Physician to know physic ?
Do you know that when you send your book to an editor, they read less than 7 pages to know whether it's **** or not ? So 6 chapters is enough after 4 years reading novel, i have thousands in my asset, is that enough of a background ?
I don't even make the effort to know your MC name beauce it's so bad and cliché, they're all the same ****ty xianxia, only the name change.
You don't stop making sophistry, it's ridiculous. Do you even know hat chunni mean for god sak. View More

Demonic_angel: So you're a webnovel editor with writing experience. I should've known with your detailed review about "Cliche idea" being the Reason

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
go ahead i told you i will write it again. It's not made to be a masterpiece so what ? You could have done a nice little xianxia a bit cliché and with deep caracters, i woouldn't have said anything. But here, it's bad, what do you want me to tell you ? Lie ? Also 6 chapters are enough to know whether it's good or not wwhen you have a bit of experience. View More

Demonic_angel: Since you just read 6 chapters out of 60, I'm going to delete it again. You can't judge a book by its sypnosis

Rise of the Demon God
2 weeks ago
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2 weeks ago
ah consanguinity View More
Rise of the Demon God · C5
2 weeks ago
it doesn't happen actually, only in ****ty chinese novel. View More

Chickennugget: I don’t ever get why these servants in big clans act like they’re above the young master of a clan when they become crippled or have no talent. I’d get it if they despise that young master if they were assholes to them before but cmon this is an 8 year old who most likely treated you well, why are you despising an 8 year old child who hasn’t done anything wrong?

Rise of the Demon God · C4
2 weeks ago
really gran** uselss View More
Rise of the Demon God · C3
2 weeks ago
What a bunch of useless people grand father and the other, fail two times to top assassination. View More
Rise of the Demon God · C1
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C22
2.8; MC hypocrite yet again. He kill the ape because he is his ennemis, in his opinion you must not let your ennemis become stronger right. But 2 chapters before that he was giving advice to a girl who is inside his ennemis tribe (yes he want revange they are ennemis), knowing that it wwill make her stronger. And then he tell her : i don't fear you becoming stronger, you can only become strong by fighting strong ennemis.
This make no fucking sens right ?
I can tell where it's going; i don't like it. He is full talk no action. View More
Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series)
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C8
Many plot holes. There is no sens in invading America, christian will end up corrupting too a few hundred years later. Also, would the american gods let such a thing as stranger gods coome here and makke their law ? Why is Apollo able to manipulate time itself ? Why didn't he do it before that ? Yet again with his powwer, he could ust become emperor and invade toward asia, it would be easier and more interesting.. There is no challenge and interesting things for Roma in America. View More
Nova Roma
3 weeks ago
corpse = dead body, not living body.. CRRECT It; View More
A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C52
3 weeks ago
Teenagers : I feel like the world is too dumb to understand me. Perfect i can feel how chuunibyou this whole thing will be. View More
What's A King Without A System? · C2
3 weeks ago
Bro this conversation is stupid i feel like i'm 12 and comparing my dick with your. I was dumb enough to enter the game of a trisomic like you, forget it. I just meant to say that it makes no sens to tell me : lvl 6 aren't saying anything while you dare as a level 5, you should just shut up. You're a moron you act like those young master in **** xianxia. View More

Daoist_Void: I've done reading so many books outside this app, but did I say that infront of your face? You're lvl 5 because YOU ARE lvl 5, and that's what people see. It's stupid that you say that knowing you got NOTHING to back you up.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C77
1 month ago
Are you some sort of retard ? What the hell does being lvl 5 have to do with me saying it's **** ? Are you somehow trying to tell me that you think i have less of an experience with reading books because i'm lvl 5 which is less of a background to talk compared to 6 ? Because if that's the case, just so you know, since a year ago i already began to read on the official chinese qidian by using google translate, i'm not even in this webnovel website that much now. So my reading experience is WAY HIGHER than being lvl 6 Okay ? Whatever bro seem stupid to talk like that. View More

Daoist_Void: You're lvl 5 for **** sake, yet still arrogant as fck, do you see any lvl 6 readers talk like you do? Eat your useless pride and admit your fault

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C77
1 month ago
Bro what the hell are you talking about in the end ? You just come to me tell me it's a realist story so it makes no sens to have a body which can't bleed and after you tell me it can be done if MC can be an angel. And now for whatsoever fµcking reason you come to me with : you're narrow minded just like Donald Trump. You seem to be American so i will explain why YOU are narrow minded. The 80% world don't give a fuck whether it's bitch hilary or fùcking donald okay ? You're not the fùcking center of this dam world. View More

PRLXThanatos: So your crying because someone views the world differently than you? Basically your a less successful version of Donald trump...

The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
Bro what the hell are you talking about in the end ? You just come to me tell me it's a realist story so it makes no sens to have a body which can't bleed and after you tell me it can be done if MC can be an angel. And now for whatsoever fµcking reason you come to me with : you're narrow minded just like Donald Trump. View More

PRLXThanatos: So your crying because someone views the world differently than you? Basically your a less successful version of Donald trump...

The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
Oh you're not the author sorry wrong person whatever, a part of my answer is still good for you. View More

PRLXThanatos: You do realize this is for all intents and purposes a real world, this isn't some cartoon, he may have gamer body but he is also a human being, maybe if he becomes an angel through his quest reward then he may not bleed, at least not to a normal zombie but again this is a fan-fic and the zombies may evolve as in "the walking dead" animals didn't turn (I think).

The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
I don't understand. You're telling me it's a real world, not some cartoon, but give the MC the power of a popular cartoon. It's a fanfic, as such it would be logical for me to think that the power would be the same and/or employed in an interesting way. You can become whatever you want bro, but don't tell me it's ridiculous to have a gamer body (with rules already told by the cartoon, from which you took the power) and not becoming an angel. It makes no sens bro. So what if the zombies evolve, what the relationship with the fact that you're telling me that he has The Gamer power, but somehow different. I though you would follow at least the two basics power of the gamer so when i saw you make errors i though i should correct you. But since you invent the way you want for your own reason, then who cares. But at least try to precise that it's different. View More

PRLXThanatos: You do realize this is for all intents and purposes a real world, this isn't some cartoon, he may have gamer body but he is also a human being, maybe if he becomes an angel through his quest reward then he may not bleed, at least not to a normal zombie but again this is a fan-fic and the zombies may evolve as in "the walking dead" animals didn't turn (I think).

The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
If in world of warcraft you get bit on your shoulder, does your personnage get his shoulder taken off by it ? No. It give you an icon saying that you received a bite, that it corrumpt your being or **** like that and that's all. You can't cut a led or an arm in world of warcraft, am i wrong ? How does it show you're bleeding ? By an icone. It doesn't show on your personnage. If you have the gamer ability with the gamer body then you don't bleed and you don't get broken bone. It's said in the 10 first chapter of the gamer i can't believe you didn't even understood that. It makes no sens ? Of course cause it's fking game bro. That's why it's a broken ability. Also, monster show in your map as a gamer. The gamer ability is from a MMORPG, not any other sort of game, that's all. Yes but buff is shown as an icone not in the actual physique of your personnage. View More

JakeElliott: Like you're telling me that if a zombie literally bit his shoulder there'd be no mark to heal overtime? It would literally never be there in the first place? Like what a load of bollocks that is

The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
dumb was about the situation, i just made a review, it answer your issue. View More

JakeElliott: Mate.... it's a fanfic, plus in games characters do bleed and do indeed have wounds, they heal over time naturally with HP etc....

Like I dont get why you gotta be a dick?

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C0
1 month ago
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The Walking Dead's Gamer
1 month ago
dumb he can't bleed he has gamer body View More
The Walking Dead's Gamer · C0
1 month ago
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