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I mean they did send spies to his home nation, poisoned a lot of their agents to control them, and repeatedly sent assassins after him and his parents. Plus China and Japan don’t really get along anyway View More

SayOof: i hate Chen
He is such an asshole
what is his problem with japan damn

Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms · C459
5 days ago
I dropped this story for awhile after the other worlds bs then came back to read it when I saw it getting back to DBZ universe, but it seems like the author has taken a huge dive off a cliff into this bs. I already was kinda tired of his personality before the world skipping but it’s gotten so much worse. Now I’m dropping it again and won’t be picking it back up later cause it looks like there will be no improvements whatsoever. Bye 👋 View More
Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago

Draj: Yeah it was more like internal dialogue ,i skipped and skipped and b4 i know chapter ended

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago

Lucien7: this is so disappointing I don't even know what to say

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago

GreyPhantom: True, I wanted more interaction betwen Broly and the Z fighters not with his recruited army.

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago

killercoolie: It's like the story started off good with a serious tone plot and everything but ever since he left the dbz world it's just so bad it definitely fell off from one of my favorites it's like everything is taking as a joke especially the addition of characters from other animes which is definitely unneeded

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago
Honestly I’m not a fan of the recruited army. Or all the alpha and beta male bs. Or all the random self compliments taking up entire paragraphs if not the entire chapter. View More

GreyPhantom: True, I wanted more interaction betwen Broly and the Z fighters not with his recruited army.

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C123
1 week ago

Snowstar: 1. Change it to Tensei-RinneSharigan

The Sharingan Hyuga · C0
2 weeks ago
When are you going to start posting new chapters again? View More

Prince_of_Sin: I don't know. Honestly, I don't feel that my writing is at the level where I could ask for money to support myself.

DC: Vampire · C10
3 weeks ago
It’s been close to a month. Please don’t drop this. I want to see where mc and poison Ivy’s relationship goes View More
DC: Vampire · C10
3 weeks ago

Denzel_theking: This guy is taking years to copy someone work without changing anything I hope its cause he is doing extra chapters at the same time cause it may be best he just drop it earlier if not

A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C5
3 weeks ago

Saadido_: Keep in mind I only got to ch.20.

Really f'n boring. The beginning was promising 'like woo a system story, this will be a fun little op trot through the dc comics.'

Nah, the author is kinda not that smart. To give perspective, he thinks humans use less than 10% of their brains type of not smart.

The author time skips the whole training arc! Any character growth, story progression, attachment to the characters, everything absolutely crucial to story telling is thrown right down the toilet. And the worst part is there's zero scenes where the mc works for any of his advantages, so the character is instantly unlikable.

Then suddenly There's a ten chapter paint drying extravaganza of a skirmish in which the Mc doesn't even participate only characters introduced during the chapters.

It;s clear to everyone reading that this author thinks writing works like a movie where flashing lights and beautiful girls can carry the team like a diamond 3 boasting silvers, but nah m8. Flashing lights aren't impressive as dry letters on a page.

Don't get me started on the dialogue. That thing is written by a 1990's AI attempting human speech while running on a toaster. Bad.

This is actually kinda sad.

The good parts are the premise and the grammar is passable. That's about it.

How to fix this mess is easy. First you have to realize that the reader can't see the cool bits and bobbles happening in your head. The cool stuff your mc does should be written down the mistakes that have an effect on him should be written down. The same goes for all important characters.

Sex appeal is a crutch you can lean on pretty easily.

The first arc is meant to sell your reader the characters and premise you created. Keep it simple. Less is more in this case.

Characters should be as human as you can possibly make them. Even the epic heroes of the past still have fatal flaws and personality.

Keep reading good books.

Last but not least don't stop writing any skill is impossible to perfect the first hundreds of hours you spend on it, but that's the toll you pay to maybe become the next J.R.R. Martin or Tolkien. Maybe even Rowling but try not to go too insane like that one.


Hope this gave you some much needed criticism author.

In the DC World with a System
4 weeks ago
It most likely won’t get anything really new or different till after the chapters from the previous author is finished being copy and pasted. I can wait, although I would still agree with a previous commenter, “Why does it take so long to copy and paste something that was already done?” And I’d have to say that although I like the story and support it, I won’t be using my votes for this story till it finishes the copy and paste and start adding new stuff after that. In case the author decides to drop it from the same chapter or earlier than the previous one. Also it’s a Percy Jackson fanfic, so there’s no need to add modern stuff or stuff from DC, just keep up with the current status and build. View More
A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C4
1 month ago

Nirvanic_Sun: It took this long just to copy paste someone else's chapter? Will it take a year once you have to make your own plot?

A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C4
1 month ago
I think Hades should marry Hecate instead of Persephone in this story View More
A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C3
1 month ago
Well at least we got a notice. I just hope it’s not like the other stories I’ve read where similar situations happen and the author gives a notice with a time the story is supposed to start up again but then a year goes pass and still nothing View More
Kaiju King Among Bijuus · C0
1 month ago

Pavan1234: I read upto 7 chapters until now. But in that short amount of content, I found several things that ruined my reading experience of this story. They are

A) the adopted father that teaches the Mc summoning magic. The method of teaching is 'stubborn teacher(with low IQ and efficiency) teaching a naive student' cliche.

B) it took him 1 whole year and 99 defeats to realize that he needs to summon weaker monsters to shorten the summoning time (this type clichéd shounen story rubbish that ruins my reading experience of fantasy stories).

C) a girl in their school invites him to join their society/club despite knowing that it might cause him more troubles and her over-reacting arrogant club-mate objecting to on his invitation exaggerating manner (clichéd manner, that too in library).


Stubborn/stuck cup teacher, naive shounen Japanese type Mc, trouble bringing supporting characters and arrogant side characters. These are clichéd plot points that ruins a stories these days and all these are present in first 7 chapters of this novel.

(Maybe I read to many Japanese stories developed a revulsion to them.)

Summoner Sovereign
1 month ago

HasaDigaEebowai: If you like Stockholm syndrome FL with "Genius" ML who thinks r@ping FL is okay then this novel is for you.
Well atleast in this novel the FL considers calling the cops on the abusive ML which I guess is a huge step forward in C Novel who know maybe in another 10 years the ML might actually have to go to court for the abuse

The Bumpy Road of Marriage: Divorce Now, Daddy
1 month ago
Plus everyone would treat him as a BOW or experiment and try to kill him. View More

Soafa: Resident Evil! I've looked for a good fanfiction of RE but I haven't had much luck. I'd love a RE fanfic. Though your MC is way to powerful to make it interesting or challenging..

Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago

Majeh7: DC then naruto

Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago

Musson: yu yu hakusho demon tournament ark

Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago
Resident Evil, Prototype, Dark Sector, Star Craft, Naruto, Bleach View More
Blue Devil · C0
1 month ago

NovelMonster: I think it’s because Nick is usually playful and doesn’t usually act like a dick

Blue Devil · C42
1 month ago

Scareraven: This chapter was... strange?... I don't know but it was different from the other chapters you write

Blue Devil · C42
1 month ago

Chronus12345: Is Nick going to fix his relationship with Felicia?
because it wouldn't seem good to me to end that relationship as with Aunt May

Blue Devil · C42
1 month ago
I thought the same thing View More

Scareraven: This chapter was... strange?... I don't know but it was different from the other chapters you write

Blue Devil · C42
1 month ago

Luisyfer: Trying to guess who's the Mc among them..
You should've made this awakening ceremony into 1 chapter.. It took until 7 or 6 chapter on this episode.. Or is this an arc?

Douluo Dalu III - Legend of the Poison Emerald King · C7
1 month ago
Thanks View More
Kaiju King Among Bijuus · C13
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1
I only gave it this rating cause I haven’t gone through the whole story yet, but right off the bat it needs major editing. A whoooooole lot of editing. So many typos. I would recommend the author to use Grammarly or something similar. View More
Reincarnated Godzilla In Remnant
2 months ago
Why is it that I got a notification that this book updated 6 new chapters yet only 1 was available to read View More
Rise of The Undead Legion · C329
2 months ago
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