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reincarnated mc is too emotional.

I don't know if it's just me but I feel the story has unnecessary actions and complications to try and make it more interesting. It feels Off. I can't articulate it well so my analogy will be its like watching a movie with a really dull start and anticipating the moment when it truly captures your attention but the moment though feels near isn't coming. the book is good but It lacks something I can't quite put my finger on.🤔

from being a cool customer to being flustered at every turn after all ur past life experinces it shoul at least not show outwards

from being a cool customer to being flustered at every turn after all ur past life experinces it should at least not show outwards

Extremely stupid and the whole "I got the the system to improve the nation." is just nonsense. If it was to improve the nation why did a child get it instead of one of the military scientists?

this book is too fast paced and too focused on the mc's ability plus it feels similar to another novel titled treasure hunting tycoon

my heart is tired of this same old song on repeat. hmmm the book is ok but its an old song on repeat. it needs a breath of fresh air😅😪

Hmmm immature and disappointing.

the book is really good but somehow i feel his realm increase and martial skills are developing a bit slow. but so far so awesome 😄👍🏾

U welcome 😄. when you have time pls rewrite it. i have read books sith the same "get a system after surviving an accident " books and they all try to make the MC as OP as possible. it just makes you try to explain how the MC'S ability is possible and makes the whole book boring. sure he can be slightly OP at the start but at least make the OPness more about skills and intellect than drastic physical changes that are noticeable. plus if u dont want him to stay in the hospital for long just make ur mc's injury some what light like a concussion and cracked ribs something that won't let him take more than a month to heal to avoid performing miracles in front of doctors who have his "b4 the system healed me" medical records. oh and the most important it does not matter how much MC'S love or trust someone. THE SYSTEM IS NEVER DISCLOSED TO ANYONE. if there is no choice buy an average ability from the system as say thats what u have but NEVER ADMIT THERE IS A SYSTEM TO ANYBODY. 😅✊🏾

Smh its promising but was written lazily.

Hmmm. I read up to chapter 15 and to br honest it was uncomfortable to read. so fast paced somewhat illogical and slightly childish. Its like getting an inspiration to create something wonderful like a sculpture then altering it due to narcissism.the idea of this book is really good but it somehow feels like a wish fulfillment novel. In my opinion it should be rewritten after researching and fleshing out the characters and the world background.

so far so good but a tad too emotional.

i agree with the third option and I've got to say that apart from the memory thing this is 1 of the best HP fanfics I've read. thank you😄

nothing chages in all the chapters 1😭

this book is interesting but it will bocme ridiculous if care is not taken. the mc begining to get involved in stuff he is not supposed to be in at the moment, thus the super conducting materials. why cant this tech novels wait for the mc to finish school, become filthy rich and influential b4 letting them create technologies that are way ahead of the current technological boom. at least he should be low key in the early years