Elawn

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  • Bibliophile. I like making stuff up.

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  • Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top

    Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top

    Magical Realism System Reincarnation Modern Day hidden gem Showbiz Music

    4.5

    When a washed-up 32 year-old singer intent on surprising his wife for Valentine's Day comes home early, he finds her in bed with the man she had always considered her "best friend". Overcome by sorrow, he ends up dying from heartache. When he comes to, he has taken over 15 years old Jay Aslan's body, the body of a comatose. But wait there's a twist, he actually has a system?! Follow Jay as he struggles to follow his dreams, protect his family, keep girls at bay and takes the world by storm. __________________________ Release Rate: 1ch/day Support me on patreon.com/3lawn Thanks for all the love guys! xoxo

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Lmao, if you think I care about your rating you're sorely mistaken. I just wished he guy who left a review knew that a sentence starts with a freaking CAPITAL LETTER. How did he speak Korean? His father is Korean you dumbass, he obviously taught him when he was a kid. Bitcoin? I'm not in finance either and I know about it because I was interested and researched it, what's wrong with that? Growing 2 inches in two months is weird for a kid in his growth spurt? My brother grew that in a month when he was 15. You must be a butt-hurt shorty.

I didn't even bother reading the rest of your so called review, my eyes started bleeding before I could get to the end. Have a nice life! View More

bhg19: your are butt hurt as i gave 1 start and its is my opinion it is bad i dont give dam explanation why is bad. I want to hurt your butt more so below contain all the things i found.
Introduced 50 character in 38 chapter. I like sister and father character other than that No character depth.
Hero is living in the same universe or parallel universe after his death ? If he is living in the same universe after his death what happened original hero who is 16 year at that time feb 2010( 32 age at 2026). what about his friends before car crash.
His father is Korean and his mom is half Swedish and French so they speak English to each other in home how the hell he will be fluent in French , korean and Swedish. In one way he would have learned basic French from his mom side grandparent but how Korean as he never meet is father side grandparent or visited korea.
According to the novel the hero had dropped out of college to pursue his career so how did he remember all the detail of bitcoin so accurately he was 16 at time when bitcoin was introduced( don't tell me he worked in stocks).
General growth is 2 cm in a year but our hero growth is 2 inch in 2 month. He should be added in Guinness record for Ext ordinary growth and such a big institute did not bother about his extraordinary growth ?
Without piano he improved is piano skill and he learned all the language on his own( no system).
Cliché # save the beauty as soon as he enter the bar! (note :Underage are allowed to bar).
Cliché # random exp point to make sure reader know that this is system novel.
Chapter 17 - Carmen Cuba character was just introduced so that the hero get a movie chance.
Movie chance : I did not know that if you know casting director, one of the important character will be your and most funning thing is that there no competition for the role.
Waner bros production allowed Ryan Gosling to leave the movie after almost completion are you kidding me? If Ryan is not acting what is butter fly effect?
One more thing the certification is given after the movie is complete. How the heck he say it is pg-13 movie to his parents.
Chapter 31 – Audition - First time I am hearing the co actor will act along for audition
Chapter 35 – ¾ of the chapter is movie line. Good job by copying the line from the movie .

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top
1 year ago

Pebble_God: Halo Reach the last good Halo before 343 ruined it. :(

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1 year ago

Cataporozo: I really want to see everyone reaction to Jay kiss in the movie

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
Henri Escoval was mentioned repeatedly throughout the story, try to keep up! He's a close family friend. View More

rubber_band123: Who the **** is henri?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
It just became 2011 in the story, and the music came out in 2001. View More

rubber_band123: Was the piano song, river flow, created before Jay play it lol? What year is it, 2012? Did jay just plagiarize someone work lol?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
I'm French and use it fluently, why? View More

sheets: Translator-san are you google translating the french or do you know French?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
It won't, but every story needs an antagonist, and I've never been a fan of cannon fodders ~ View More

Alcanator: Great chapter as always Elawn, thanks! Be sure to enjoy your break.

I just hope this system intrigue plot doesn't overshadow the slice of life stuff I've been really enjoying all this time

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
No, not yet. Well, I do hope you remember Henri though, I've mentioned him before. View More

vkg313: Are we supposed to know know the people in the end of the chapter are?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C40
1 year ago
I can accept criticism, constructive criticism. You have given none of that. I randomly introduce and remove characters? Where? When? You're just butt-hurt, I mean seriously, you read a novel about a system and can't accept the fact that he took an Uber? It's just funny. View More

bhg19: If grammer is gd, it make a gd storry ? There is no continuation of character u radomly introduce and remove character . uber in 2010 was diffferent it was introduced only in San Frasnsico as a luxury vechile. .... Go write a essay with your gd grammer not a novel..if ur not able to accept critical crictismthan stop writhing because your are going to here more ...

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top
1 year ago
Tracy is newly introduced here, as for Charmaine, see chapter 'First Audience' ~ View More

novelfanatic: who is tracy and charmaine ? o>o

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
The fact that Jay used the uber in Boston and not New York, does that make you a very bad reader? Also, I can use whatever style I wish to write, as long as grammar is not an issue, what's the problem? Sigh, that's why butt-hurt people are a pain. View More

bhg19: Very badly developed story ... It was like diary update than a story.. Author need to do some research before writing a story fr ex uber was available in New York after 2014.

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top
1 year ago
I didn't want to take out the big guns right away, lest I scare my readers off... View More

lethargicflows: I think that the author was a little to chill with Julliette 'cause in modern day France ,you'll see way worse attitude in French households

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1 year ago

wateverisok: When you get that bittersweet sensation after catching up with a novel is when you know that you are hooked for life
Ps: I have a german oral test tomorrow that I am completely unprepared for, I blame that author but I have no regrets

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
Ah non mais, j'ai compris, et je suis aussi française x). Mais "et donc?" ça se dit, personnellement je l'utilise couramment. Mais j'imaginais Juliette le dire d'un ton assez sec en fait, genre Ahmed Sylla version drag, je sais pas si tu vois? 😂 View More

Senior_Nepuko: hoping the ( but I'm French so I really know what I'm saying.) did not seem offending in any way, and I didn't mean by that that you don't know what you're saying either. Srry if it seemed to you that way :D ^^

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
I can't wait for them to debuuuut! View More
Becoming A K-pop Idol · C47
1 year ago
Thanks! Missed that one. View More

MoonAshura: T'en est déjà "à" ton troisième verre

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
It's okay haha! View More

GBowz: Nvm. I read Jay the first time... It says Lee.

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
He already spoke it though? See Switzerland chapter, he already had 4/5 for French ~ View More

GBowz: So Jay's family hasn't found out that he has learnt French yet?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
I know, it's mostly for self-defence. But put yourself in his shoes, he hasn't been in a situation where he'll need anything else. Yet. View More

Xerathyon: Can you please change his martial art to mma or something else. Krav maga is not a martial art its just a way of engaging a fight or behave in a battlesiuation {being aggressive and stop flinching}

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1 year ago
Merci! View More

Runicorn: Et bravo pour ton "Novel" il est génial XD

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1 year ago
I know, I'm too. Tu croyais que j'avais utilisé Google trad? J'pense pas qu'il puisse traduire chier dans ce genre de contexte ~ View More

Runicorn: The word "chier" is rather vulgar trust me I'm French but you're right it's complicated to translate it to English

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C39
1 year ago
Haha, pas de soucis. Et merci! View More

Dev_Anthony: Et malgré mon commentaire qui a l'air méchant, j'aime bien ton histoire

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C38
1 year ago
Not really, my bratty teenage cousin uses it a lot, she thinks it makes her appear fancier... It doesn't. View More

Senior_Nepuko: Instead of "Et donc?", "Et alors?" fits more the situation. "Et donc" is too formal.
:)

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1 year ago

ImmortalBoomstick: Why is everyone commenting about lou or juliette when u can talk about sean the irish giant!!!? who can not love the sentence
me love... 'am starvin

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1 year ago

Grimlock753: Fuck yeah Totally Spies!!

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1 year ago
did, the second one from Juliette at least. I wasn't sure how to translate "chier" in that context. Maybe something like "bothers the f*ck out of you". View More

Runicorn: You made the English translation more polite or less vulgar than the French sentence.

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1 year ago

Lucky_One: If rebellious teens were like Juliette, then I’m sorta glad all I had going for me during my teens was a minor but continuous case of apathy and depression. Enough that all I did to ‘rebel’ was to be increasingly lazy. I also had the knowledge that my parents were both the cook and pursekeeper of the house. You know you never piss off the people that heal you, make your food, or give you money, or you’ll be in for a bad time.

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1 year ago
Alors déjà, française*, merci. Ensuite, Google traduction? Où est-ce que t'as vu ça? View More

Dev_Anthony: Si tu es français, pourquoi as tu utilisé Google traduction ?

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C38
1 year ago
I'm not being defensive or anything, I'm just telling you things as they stand. Like, I'll accept constructive criticism, but what you told me wasn't it. It was pointing out a preference, which is completely different. And like I previously said, to each their own, I enjoy writing about her and I won't stop just because someone thinks I should. I'm sorry if you felt wronged, but I honestly think that, even if everyone started suddenly hating her, I would still write about her. View More

KoFu_: Let's say I don't like interactions between kids and adults in novels. They tend to speak like morons and that doesn't make me say "oh how cute!" that makes me cringe.

Is okay if you enjoy writing like that, is your novel so is your choice and also a ton of people seems to enjoy those interactions.

I'm just speaking for the behalf of all the people who don't like it but fears to say it in front of all the overwhelming amount of people in favor of those interactions.

Also, don't be so defensive dude. Accept critics with a wide smile, you will surprise how some people can even expand your horizons by discussing different ideas.

**: I will continue to skip Lou interactions, not my cup of joe.

Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C38
1 year ago
No you don't. I'm French too, okay. Et pain perdu se traduit par "French toasts". Google est ton ami. View More

Dev_Anthony: I'm french. I think I know what I'm talking about.

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1 year ago
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