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    Realistic Fiction Romance Male Protagonist Modern Slice of Life

    A one-shot short story of a man reminiscing about his wife. From the author: Hey guys! Do let me know where I can improve on! This is my first actual story that I've written. Love it? Hate it? Please tell what you love/hate about each section! It's easier to see things when you're not involved! Please, be constructive about it! Thanks!

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LostInFictions: I like your concept, but somehow the writing couldn't get me. It was more like I was reading what has happened. It seemed a narration of the entire event. I didn't get pulled in the universe of this tale. Also, there were couple of errors. Perhaps, you meant them to write in Italics and then they would have seemed right but since Italics isn't allowed here, it looks wrong. You should put them in single quotes.

But like you said that this is your first story - you've done a wonderful job if that's the case.

Two_Times
3 weeks ago
Thanks InpatientReader123! Appreciate the feedback! View More

impatientreader123: i just came across the story randonmly while reading some post in a forum. anyways, after reading I think it was good (not great because of some mistakes in reading flow you can say); specially considering it is author's first time. It's just a chapter, but god I felt that "thudd" along with uneasiness as i read last two line.
Overall nice short story (not techincally a story, just a incident).
Also, the dvelopment of story was a bit weird as it was confusing when he started remembering of what happened, so yeah a bit messy flow I would say.

Two_Times
1 month ago

impatientreader123: i just came across the story randonmly while reading some post in a forum. anyways, after reading I think it was good (not great because of some mistakes in reading flow you can say); specially considering it is author's first time. It's just a chapter, but god I felt that "thudd" along with uneasiness as i read last two line.
Overall nice short story (not techincally a story, just a incident).
Also, the dvelopment of story was a bit weird as it was confusing when he started remembering of what happened, so yeah a bit messy flow I would say.

Two_Times
1 month ago
Thanks for taking your time to read my piece! As-is, I'm still unsatisfied with the time jump/transition, and the ending. There's too much not conveyed, but this writing was the result of a late night writing. G'luck on your future endeavors, Ursus010! View More

ursus010: Emotions over the edge ... now it’s clear how it looks in practice. But tough. This is not my genre, tragedies and is so full in the world, I like Renoir, I want to write only about the good and happy without tragedies. But the author feels the master of the word, it’s like and says a little but reflects real images, emotions, experiences.

The advantages are obvious in the ability to spectacularly convey the emotions and emotions of the character.

Cons are also obvious in too realistic)))

5 stars.

That's cool!

respectfully

Two_Times
1 month ago

ursus010: Emotions over the edge ... now it’s clear how it looks in practice. But tough. This is not my genre, tragedies and is so full in the world, I like Renoir, I want to write only about the good and happy without tragedies. But the author feels the master of the word, it’s like and says a little but reflects real images, emotions, experiences.

The advantages are obvious in the ability to spectacularly convey the emotions and emotions of the character.

Cons are also obvious in too realistic)))

5 stars.

That's cool!

respectfully

Two_Times
1 month ago

Caboose: I'm... I'm not going to lie I fucking snorted the second I saw the video.

My House of Horrors · C7
1 month ago

System: Really scary!!
Give back 4minutes of my life!!!!
Now it is stuck in my head...
Friday...Friday....ฅʕ•͡ᴥ•ʔฅRAAWWR

My House of Horrors · C7
1 month ago

Seregosa: F*ck you, you just ruined the entire creepy mood I had going here.

Here, have an upvote. I'm man enough to accept being played.

My House of Horrors · C7
1 month ago

Landon23: My phone okay

My House of Horrors
1 month ago

Landon23: My phone okay 👌 jeo

My House of Horrors
1 month ago

mas_andi: good

My House of Horrors
1 month ago

mas_andi: good

My House of Horrors
1 month ago

AshMofu: Thanks for the review! 😁😁😁

My House of Horrors
1 month ago

sidranasir: A lot of people think that it is just impossible to live in some under-developed rural areas while modern city life can provide a person with almost everything that one could only imagine. However, such active and bustling way of life is not for everyone. There are a lot of people who do not pursue a crazy success and luxury and just want their life to be simple and plain. A village is a perfect place to live if you are in search of harmony with nature. People have everything for their minimum requirements of life. Villagers are just satisfied with the necessities of their living. They are always provided with fresh fruit, vegetables, fish, water, and clear air. It is the simplicity, natural beauty, and tranquility that make the rural life unique and special. Moreover, living in a concrete jungle can be quite stressful and it can make you more vulnerable to depression.
Villages preserve our national customs and traditions. The village people usually hold various festivals and fairs where they represent the wealth of our culture. Villagers think in the terms of religion and God. The village temple is the divine place where people draw inspiration for their further work and pray for their families and themselves. There is a unique closeness between the elder and younger generations. Young people treat their parents and grandparents with great respect and follow their valuable advice.

My House of Horrors
6 months ago
I'm sorry. Jump out of it while you still can! It's only been.. 2 days? Aiyoo. RIP. May your diety bless your poor soul. View More

oqc66511: You dragged me into this

My House of Horrors
6 months ago

PeachyPearl: Since it's said to be a one shot, I think it's okay to review it.
It's a MUST read for those who love to read about LOVE I'm not talking about romance here but a pure kind of love.
Above those physical things, that sweet feeling, you have delivered that feeling really very well, Author. I'm really impressed.

Please create more such stories. Thank you for letting me read this one of the Pure Love based stories on WN. I'm contented.

Two_Times
8 months ago
Reading Status: C3
The novel starts off with a wide cast of characters, thrown one in after another. Think "Game of Thrones"/"Lord of the Rings"/"The Way of Kings" kind of deal. Multiple characters, multiple stories.

However, things feel a bit shoved too fast. I can't connect to any of them. Its too jarred/disconnected for me. The story looks like it has potential. Decent hook, decent reel. It could potentially be an exorcist-type of novel. But everything's blurring too fast, and I feel like I'm on a one-way train that's zipping by.

Grammar wise, I really really really recommend you going back and running this through some sort of spell-checker. View More
Nightmare - The Eternal Curse
8 months ago
You mean to tell me... MC has a chance to be OP Wuxia overlord? :O View More

KiIIuaZoldyck: The nightmare missions can also be activated by going to certain areas at a certain time of the day and failing a nightmare mission is not acceptable as the mission is usually go to xxx before xx:xx and "survive the night". What makes the nightmare missions unique is that even if the reward is tempting enough for the mc to brave the danger there is a hidden danger behind them and that is even if he manages to complete the mission the nightmare missions always backfire (backfire as in being given abilities that might backfire overtime being haunted by dangerous ghosts, having unwelcome murderers sneak into his horror house in seek of revenge and similar stuff. The missions often turn out to be sequals with a dangerous still living masterminds.

My House of Horrors
8 months ago

KiIIuaZoldyck: The nightmare missions can also be activated by going to certain areas at a certain time of the day and failing a nightmare mission is not acceptable as the mission is usually go to xxx before xx:xx and "survive the night". What makes the nightmare missions unique is that even if the reward is tempting enough for the mc to brave the danger there is a hidden danger behind them and that is even if he manages to complete the mission the nightmare missions always backfire (backfire as in being given abilities that might backfire overtime being haunted by dangerous ghosts, having unwelcome murderers sneak into his horror house in seek of revenge and similar stuff. The missions often turn out to be sequals with a dangerous still living masterminds.

My House of Horrors
8 months ago

KiIIuaZoldyck: The novel is awesome and not reading it is a major loss. This is definetly one of the best novels on webnovel if not the best.

I admit i was pretty hesitant at first because of the name of the novel but as it turns out (basing this on the 200+ novels i'm currently reading) this is definetly the best one I've read so far.
What i love about this novel is perhaps how all the characters have a motive and that even includes the system aditionally the mc doesn't seem to have been just randomly chosen for no particular reason like in other system novels. When the system gives the mc missions the system lets the mc chose (he doesn't have to do any of them if he doesn't want to) which mission he wants to do.
The missions always comes with three different difficulties were upon completion he will recieve a reward provided by the system. The difficulties are usually Nightmare, Normal and Easy. Easy and normal missions are usually stuff that tells him what he shouls do to improve his horror house suvh as installing cameras and increase the staff in the horror house, but before he accepts these missions he always has to consider if he can complete given mission (within whatever time limit the system gives him which is usually 1 day on normal or easy missions). If he fails an easy or normal mission the only consequences are that the system won't give him any rewards unless he completes the mission whitin the time limit.

The nightmare missions are definetly the best part of the story and every single nightmare mission gives a set of specific rewards and one of those rewards are just classified as 'unknown' but they will usually if not always provide the mc with a supernatural ability (how supernatural or powerful the ability is varies according to the difficulty of the mission (i'm gonna have to continue with another comment.. my phone is about to crash).

My House of Horrors
8 months ago
No, I stopped reading webnovels for quite a while now. Update please! XD View More

KiIIuaZoldyck: You haven't read all the chapters?

My House of Horrors
8 months ago
Yikes. If only you read my review before reading the chapters! J/k j/k! Mind doing an updated review of the series? View More

KiIIuaZoldyck: I've already read 434 chapters (completely updated) but thank you for the detailed review.

My House of Horrors
8 months ago
I'm sorry it has come to this, good sir. I, myself, don't think I can match up to Luna's quality, so I don't forsee myself taking this work up. Thank you for sticking around! View More

Chelusa: ark1750
I have been voting for this novel for quite some time... I created clone accounts to vote here too.. I hoped more people will acknowledge the brilliance of this novel.. But I never thought I would feel so powerless in the end! thanks luna for all your hard works for all this time and I hope u have a brighter future! right now I just hope they dont drop this novel... :(

Plundering the Heavens
11 months ago

Chelusa: ark1750
I have been voting for this novel for quite some time... I created clone accounts to vote here too.. I hoped more people will acknowledge the brilliance of this novel.. But I never thought I would feel so powerless in the end! thanks luna for all your hard works for all this time and I hope u have a brighter future! right now I just hope they dont drop this novel... :(

Plundering the Heavens
11 months ago

ABSenior: It looks more like a summary .
I think it was spoiler.
You know like some inside information.
With such I can decide whether to read or not as there are so many novel available

My House of Horrors
11 months ago

PandoraNox: You are why I decided to read this novel, thank you for the review. As you can see many people appriciate it

My House of Horrors
11 months ago

xShadowyLegendx: Best review I've read, so far, made me add this story to my library

My House of Horrors
12 months ago

ace_18: Wow.. Thanks

My House of Horrors
12 months ago

CaptainNip13: Review Jesus... I pray to thee

My House of Horrors
12 months ago
Ah, you don't need a man's name to know who to hate. You just need a *defining characteristic* of the man. Such as "the man with the yellow hat". View More

Elliemaymilk: This is a really good western book, but who's the MC? So many characters seem important if you could make a list, please?

And whats the mans name?

Gods Of Misfortune
1 year ago
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