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Edward died after trying to act cool and is then transported to a world where he kept his name but everything else changed. Fortunately (or unfortunately) he got a system of his own ... a fantasy system. **This is my first attempt at writing so it may get stale at times, and in such cases, I ask for your patience and forgiveness, English isn't my first language so please excuse my mistakes. I hope you enjoy what I will write in the future** New Discord server https://discord.gg/4bMvegk
The World is full of surprises and holds many secrets at bay. One of these secrets is reincarnation, and not many know that it's not far away. We are defined by our choices, and it is these choices that pave the road of life, and death... Henry is an orphan who ended up at a point of life where his choice changed all of what he could imagine. It gave him the gift of love.
Gnark: He was the guy in the cage inside a cave which is the bandit's hideout in the origin tower
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Shigun: Hello Everyone! I shamelessly gave myself 5 stars once again! If you're a new reader or an old reader that came from Fantasy System, I hope you enjoy this novel!! Please tell me if you have any criticism or advice :DSupreme Sovereign
Rim: I mean it's good novel........... and......... great story........ hope a mass release....... when you have time..Fantasy System
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q25t: I really like the story, let me say that first so it doesn't seem like I'm just ****ting all over it. Just have a rant that I need to get off my chest.
The balance and power gains in this novel make little to no sense whatsoever. MC is running around literally committing genocide against monsters for a full year and gains quite a bit of power, cool. The whole rest of the cast also gains roughly the same amount of power for no reason in particular. This isn't the end of the world, but in the context of the world in general this is nonsense, and I'll try to explain why.
MC's dad is heavenly est. 10 or so to start the novel. We assume this is high. It's not. There are apparently hundreds of people seemingly coming out of fucking nowhere that could beat him up at this stage. This is all fine.
Later on, however, MC and friends get a power-up after 2 or so years and dad gains literally 4 levels in those two years as well. The problem is that MC's dad is at minimum 15-20 years older than MC. So what the hell was he doing for most of this time? All the royal families seem to have incredible talent but end of doing just absolute **** that they end up as strong as their kids when they're in their 20's. Unless there is some limiting factor to strength gain post 20's or so this makes no sense.
The blood sect is WAY too big to an extent that it makes no sense. They were apparently a secret organization for a century and somehow developed literally millions of troops unnoticed. WTF. Their troops seemingly joined for no reason in particular as they seem awfully murder happy on the civilians. Their leaders are apparently at immortal est. high levels whereas all the other royal families and everyone else is at low levels. This REALLY needs an explanation as at the moment the novel reads like someone is literally pulling enemies out of thin air that are slightly more than MC can handle so he can power up more. Not worldbuilding.
For good stuff, I actually do feel for the MC at certain points in the story, and the side characters, though numerous, are actually decently fleshed out. The conflict with the blood sect, though contrived, is actually pretty decent.
Overall, I really do like the story. I just also feel that generic praise isn't useful to an admittedly new writer.Fantasy System
FluffyPandas: This novel has a good author, the plot is good, and the writing quality is good.
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DevilHeart03: Good story!!! I finished it in 2 days if my body didn't need to sleep I only need one day hahaha it's totally my cup of tea I like MC slowly get stronger and the system and their companions it just PERFECT!!! I like to see MC's growth and you totally show that so GOOD JOBFantasy System
0zer0_g: Stody or story 😂 fix itFantasy System · C243
Ninewive: E.A? Seriously?
MC "long distance teleportation!!!"
[Please enter credit card information before enjoying our E.A premium teleportation services]Fantasy System · C125
Adypoker: The only thing missing in this beach chapter is Romance between the MC and EmiliaFantasy System · C239
lamazelovelife: I love the chapter but when did Eric and Ellie become close friendsFantasy System · C228
DeadReaper: love how the author makes me have the feels about the queen when we just met her and then she died in one chapterFantasy System · C228
Rebel: The Inheritance System
Someone13: Better title: Ellie's tranformation
Spicify instead of reusing but other than that... Die Gazef!Fantasy System · C226
Someone13: Whats his discord again?Fantasy System · C225
EldridSmith: Oh ok. Can I shamelessly take credit tho? XD my mc is named Eldrid.Fantasy System · C225
EldridSmith: I will shamelessly take. Credit for her last name.Fantasy System · C225
waterpillar: Your new novel? Will it be hosted here? What is the genre? You can tell me at least these right?Fantasy System · C222
Someone13: You did forget someone! The all mighty and law destroying, super intelligent and convinient FANTASY SYSTEM. And your loyal fans.Fantasy System · C0
waterpillar: Wait, Raikou (shadow world?) Isn't he a shadow wolf?Fantasy System · C0
NobleKei: Although Becky wasn't able to kill any of the floor bosses past the seventh floor, she could hold her own against them.
Its Bella, Not Becky, dear Author.
Thanks for the Chapters~Fantasy System · C213
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