Webnovel Author: Osypak - Novel Collection

Osypak

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Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)

Anime & Comics · SlimeSage

Osypak

2yr

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It's useless against dumbles

'If someone use Legilimency on me, I just have to think of Boku no Pico.' Joked Magnus, but he still kept this tactic as a viable counterattack.

Osypak

2yr

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(A/N: Don't know the proper sound fx for helicopter noises, sorry.)

Osypak

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You could just included this in your paragraph but you make it author note.

Author's Note [The training didn't start until two months later because Zick had said Duncan's body hadn't grown enough to do any practical exercises yet].

Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)

TV · Duncan_Randar

Osypak

2yr

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Well. Look like Neo finally learn a thing from agent Smith

They're like clone of John Wick!

Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

Anime & Comics · ForceFromBeyond

Osypak

2yr

Replied to Defenestration_69

Angel beats, if I'm not wrong

' He compressed the flames at a single point being his finger and launched it. ' Todoroki thought.

Osypak

2yr

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It's not gonna work if we just force and demand more chapter from you. You had your own life and stuff you're busy with, so just update whenever you can and rest if you tired.

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Osypak

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Man. It's great story but the way you wrote it, I'm sorry to say but it's terrible. It's readable but you don't use punctuation enough to space your sentence that it make ao confusing and annoying to read

ch 0 4 CHAPTER 4 ROGER PIRATES AND THE 5 EMPERORS

ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND

Anime & Comics · godlyarrogantz_305

I was going to try and tame a Mamushi. A Mamushi is an extremely venomous pit viper, and, according to the "internet", the most venomous snake in Japan. (There's another really venomous one that it's venom is compared to, the Okinawan Nabu)

The Bone Hero, Jokara

Anime & Comics · Wilna_Kapp

Osypak

2yr

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Could he just rip that door cell or teleport inside?

ch 20 Jailbreak Part-2

MHA : True Power of Telekinesis

Anime & Comics · Omega200

Osypak

2yr

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Story is great so far but your character make this story so annoying. A 40 yrs old man with no common sense with childish temper tantrum and so much whining.

ch 0 4 Zombie!!!

One Piece: The Hundreds Swords Pirate

Anime & Comics · Kouhaii

Osypak

2yr

Replied to Kouhaii

And please don't make him too dumd that he not recognize what common sense is

ch 0 1 Long talk, with some sake

One Piece: The Hundreds Swords Pirate

Anime & Comics · Kouhaii

Osypak

2yr

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What?

ch 0 4 Chapter 4 : Life is Good

MHA: A Cat's Story

Anime & Comics · WolfStar14

Osypak

2yr

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My brain hurt read this. Repetitive sentences with similar meaning in one paragraph.

Quinn raised his hand with his fake wand in his grasp. The wand tip glowed as he held the fake wand over his head. He waited in silence as the fake wand tip glowed and gazed around to look for something noticeable.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Osypak

2yr

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Unnecessary chapter.

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MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World

Anime & Comics · Gonshido

Osypak

2yr

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If they killed all of the people in that village. What make mc so special that they want him alive?

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

The Phoenix of Fairytail

Anime & Comics · LonelyTurkey

Osypak

2yr

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Why need so much for seeds. You could just planted some and recycle the harvest for seeds. I mean, even with that much seeds, it can't grow in instant so it's just waste of money

"Besides that, I would also like to purchase a convoy of food. I need 100 million Beri worth of Lettuce Seeds, 100 Million Beri worth of Apple Seeds, 100 Million Beri worth of Pumpkin Seeds, and finally I need 200 Million Beri worth of mixed foods, just put what you think is the most well balanced and nutritious, I trust that this can be done?" Arch asked, he thought this might be a bit demanding but the Administrator simply chuckled.