Raul_Romero

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If so many people are needed for expeditions, I imagine a good way to explain it would be that monsters come in waves, and within those waves there could also be packs, with each pack leader being high level and maybe they also have lower-level sub-leaders. The only reason the MC can easily navigate through the middle, lower, and deep floors is because 1- He's alone, and 2- His movement abilities are too convenient to sneak past levels; so, to give a little more sense to needing more members, it's because the waves consist of too many monsters and high-level adventurers are the ones facing the 'pack' leaders while the others take care of the lower-level beasts?

ch 65 Plans for the future

Raul_Romero

1mth

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At Ch-42 It's a really good fic, few pokemon fanfics can reach this level (at least on this site), like in all fics there are things that someone would like and others would just hate, personally I think that with this fic you can't choose a side, so you can only criticize them with "logic" in the sense of situations, whit that said, this are just a few points that really make me want to drop this: -It looks like with only want something rellay strong the second characters would reach the MC level just to make them relevant, with reincarnations fics I think that the firs arcs of the fic you should only focus on the MC cause no one would have the motivation and the mindset to reach the peak as someone who knows the future. -About second characters, it looks like you would force pokemons, talents, materials, resources, etc just to keep them relevant, for example, SPOILER Emma already have a pokemon, hope you dont force Sabrina to give her one if you already shows that if someone with talent needs to go trough hard times, thats why you stop her to give a pokemon to the MC, also since the start feels that you want to keep her in the fic making her appearances forced and annoying, seems that you force a nerf on the MC just to out of nowhere force a buff on her just because she is "competitive" and "want it hard enough", just quit with her, you already said that this fic would be 500k+, the main second characters should only appear in the middle of the fic and be mucho more older than the MC or you gonna tell me that any kid with talent can reach the MC with knowledge of the future, mature mindset, the biggest motivation and (at least in soul) older? -I also hope that you don't force the improvement of weak talent pokemons just because they are MC pokemon or side character pokemon, this is a mistake that Pokémon: Tactics Master also had, out of nowhere all the side characters appear with the best talents pokemons knowing that they are supposed to be really rare. My english is really bad and I don't want to use a translator cause it loses the real meaning I want to convey, sorry

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

Raul_Romero

1mth

Commented

Finally some realistic situation, just hoping you dont force the things he need just because he want it "hard enough", if you do, the thing you said about getting better pokemons would be lie cause you gonna force all the things he need to updtade the pokemons ranks

Though evolving Machop and Rhyhorn without better resources will cause them to lose an opportunity to improve their talents optimally as evolutions provide a very good chance to improve talents, I don't have a choice.

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

Raul_Romero

1mth

Replied to Detective_Raven

Brother, finally someone has the right mindset and not only fanboy mindset, there is no time to be making friends knowing all what the future and the mc already know is comming, if the MC is just an oc from pokemon, sure its ok waste time with friends, but when you have the knowledge of what is comming, just need to focus on yourself

As for Orion, he saw Emma as nothing more than a little girl. He had already lived for over two and a half decades in his previous life. So, his mental age was around 30. He found most kids his age rather annoying to deal with and instead preferred dealing with the teachers in the Gym and Dojo.

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

Raul_Romero

1mth

Commented

Just want to make some points that I would want you to clarify if you can, -The MC already knows the level of trainers he would fight in the future, this means he won't waste time on Pokemons that can't reach the top, right? with this I mean: if I have a dragon (cliché) and an insect types pokemons, if I train both with the same intensity, that means the dragon will always be better, right? its make no sense that someone with information about the future waste times with useless pokemons, right? -In the case that the MC has companions, it doesn't mean that you are going to weaken or nerf him in some areas just to make the second characters relevant, right? because how can they have the same motivation as someone who knows what the future will be, right?

He stared dumbfoundedly into the book as he muttered, "There are over 1500 known species of Pokemon in this world! And there are 13 regions which are under the control of the Pokemon League."

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

Raul_Romero

2mth

Replied to RDAT

I get It, he should change the name of the book to "Tycoon, starting with videogames" so he don't need to worry about "healthy" competition

ch 401 Console Wars II and Shin's prepping once more

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Raul_Romero

2mth

Commented

Im just thinking that you care toooo much about creating a "healthy" competition, looks that you forgot that the investors dosen't care about nothing more than just money, you paint them toooo good for what they really are, I mean if you think about It, the actually good games are just a few, we just normalize the quality off new ones cause that is all what we can do

ch 401 Console Wars II and Shin's prepping once more

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Raul_Romero

3mth

Replied to Daddy_strikes_

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Fantasy · xlntz

Raul_Romero

5mth

Replied to Sky_Demon_Order

I understand what you're saying, but still the alien thing doesn't apply because he's not external to the family so the fear is too unfounded and is used to force a narrative in the anime and LN, I don't take back the AI thing because in an advanced magic society where they even modify their brain for greater capacity does not make sense, if CADs have to be made to adapt to each individual it would be even more useless, if the ability to see magic is so rare and if it were so easy with a "program" wouldn't they have done it already? If they modify genes to strengthen every part of them, AI that simply offers greater information processing capacity or some personal assistant is not the big thing you want to make it out to be (in a world with magic).

ch 0 6 The Birth of a Prodigy

Mahouka, Rebirth as Tatsuya

Anime & Comics · Sky_Demon_Order

Raul_Romero

5mth

Commented

One observation is that it feels like the typical fics that start in the first chapters to imagine a way to change the world with advances etc, too rushed and too impulsive, I think the last time I read the LN was 10 years ago, but still I remember that the precaution the Yotsubas have was too unjustified, if his own members do not grow rebellious, someone who is the own son of the main branch would have even less reason to grow rebellious, or perhaps from the beginning he would be treated so unfairly that he could only end up in rebellion? very illogical. The AI thing is not even so exaggerated in an era where you can create spells to counter it, my recommendation is to focus only on the personal, hes spell is so strong that you would only nerf it by distracting it with things that in cannon he no had another option due to his poor talent for others types of magics, another thing is that if he learns to control his emotions, it means that he learned to isolate them, which means that if they still force the emotional link with Miyuki, he would have no problem isolating it, so I hope you don't force that forced feeling just to give him an inconceivable weakness when he is already aware of the problem from the beginning, just have a natural siblings affections

ch 0 6 The Birth of a Prodigy

Mahouka, Rebirth as Tatsuya

Anime & Comics · Sky_Demon_Order

Raul_Romero

7mth

Commented

Two days without stopping and I finally read it, I must say that at first I didn't like the idea of multiple protagonists because normally one is nerfed to give the buff to another, but so far my only relevant complexes are the following: 1 ) Dae's abilities are too much for someone who only spent a decade in the future, taking into account that among so many conflicts the only thing that would be trained to the peak are his martial skills and perhaps a couple of secrets considering his class. 2) The constant refusal to learn magic. 3) Not only in this fic but in most of them, feeling forced to explain, I don't know if it's because I'm a very personal person or I understand unpredictable human nature a little more. 4) He wants knowledge but is not active in seeking or assimilating it, for example, the Director's legacy is a tremendous source of information, articles and things that he wants to use and cannot because he does not accept the inheritance, in the end he can accept it and then teach to someone else, too much forced refusal for my taste. Apart from that I must say that I like it a lot and it leaves me wanting more, it only weakens me because there are things that logically can be learned to strengthen but it doesn't because the MC can get very OP

ch 96 First day at the red Wall

Zero Fate against the world

Video Games · Abadom

Raul_Romero

7mth

Replied to Abadom

I don't know hermano, when you read the entire book straight through, she feels more like a nuisance, it's not hate, but the interactions having to explain everything to her is annoying, especially when one would think that in that world it is normal not to give explanations of your class

"I can teach it to you… But not now." He replied after thinking for a moment

Zero Fate against the world

Video Games · Abadom

Raul_Romero

7mth

Commented

I don't understand, 1) Isn't the privacy of classes common sense? Why does she have to be curious about everything? 2) Is it even necessary to explain things to her? 3) I don't understand why she is still part of the plot, she has contributed absolutely nothing, zero character, zero benefit, zero personality, and you still force the MC to say yes to everything and now it seems like he has to teach her his magic just cause the spoiled girl is curious? Don't take this the wrong way, but if I've ever read a more useless character for so long, it's her.

"I can teach it to you… But not now." He replied after thinking for a moment

Zero Fate against the world

Video Games · Abadom

Raul_Romero

8mth

Replied to Einstein3

I get what you're saying, the tiger was just a basic example, but even with your example, which one would be the fastest to get stronger (with training, not the one that evolves first because it's a low species)? My point is that as a reincarnated, first I would choose the ones that will be stronger with half the training time, and then you can choose what you want, if the MC was an OC of the world itself I would not care since he does not know or have the pressure of future knowledge

"You know, if you want to get strong like them, you should join me. I have been around here long enough that Starly usually are only by themselves if their flock rejects them. How about we show them how stupid they were to reject you? When they see you walking around with these two menaces without being scared, then they will know that they just pushed away the most fearless and strongest of the flock." I said as I pointed to my two starters.

The Journey of a Psionic Champion

Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir

Raul_Romero

8mth

Commented

ANBU is definitely not the way to control your own destiny when they are the most controlled

"Let's go then Hayate sensei," Ren was visibly a little bit excited, from the day he could remember he has dreamed of becoming someone who was in control of his own destiny. Being a shinobi has thus become the obvious escape to freedom he always desired and now finally he had a chance to take his 'first mission'.

The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi

Anime & Comics · Version_401

Raul_Romero

8mth

Replied to Raul_Romero

As for other universes, let me give you an example of why they are lousy ideas, if I have as my first world a character type that I am forced to convert to due to the environment, that means that I will be the same in all the others, it means that I'm already predisposed towards the same path no matter what, it's better to finish the fic in the same universe and then do another one, let me give you an example, if I go to a world where I become completely sociopathic and do terrible things to survive, what if then I go to a world where it is no longer necessary for me to go through all that, I can only be one more NPC since there is no development for me, here is a ridiculous example, how would you enjoy Pokemon more, being a sociopath or being a neutral entity that enjoys of things and have feelings?

'I also don't know how I ended up in a book world at all… Are there other worlds based on books too? What about movies and TV shows? There's an infinite number of possibilities…

Lord of Sins - (Lord of Mysteries)

Book&Literature · YunokRyuk

Raul_Romero

8mth

Replied to YunokRyuk

There are 22 because they were derived from the Original, if there is more than one Original then there can be more pathways, the pathways power system is only one Original and there are only 22 pathways, outside of that there can clearly be other power systems, but pathwas itself is only 22 because only 22 had the Original, there is nothing else to interpret, it is as if I divided myself completely into 10 parts, unless you cut one of those parts there will only be 10, and even if you cut, you are only always doing 10 because when adding the cut will always be 10

'I also don't know how I ended up in a book world at all… Are there other worlds based on books too? What about movies and TV shows? There's an infinite number of possibilities…

Lord of Sins - (Lord of Mysteries)

Book&Literature · YunokRyuk

Raul_Romero

8mth

Replied to YunokRyuk

Please no, whenever there are multiple universes the immersion is completely broken, the plot will no longer feel the same for knowing that there is another world after, even the other paths outside the 22 is already too much, there is a reason why there are only 22, laws, concepts, root

'I also don't know how I ended up in a book world at all… Are there other worlds based on books too? What about movies and TV shows? There's an infinite number of possibilities…