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I will try to keep constant with the chapter releases,but no promises. I will have to do some research about events and try to make them partially correct but I will probably get a whole lot of things wrong. Slow updates, very new to this. This fanfic will be my own view in making an OP Batman. I will throw a couple things in to make it more interesting, Justice League if possible, teaming up once in a while. So try to enjoy! A Genius boy who dies young, but not all is lost it seems. Waking up alive was quite a surprise.
Silver_Call: Right so this review is for those undecided wether to go in on this.
This is a non-standard OP-MC harem collecting world hopping story.
Now that that's out of the way, the MC won't get every girl in existence and will mostly focus on more mature *cough*MILF*cough* women.
If you don't think this is your cup of tea then please understand that many, such as myself, find solace in the fantasy that this is to escape the horrors of boredom.
PeaceI did it my way
lord_couchpotato: Well i kind of liked the story, but character design does puts me off, The mc is supposed to be 2000 old monster but he acts as an immature brat. He has this totally explosive personality at times for no reason, at first he is against attracting trouble before reviving his siblings then out of the blue he wants to summon and attack all the Shinto gods that's totally idiotic and the reason is gives is that the gods are evil and hypocrites, well i don't see how his siblings are different in any way even his siblings committed many murders so why don't he criticize his siblings. Plus trying to attack main religion of the country you are trying to concur is not reasonable and the only reason his own people are not rallying against him is because of his compulsion magic. I would recommend the author to give more sustenance to his personality either make him completely evil that he wants to capture them just for fun or make him completely fair, him giving excuses just seems petty. And plus they were not an immediate threat to him anyway take reference from novels like emperors domination i think he is so far one of the best representations of the long living immortals out there. Like his every move is part of some kind of plan.
plus mc treats his only loyal subordinate as dispensable and "his food" telling her that he will kill her if she do something wrong that just gives the wrong message. even if he thinking it like this he should still maintain his good lord facade.
Another thing is the power mc just keep gaining out of no-where, There is description of force and stuff and only he and his family can use it that is just too bizarre. if no one can use the force why are kyber crystals just lying there in japan. Plus mc is getting stronger and stronger when it is not required at all in the irregular world. He does not need this much power, Otherwise whole power balance of the world will be disrupted just being an original vampire and having a powerful clan was enough. even Introducing force was overkill and him making sword of rapture was just the final nail in the coffin (all puns intended :D)
Otherwise i think the novel is not that bad good for a light read and irregular world is not exploited much by fan-fics so its a fresh change but i would recommend the author to give him a solid personality having a teenage junkie attitude does not suit him when he have seen all the mistakes his siblings made.The Mikaelsons in an Irregular World
Seerer: Author:player he has his eyes on Kise Ryota....
Kise:*shivers then backs away several steps*......
MC: oi...it's not like that....Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket · C0
esa123: For someone that has perfect copy and God speed impulse but sucks at video games c'mon I don't believe thatRebirth in KurokoNoBasket · C0
Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket · C0
Saint: and I'm done, other reincarnator with the system? no thanks.Reborn in Narutoverse with a Unique System · C15
Genji1985: It's a pinched nerve, specifically the nerve that runs from the pinky side of the wrist in either arm (Carpal Tunnel is the Thumb side). Had it myself (pinched at wrist and elbow)... It's not fun, very painful. I needed surgery for it, hopefully Rem won't.Shield Hero's Slow Harem Life · C132
Pied_piper: Your health is more important than writing right now.
When you are well enough you can compensate for it with more chapters
Get well soonShield Hero's Slow Harem Life · C132
Shield Hero's Slow Harem Life · C132
FvkYouBoy: It's good to read but my only problem is the mc.. It makes me really annoyed.
Author keeps making mc mentions that he is from another world that it turns off people from continuing this.
And it's funny that this mc keeps using his power then faint.
Giving him power is really just a waste he is more suited on becoming a messenger or just a civilian.Ultimate Fruit
Reborn as Batman's Little Brother · C5
Shinigami of the Uchiha Clan · C11
Shinigami of the Uchiha Clan · C7
Shinigami of the Uchiha Clan · C4
SlyImmortalDevil: I hope he gets Lui Kang's dragon form too, it would be cool to show it off to that Ryoko dragon girl.
Mirko, Ryoko, and Toga for the harem. Please make Mineta get booted out of the class during the quirk exam by Eraser head, he belongs in support only!Mortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
Karma_Marka: thanks for the chapter, yes haremMortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
GoeMaru: Harém, but don't rush with the relationship just go with the flow and built a foundationMortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
Demon564: Yes, I agree with him. Let there be a harem, but do not rush, build the foundation of a relationship with one girl and then add a new girlMortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
Orthanos: I and both yes and no.
Yes in that a harem is always possible, but that is if a harem setting flows naturally and doesn't feel forced. This includes love as a plot armor. Love should always flow naturally.
If a harem compromises the story then it would be a no to harem. The more girls you need to write developing feelings for should never feel like its a forced development.
What you have done with Mina is pretty good. If you can create more of the love story for them, that would be cool, but once again try not to be forceful. Let your ideas just flow.
I love this mortal Kombat theme fanfic. MHA and Mortal Kombat powers... just make sense.Mortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
Mortal Kombat System in BNHA · C11
SHAIPES: Well i would love to see you writing a avatar fanfic and im sure im not alone i honestly think your writing is better than 90% of authors of fanfics here and im sure you would write a pretty good fanfic of avatarIn MHA With Madara’s powers · C49
Jeet_JoJo: Tbh, I don't care about ochako and Dekh being cucked. I am more into bakugo's mom. Best milf in this series. But I know that author is not going to do itIn MHA With Madara’s powers · C49
TrueMiks: What the hell? What kind of Author would write something like that??? Number 1 way to make readers drop novels smhIn MHA With Madara’s powers · C49
MyStomachHurts: I plan to solidify Rumi’s and Madara’s relationship. I think it’s about that time. I don’t know how many chapters left until that though. Midnight as well. Going to have her and Madara grow closer.
I could just be done with it and have them ****, but that would be boring to read.
Also, looks like Itsuka Kendo won for the pairing. Their relationship of course won’t be right away. It would be too much when Madara has to deal with Midnight and Rumi right now.In MHA With Madara’s powers · C49
In MHA With Madara’s powers · C49
SnowRose: This is by far one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics you’re going to find. It’s not something entirely different and does follow the main story plot, however, the author does a very good job at making the story their own with original characters thrown into the mix which change the plot. The author clearly understands and knows the world of Harry Potter well and it is an amazing story if you enjoyed the Books.
Now the bad-
I binge read the entire story up to chapter 295 or so and I have to say, up until chapter 250 I couldn’t take my eyes off the book. It made you feel as if you were reading a real Harry Potter book with its own plot. Sadly around 250 the romance made me lose some of my motivation to continue reading.
Without spoiling to much, basically the romance was perfect, it had its ups and downs and even if they didn’t end up together in the end, it was still perfectly executed. Until around chapter 250 when the author decided to change the love interest of the main character and the entire story crashed for me.
The first love interest was perfect and the author had an amazing romance subplot going for them which they could have taken in so many ways. But they decided to have the MC fall for someone who doesn’t fit them at all. They said “The MC having feelings for him just felt obvious for me.” But for me and a lot of other people it did not feel correct at all. It felt forced and their personality didn’t feel like they meshed together at all. Yes they have stuff in common but that’s not enough, she shouldn’t have fallen for him like how she did.
That’s my only gripe with this book. It was perfect and yes the author can do what they want, but if the MC does end up with who she currently likes then I honestly don’t know if I can handle reading more which makes me beyond sad because I love the book so much.
Anyways that’s just my personal Review and Opinion, if you disagree then that’s not a bad thing. Don’t hate.Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
manasa_kommuru: Really can't give this book anything less than 5 stars...
In the beginning I was hoping that the MC and Harry Potter would be paired and was sort of disappointed when that didn't happen, but now I realise that it's better this way both in story flow and realistically, I mean the golden trio are basically her best friend's brother's group and she's already expressed her distaste with Ron and his behaviour plenty of times and while she gets along well with Harry when it's just the two of them, Harry is still a kid who's prejudiced and swayed by the opinions of those close to him.Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
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