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Now that I check it, it seem Fast passes is still a way to let you read free there, I thought they just basically remove that option :v View More

Error_Name: Well I have 3accs so I don't have problems with reading here. They give fastpasses anyway

The Legendary Mechanic · C618
1 day ago
you know, you could just read on the third party site like Boxnovel to avoid paying for those greedy guy (basically they copy the chapter down, so the quality didn't drop much, unless you read the MTL site, where it go more than half of the current chapter already) View More

Error_Name: Wtf haven't heard about that. And this novel got it only this month.

The Legendary Mechanic · C618
2 days ago
guess it work View More

saltyfish2233: https://m.weibo.cn/detail/4349530352566380
I tried to copy the link of some illustrations for this novel from Chinese painter, does it work?

My House of Horrors · C856
4 days ago
the site name box()novel , just remove that ( ) out since webnovel censor it View More

ArashiTenebris: or, you know, read on the third party site to read them free to avoid those bullsh*t , for example ******** site

The Legendary Mechanic · C602
1 week ago
or, you know, read on the third party site to read them free to avoid those bullsh*t , for example ******** site View More

papawow1974_3830: No free coins to stock is frustrating....but I still can create a new accnt...I will stock accnts to prepare for a Mass release like this....ty to the translator

The Legendary Mechanic · C602
1 week ago

Azunyan: Summary: The MC is a doctor from China who lost his job because he didn't follow medical procedures. He comes to the US thanks to the help of his mom and begins to get ready to become a doctor once again. However, at the hotel he is staying, he gets introduced to the idea of being a street doctor and that is what he does from then on. During that same time, he ends up summoning a demon through the help of an ancestral artifact and he begins to use the demons to help in his medical work.
I like how the MC has some pretty funny conversations with the demons. It makes his personality shine a bit more. However, the dialogue between the MC and his demons aren't always smooth flowing. sometimes the dialogue is kind of rough and choppy. I think that is the translator's fault. There hasn't been the introduction of anything that seems like a big plot unfolding. Also some of the chapters seemed kind of episodic in nature.

Demons Beside You
1 month ago
yeah, that a potential plot hole, but then we may not know if he can able to tank this for a long time then View More

Sulfonamide: Why not enter the void to avoid the shot?

The Legendary Mechanic · C572
1 month ago
who is Gao Roxue ? View More

polaris0989: Augh... so sad.. why do i feel like the girl in the last part is Gao Roxue...

My House of Horrors · C797
1 month ago
if you need advice and material to research, check this website of "Limyaael's Rants" below, it have over 400 topics for you to learn advice to write those topic there
https://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/
(this is only for reference, because he tend to make it into a 'rules' and a bit more like how to write his novel there in some case, which is not right since writing is free after all, so it fine to break the rule, of course if you know what you are doing)


then you can check the youtuber series name 'terrible writing advice' and 'tropes talk', so you not make those rockie mistake, at least in those topic there


you can also check my main thread for any material you need here, also there are a list of good novel you can check there in my post for idea

https://royalroadl.com/forums/thread/98657
(google "Forum And Writing Directory for Authors" on royalroad if you can't find my post) View More

Daoistdvonkarl: Thank you for the advice, is there also an Android version for Grammarly?

Reincarnated in Another World With the Ability to Create a Modern Country
2 months ago
you should give it a try here, at least it show a good stuff better than this site (if you look at the tops novel and stuff like that), of course sometime there are still trash managed to climb up, but only for a certain time.

Here is a list you can check out for starter:
The Voyager: Remastered

Enlightened Empire

Painting the Mists (a very good xianxia novel, too bad he move most of the chapter for amazon book already)
Starcraft Unbound (hiatus, it still quite good though)

Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece (a very good isekai novel, unlike the one we talk so far, hiatus though until the author find motivation to write, or until the ONce piece finally finished :v )

Until Death? (Refleshed Version) (you can check his other novel, most of them are good, and most of them you can read at any order, if you want, just google and a post will show the reading order there, or just ask reader)

Blue Core

Mother of Learning

Data Dragon Danika

Song of the Void

Necrotourists

The Daily Grind (like 'scp ikea' ?, then this will be for you, the office version)

that some I share for you, there are still more (you should create account so you can bookmark those and see any new chapter there) View More

Jin_Morii: I've never used royalroad, but it seems like it is a very good site for reading stories, and fanfic. I kind of want to try it, especially if it doesn't allow that kind of garbage on there.

World Domination System
3 months ago
fun fact, that author had try to release his own novel on royalroad.com, and guess what ?, his novel get banned because it contain mostly child **** (which I remember other review also point out about that problem, with the mc mostly f*ck with his harem all the time and not progress the plot and story much when reach to certain chapter)
don't get me wrong, that side do allowed ***** theme and stuff, but if that story are contain mostly about **** and sex like that (like nearly half the novel), then expect your novel to be removed

(you can google and see that it do release on royalroad, but get removed there) View More

Jin_Morii: I like the fact that even on other novels, people are talking **** about the author of Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos. I, for one, completely agree though.

World Domination System
3 months ago
well, you can check the youtuber series name 'terrible writing advice' and 'tropes talk', so you not make those rockie mistake, at least in those topic there View More

Boghog: This novel started off as an interesting premise but im currently at the start of chapter 12, and all I can say is wtf is happening, The characters are not explained at all, we don't have anything like either their POV of events or even thoughts, The MC's master Maria, has no ambitions, no personality apart from trying to get into the MC's pants at a tender 5 years old, and has none of the Pride or Ego that you would expect her to have being in the position of being the daughter of a fairly renowned Duke(I don't even know that, I'm just guessing, author hasn't even explained anything about the Duke), also she has not gained any pride from her appraisal that was held at the church where it was proclaimed that she was a Prodigy and a Hero Candidate along with very high "Stats", it is like that event never happened because there have been no consequences that have come of it, it only happened to give the MC a chance to start using his abilities.

And onto the MC, I know very little about him, He was a 45 year old mercenary veteran in his old life, apparently he was also a virgin too, even though that is practically impossible and also not relevant at all,and thats all i know, he has no ambition in this new life, no difficulties that he has to work towards, acts like an average guntaku and thinks like one too, he just so far has been given everything on a silver platter so far, he is supposed to be a servent, but he is so much stronger than everyone its hilarious, like if he thought about it and had enough mana, he could just create a replica of earth with everyone proclaiming absolute alligence to him because he created them, And that is the low ball of it, he could imagine a death star if he wanted to, but he is staying to real life things that he saw in his previous life for no reason at all.

Anyway Rant over, sorry for that deluge of text.

SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER

He has just rescued two beastkin children from slavery at the hands of nobles, They are of course wolf beastkin because its a requirment for isekai/reincarnation, and so far they are as interesting as paint, the male beastkin had a little argument with the MC where he refuse to attack a panther because he was told to, which to me is pretty god damm reasonable, The MC then used "Killing intent" and grabbed the males sword and told him that he would regret it, and the male then immediately gave up and did what he was told, not even with a grumble, its also shown later that the male doesn't even get mad over it, he forgets about it almost immediately.

This was a rather big example but it goes to show that the MC just gets a free pass in everything and now semi knowing the authors thought processes, its going to be like this for the rest of the novel and I just cant stand that, as its a sign of being a really bad writer that can't think up of challenges for his MC/Cast.

The sentences are very start and stop and offer very little information, the other characters don't really exist as the narrative goes, you could replace them with cardboard cut-outs and nothing of value would be lost and you would not notice a thing.

So I'm going to keep reading and see if it gets better, (I REALLY doubt it) more like I'm just trying to find more ammo to throw at the author.


Sorry it kinda turned into a rant, I just got really annoyed reading it, cause I have been reading for many years, along with actually good quality grammar and structure.

To the Author if he does not delete this review ( which I will repost, im saving it onto my hard drive) please take a break from writing, and check out some of the more well known novels on this site to get a feel of how a narrative between two or more characters should go, along with spending more time going over your logic in the chapters as I have posted in the paragraph comments, some fixes that you should do. But so far you just need to add more detail and stop with the time skips while giving us no info of what happened during that time.

Thanks in advance,
A concerned Reader

Servants With a Modern Weapon
3 months ago
it on royalroad.com , dude, you should try google it in the first place :v
also another good novel you can check here, which also on that site
'Song of the Void'
'Exterminator Dungeon'
'Until Death? (Refleshed Version)'
'Supervillainy and Other Poor Career Choices'
'Misadventures of a Rampaging Demon'
most of them is good and dark in someway View More

XystOblivion: Where exactly do I find this at? I tried searching for it on webnovel but couldn’t find it

The God Virus
3 months ago
hello, since it look there finally a editor, can I ask a question, which part of chapter finally start to be edited ? (because the early chapter will need to be edited a lot there, since it will be the part that driven new reader away the most) View More

akshaythedon: I am starting to get involved with this novel. Hope it really takes off. However, I'm quite disappointed with the fact that the sentences are not structured properly. This destroys the fun of reading this novel. I hope someone really comes forward and helps the author with editing/proofreading.

I am ready to help you out with the editing, author. If you are interested, please do reply here.

The God Virus
3 months ago
then I suggest 'The Voyager: Remastered' then, since it pretty good and suit your taste here View More

XystOblivion: Catering to a certain niche I agree. I don’t like romance novels like this at all I usually prefer them the other way around where the mc is corrupted and gradually looses hope in the human race killing all his love interests and caring only for himself. I like cold and indifferent mcs as opposed to weak willed retards like the one I assume is in this novel. I associate more with the former.

The God Virus
3 months ago

Austragus: I wonder when HX will realize that his actions have far more consequences than just changing the story of a "game"...

The Legendary Mechanic · C514
3 months ago
wait a second, what happen to that black liquid object that on the first alien ship that dropped there ? (if you read at the end of chapter 316 , you will see it, I remember the ship get drop down to the planet seem to be because of this 'living' black liquid there ) View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C510
3 months ago

ArashiTenebris: can anyone remember the chapter where we get the POV of that mutation virus here ?

(if I am remember, it is basically a hive mind Micro organisms ?)

The Legendary Mechanic · C510
3 months ago
can anyone remember the chapter where we get the POV of that mutation virus here ?

(if I am remember, it is basically a hive mind Micro organisms ?) View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C510
3 months ago
ah, thank for the answer View More

TheO99: Eric is the guy who got the body of the astral beast

Night Ranger · C478
3 months ago
who is Eric ?, I forgoted here View More

TheO99: maybe the evil dragon god possessed tidomas body, like what happened with Eric

Night Ranger · C478
3 months ago
I'm fine with the conquererd stuff, I just don't like when he make other dumb/incompetent/*sshole for no reason there (that where the 'racist' stuff coming, especially when it like 'all people of that race are the same' type of stuff), at least it seem good enough for me to give that novle a try then View More

FennecFox: Definitely one I would check already in my library!

The world online.. Yeah, there's quite a few chapters which are basicly info dumps, but it's on the reader side to decide if interested. It is a novel deeply influenced by chinise culture and history so those are simply optional chapters in case you want to understand the characters choices in a deeper way, yet they truly start to get annoying at some point, as part of it might be unrelated. As it goes for almost a whole chapter at times. I just ceased reading the historical part at some point and concentrated more on the current state of the novel.
And i dont really think there's racism, just a chinise guy comes atop his country and starts conquering around, I would say he treats everyone equal. The MC multiple times say "There's no permanent relationships, only permanent interests." and the novel truly stays behind that. Still understanding it hurts to be conquered in your favorite novel. 🤭

Anyway, I'm just saying if you don't feel like it...

But let me again recommend the Sovereign of the karmic system. Not gonna explain it's just good and I think you will enjoy.

World Development System
4 months ago
well, like in the chapter that show, there are a group of powerful people who are just there for those stone, so they should at least release one to distract those people away, and of course have at least one outside will make them busy and less willing to attack the three sister, since the other guy who get that one rock are better target since he maybe weaker compare to 2 legend girl there View More

Eleventh_hinter: I'm kinda wondering, why did Marvin suggested they gave the last one to someone he knows with a territory.. like Hathaway for instance

Night Ranger · C288
4 months ago
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Night Ranger · C243
4 months ago
if I am remember, the mirror world thing are very costly to maintain it View More

SSS: You can smile now ... but later you'll know who will get ambushed.... and why doesn't Marvin just learn new skill all the time by going to people and increase his mastery by going back to the mirror world.... and why does that old man tell so many lies?????

Night Ranger · C151
4 months ago
well, I guess it fine then, thank for the answer
p/s: you check this video on youtube yet ?, it a gold mine there
Starsector Review | Explore the Cosmos™ | Ruin Everything™ View More

RemiImer: MC is only focused on progress his power to protect his famili,friends and teritory. So i think here is not time for harem. You see cover of this novel? There are two characters. I think this is MC and Hathaway. So i think there is only posible romance betwne them both. I now about 340 ch. and there is only one kiss(spoiler: she was after this somelike kidnaped and he promise her resuce after 6 moths) and back to his progres. So i think there will be not much romance.

World Domination System · C850
4 months ago
got to chapter 89 now, so far it do get better, btw I have one question, it seem to have hint of harem, do it get worse ?, here is other comment about it (although a bit swearing):
If this turns into some **** harem, gonna drop. Never liked harems , especially the ones where female chs keep gaining powers out of nowhwere for plot's sake (for flat 2D personaility) .i already hate that author introduced not one but 3 of these bitches. Guess he is running out of idieas View More

RemiImer: After 150 ch. i know i can read till end. Novel is no complicated and the start is little notreal with author mistakes. You must take decision if you like this or not. I star read beacuse of rpg element.

About mc... We dont know nothing about mc. We dont know even how his mind work in this world. There is willpower maybe this help him adapt to the realities of the world. This is fiction we cant think if this was real in our world beacus we dont know, maybe there was full sensor vr and brutal and was available for players. Here in our world is plenty games with blood and flying heads(with mark PEGI-18 with high violent etc.). In The gamer webcomic mc have skill gamer mind thanks to which he remains calm during the fight or just brutality. In anime Overlord mc is an archlich(after transmigrated). He when killing questioned himself that he dont feel anything when kill others even when he was human. So you can try justify something what you think is not posible even this is fiction or turn a blind eye and focus this what you like in this novel.

Story is a lot better im my opinion when he start meet Legends(100-150 ch.+). But this is novel for after midday meal or dinner. And is far for high novel but i like many points here so i like it.

World Domination System · C850
4 months ago
at least there are still some website like royalroad though =.=!, so that something (and do see some good one without the repeated one at all) View More

Don_G: I think that's a general problem with webnovels though. I don't think there's a single webnovel out there that doesn't beat its readers to death with the repeated-information-bat. It's a general curse of this system thap pays per quantity and not quality.

Abyss Domination
4 months ago
well, read to chapter 40 now, and it quite decent, just have to ignore the rookie mistake (which is quite annoying though), thank for the answer anyway
p/s: have you check the game 'Starsector' ?, that game is very great and 'nut' there, just check the review from a certain 'Africa warlord' guy and you will get the idea there View More

RemiImer: After 150 ch. i know i can read till end. Novel is no complicated and the start is little notreal with author mistakes. You must take decision if you like this or not. I star read beacuse of rpg element.

About mc... We dont know nothing about mc. We dont know even how his mind work in this world. There is willpower maybe this help him adapt to the realities of the world. This is fiction we cant think if this was real in our world beacus we dont know, maybe there was full sensor vr and brutal and was available for players. Here in our world is plenty games with blood and flying heads(with mark PEGI-18 with high violent etc.). In The gamer webcomic mc have skill gamer mind thanks to which he remains calm during the fight or just brutality. In anime Overlord mc is an archlich(after transmigrated). He when killing questioned himself that he dont feel anything when kill others even when he was human. So you can try justify something what you think is not posible even this is fiction or turn a blind eye and focus this what you like in this novel.

Story is a lot better im my opinion when he start meet Legends(100-150 ch.+). But this is novel for after midday meal or dinner. And is far for high novel but i like many points here so i like it.

World Domination System · C850
4 months ago
well, you can check the review, but the problem are mainly in a quite 'amazon book level', so if you usually just read the normal webnovel quality, then I can say that this 'Enlightened Empire' are above average (not to mention that some of those review was before a rewrite, so the new one may have already solve that problem and already better)
also that novel didn't follow tropes and quite realistic and quite Unique culture/nation there. For example about the mc, if you compare with the mc in release that witch', the mc don't have a perfect memory like the other novel where the mc come to medieval one, and either a genius or 'perfect memory' here, not to mention this mc do write the knowledge/invention into a book so he didn't forget it (of course in english, so other can't read his)

about that 'world online one', have check some of the review and it have problem that prevent me from read it now, like too many character that forgotable, name hard to remember, too much unnecessary description (or similar ?, I don't remember clearly), and stupid racist that 'they tend to be racist/stupidly nationalistic and "foreigner" hater (make other nation people either stupid or 'evil') sooner or later' there View More

FennecFox: Enlightened Empire? Mind telling a word or two? Tho, if interested in this kind of novels you might be interested in "the world online", which translation has been finished recently. Also the "sovereign of the karmic system", although the world building is not the main point, I feel like supporting original authors here. 🤗

World Development System
4 months ago
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