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I'm really enjoying the story, mc is great, and i think the whole beginning was well written. the author clearly knows what he's doing. I'm looking forward to the academy arc. highly recommend.

it is very good and am looking forward to the growth of the mc. I recommend giving it a read. a little criticism I got is there is a bit too much of a peanut gallery, 10 different characters reacting to the main characters speaking one sentence, stuff like that.

So I read up to ch 30 ish, I'm not certain how the story develops but I feel everything is too rushed, the system and power ups are kinda confusing to understand. maybe it makes sense in the authors head, but it feels like crazy amounts of info dump for something that might be better explained in just a few lines. Also the story kinda cuts and then continues on, but gives backstory to the cut in the next chapter. It seems really unnecessary and makes the reader feel 'wait what happened to xxxx, oh it's in the next chapter'. I'm sure the author has improved from the earlier writing, and if there are some newer works, I will give it a read for sure. TLDR worth reading but expect it to be a bit messy

The story skips around too much, like one week will just go by and everything that we wanted to see is just gone. I feel like the author needs to take more time to establish the relationships and develop the world.The way interactions happen seem off and lack substance. I'm not sure how to explain it. The book has potential but i think it just needs to be slower. maybe adding in some chapters that are purely character development early on would do a great deal to the overall story. It is worth a read, but don't expect anything amazing.

Other than the art, which is pretty good, the whole thing is absolute garbage. Don't read this or you will lose brain cells trying to rationalise reading the next chapter.

I really enjoyed this fanfic, the author has obviously done some research and explores areas of overlord that occur much later in the novel I have high hopes for this one, I highly recommend giving it a read.

This whole book just jebaits the relation ships between the mc and and a few female leads. its very annoying and I feel is the only driving force of the story. it has trapped me in a vicious web where I know that nothing between the characters will happen for thousand chapters. But I want to read the next chapter despite the author dragging it out. I would recommend people to read this.

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this. I read 38 chapters and am looking forward to more. I saw that the author was worried about pacing as people wanted him to be in shows and debut quickly. However I am enjoying the pace and think your writing is great.

Honestly this book is pretty decent, quite humorous with an OP mc. I would definitely read the first 400 or so chapters for a decent read. However I dropped the book at around chapter 460. Whoever was editing and or translating stopped. so its like MTL or something, so bad that the main character's name changed about 5 times in a chapter. If the translation was fixed I would continue to read. Also there is basically no romance if that is your thing.