izuna

8d

Commented

Naruto fanfic: either a self insert or an oc, both sound interesting to write. It would be pretty basic but hopefully good. I've read enough I should be able to make something good by now.

Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Valen756

izuna

1mth

Commented

Number of wings and you can make them like tattoos on his back to hide them

For example, by the number of wings) Or will they just be small wings at first but grow over time?

The angel who conquered the world

Book&Literature · Filormony

izuna

2mth

Commented

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2. Either the hero will feel pain, malaise and other emotions.

The angel who conquered the world

Book&Literature · Filormony

izuna

2mth

Commented

Sorry for your lost I hope the author RIP

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Naruto: Reincarnated as Sakura [Reboot]

Anime & Comics · SuperDemonWriter

The angel who conquered the world

Book&Literature · Filormony

izuna

7mth

Commented

Hope you continue

ch 15 Should I Continue?

Transmigrated As Haruno Sakura With System

Anime & Comics · ZoroTraineeWriter

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sakura [Reboot]

Anime & Comics · SuperDemonWriter

izuna

1yr

Posted

Overall this is an enjoyable read the story concept is a new one

izuna

1yr

Posted

It’ has potential but it doesn’t read like a story more like and overview of what could’ve been a good story there are no firsthand interactions I.e. you say he picked up a dragon egg but never describe it it’s more like continual background information rather than a story and the story develops too fast and all relationships are just glossed over this is a good story idea but the execution leaves a lot to be desired

Harry Potter: The Beast Whisperer

Movies · StoryBeast

She examined her new appearance as she changed her clothes. Short neat brown hair, light brown eyes with almost imperceptible lines of light deep within, a body of golden proportions resulting from her balanced diet and accompanying her family on her morning exercises. If she had to point out a single flaw, it was that she was a bit shorter compared to the other kids her age. And though he could change that with his talent, he didn't. If she started making too many changes, maybe the day would come when she didn't remember what her original appearance was.