Webnovel Author: LordValmar - Fanfic Collection

LordValmar

29d

Commented

Wait, does that mean the DC universe is critical to his universe jumping ability? As in, without DC, he'd be forever stuck in a singular universe? What if he went to a universe that itself had multi-universal travel?

But... I have the ability to travel through universes. Even if Earth explodes and the positive and anti-material universes collide and are destroyed, I and the new Krypton can still survive. However, we would lose this universe as a foothold and wouldn't be able to shuttle through other universes as our main mode of travel anymore. We would be trapped in a certain universe.

DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)

Anime & Comics · Baph0met

LordValmar

1mth

Commented

Was there always a system and I just glossed over it?

ch 34 The Battle Of Asgard: II

Marvel: I Need A New Body

Anime & Comics · Marveller

LordValmar

2mth

Commented

Wait is the movie he's talking about this whole time Pulp Fiction?

ch 93 Chapter 93: Scamming

Hunting in Hollywood

Celebrities · INIT

LordValmar

2mth

Commented

I get there are a lot of weird translation issues that come from being a Chinese novel or whatever, and some hiccups are to be expected... but this one really takes the cake. I don't know if its just a translation error or cultural difference but I just can't see "pig shit" as being a nickname.

Skyler gazed at Draco and finally voiced the sentiment that had lingered in his heart for quite some time, "Thank you, pig shit..."

Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts

Anime & Comics · Scaramousse

LordValmar

2mth

Commented

After like 8 chapters in a row with this joke, I think it's grown a bit stale.

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Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

Movies · TheRamenLord

LordValmar

2mth

Replied to Andrew_maconha

Translation. How well it is, I can't really say. I've only just found the original. He makes some corrections at least. Like he calls Pepper by the right name instead of "Little Chili" like machine translations want to do. But at the same time, he never got Shredder right. Lol Anyway! The name of it is Marvel: Fusion. You can find a machine translation at mtlnovel if you're interested.

ch 68 not a chapter

Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion

Movies · harsh07

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

A good chapter but wow it was short. It felt like half the chapter was spent reiterating that he could have saved civilians, but didn't. Literally its repeated so many times at the start with just different flavor text, all essentially saying the same thing. This entire chapter was basically one minute of dialogue.

ch 136 Chapter 136: They're Watching You

DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)

Anime & Comics · Baph0met

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

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Option 1: Rewrite the previous chapter with this new perk replacing the old one – Harem King's Privilege (HKP) will replace Harem King's Right.

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

Movies · TheRamenLord

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

Personally, this is perhaps one of the weakest chapters. Feels like it was just a brief lewd, system stats and excuse to rewrite world to handwave harems being a socially accepted thing. Not saying any of that is bad, just that it didn't feel like much really happened.

ch 88 86. The Real Power of a S-Tier Skill.

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

Movies · TheRamenLord

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

If you wanted a reason to break them up, you could just have her end it by dating some actor or being caught sleeping with some casting director or something. You know, the common practice stuff that was rampant in hollywood at the time. Bringing in the mother and drama with it... I mean, it isn't bad, but you have a history of being really heavy-handed when dealing with personal drama where you amplify the antagonists flaws and faults to insane degrees to make it so incredibly one-sided that its almost impossible to feel even the slightest sympathy for anyone not Kazir. Like with his ex wife, where her only defining characteristics seemed to be crafted solely to be as horrible a person as possible.

ch 152 HWI 152

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

My only complaint is Amazo. MC decides to adopt him and then tosses him in jail. We never see or hear about him again for several chapters, seemingly forgotten, but now he shows up again like its a casual thing. I hope the MC has been interacting with him regularly up to this point.

ch 85 Power Testing

Celebrity System In The DC Universe

Anime & Comics · Level1Goblin

LordValmar

3mth

Commented

What's the name of the original?

ch 35 Chapter 35 : Ra’s Al Ghul

Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion

Movies · harsh07

LordValmar

4mth

Commented

I think you got your last two chapters out of order.

ch 103 Chapter 102: Beginning

DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)

Anime & Comics · Baph0met

LordValmar

4mth

Commented

I like that its involving Wanted. And I vote for his character surviving.

ch 134 HWI 134

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

LordValmar

5mth

Commented

IMO, it felt like you used three different paragraphs to basically describe the same thing, just worded a little differently.

ch 36 Chapter 36 - Skypie 05.

One Piece - I'm a different Brook!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

LordValmar

5mth

Commented

Voted. I appreciate the gesture but it is annoying to get "false" chapter updates. I'd be different if you were taking a hiatus but when we're talk about like a day or two late? Psh, that's nothing. Some authors take weeks to update, you're already way ahead of the curve.

2. Dont'a post a note and just leave a note at the end of the next chapter addressing the issue.

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

Movies · TheRamenLord

LordValmar

5mth

Commented

Home Alone may not be my favorite, but I think it should be the most popular. It gets aired pretty regularly on the holidays in my experience. So even if it doesn't explode in sales during the initial release, it should have a lot of long-term potential. I wonder if its too late for him to grab Back to the Future. He could even do a few tweaks to the future aspect in the sequel to make it more closely match what it will really be like. It'll be like a prediction come true lol.

ch 76 75. The Real Joke and An Early Christmas.

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

Movies · TheRamenLord

LordValmar

5mth

Commented

I've only read one Hollywood fic that wasn't Harem. It's also the one with the relationship I remember the most. Imo, a single love interest is best.

[Author's note: Do you want this novel to be a harem or not? Although I can't assure you that all of your favorite actresses will be part of the harem. I didn't want to focus on romance in the first place. Anyway, say yes if you want a harem. Say No if you don't. Write down the actresses you like, I might set up scenes for them].