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  • I love to write stories....that's pretty much it.....I also draw....yeah....Um...am I done here?.... Likes: Anime, Cartoons, Writing, Drawing, Art, Movies(AnimeorCartoonStyle), TV, Music, Video Games

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Perfection With Sins
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Empocalyse
3 months ago

CANAAN: Hmm it's better to move on and apply lessons learned to your next story than edit the old one. It's called throwing away your darlings.

I used to have this drawing teacher who would walk by tell you what you did good and what you should try next to improve and then told you to discard the work he just saw. He made rounds like that through the classroom as we were seated in a circle and drawing the subject.

It sucks to throw away your darlings but it really does help to start anew. Now adays I keep my work but if I'm dissatisfied I put it to the side and start anew. Unfortunately my talents don't extend to writing... I'm a disaster at dialog.

Empocalyse · C4
3 months ago

CANAAN: An action packed start to the story. I like it.

I do recommend making it a bit more obvious that the girl who went zombie and god killed was the shop assistant tough. I did not realize it was the same girl and not some new one at the parking lot until the next chapter when they had to walk...

Empocalyse · C1
3 months ago

CANAAN: I kinda dislike her. She's like a toddler running around, naive to the point of disturbing...

Empocalyse · C2
3 months ago

CANAAN: Hmmm... Yeah I dunno. The apocalypse isn't even a day old yet this reads as if it's been going on for months... Threats are initily dismissed such as being knifed down in the middle of the forest and don't even get mentioned at first...

A lot of the interaction also doesn't feel right concerning the situations at hand... Its too... Random... Then focused on this highly emo girl who lives with roze colored glasses superglued to her face.

No one acts realistic in the situations their in. Fear and other such things are dismissed on a whim and its just... Its as everyone is bipolar with a hair trigger.

As a guy I might cringe at incompetence but this is like watching all the dumb blonds and first to dies from horror movies rolled into the main cast...

Only they're protected by massive plot armor... Which just makes it cringy...

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Cyber City
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Empocalyse
6 months ago

PettyOfficer: My advice is to place characters talking into a separate line on its own. If you clutter your writing with people talking, it’s harder to understand. Use this to contrast your writing:

“What do you mean you don’t understand!?”

“I don’t get why you would slam a bunch of dialogue into scenic descriptions!!!”

You also have minor mistakes in punctuation and grammar. While not the most important, bad writing quality discourages readers from reading.

Although, what’s the most important things to readers here? The amount of chapters of at least 2000 words each you can pump out while maintaining progression in your story and not babying your characters! Readers always demand more and better quality...

Good luck writing!

Coven Of Witch Craft
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Geeky's Fan Fiction
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ajhfndndjdnn: I don't understand the gender stuff
Is Ambrose a male or a female
B specific please
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Vampire Reporter
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You have to use a PC to upload it. That's what happened to me and I looked it up and it told me that I needed to use a PC to upload the cover. View More

KatTheExorcist: Oh my lord!! Thank you so much! I honestly forgot to upload the cover photo for it that I’ve made and now idk how to go back and upload it. Everything I’ve looked up hasn’t been any help. I still don’t know where to go to upload it lol! But thank you so much! I honestly try to use punctuations and be grammatically correct but I get lazy 😂

The Hope In Us All
6 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Still reading it but overall I love it! I'm happy you put it up on here. I'm very excited to read more of the story as it processes. You are very good! I'm honestly jealous of your writing skills because mine are crap unlike yours. Hope it does well! View More
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