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Zane Uchiha at 21 is last member of Ancient Ninja Family That was famous for its Dōjutsu . From age of 4 his grandfather taught him Ninja techniques but unfortunately he wasn't able to awaken sharingan until death of his grandfather. he went out of the forest , to only see how advance technology are there in city . From there on he was adapting knowledge he was able to acquire Fortunately time passed on 5 years later he chose to become part time Assassin with his ninjutsu he became famous and he was so dangerous people from elite class or top dog become to tremble . due to underworld insecurity they began to hunt him . so Zane was pissed he went out killed some organization that were trying to track him . so after the massacre people in underworld of all countries began plan for capturing him . Zane was not mood for more massacre he left Assassin .. from then he found out he manga, light novel,web novel, Anime etc he was addicted ,so full year he read fan-fic, novels and best favourite was 'red Envelop group of the three realms'
I am Alex Demetri. A simple normal human down to earth kind of guy. No family, no girlfriend, no friends, and semi-otaku. As For his favourite hobby is to read anime, manga, and novel. And above all he is Scientist Researching limits of human body, his works were outstanding as he found out ways to cure cancer and Aids. As his works were incredible he got U.S government support
In a Cultivation World with a Evolution System · C6
airambach26: Incest with his mom the mc is man of cultureRed Envelop of three realms (Op fan-fic) · C10
airambach26: AUthro maybe you could do iciest with his momRed Envelop of three realms (Op fan-fic) · C9
Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C0
adoniis: More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreRed Envelop of three realms (Op fan-fic)
Aniket_Sharma_7677: this novel will not have orignal plot, most likely he somewhat different or mixed with OG plot . Look forward for Harem and OP MC
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Red Envelop of three realms (Op fan-fic)
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Reincarnated Inside MU ORIGIN with MODIFICATION SYSTEM (fanfic) · C25
I am in Naruto · C8
Aniket_Sharma_7677: I honestly can't take this **** of story ...mc litterly play matchmaking game and ..side character get girls and side character wife gets him threesome with mc future gf. ...... And wtf Bruce has god dick.??? (Is this because he is hulk?..then why it seems Bruce in real mcu looks like loserMarvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential
Marvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential
Ha_Kun: I like this story well researched, well detailed on plot .But the character development is lacking I'm not saying to change anything at this point. it will disturb your flow and heaps on plot will fall.
I'll leave some constructive comment for you so maybe when you finish the whole story or having difficulty in plot you can rewrite it to be more pleasing for reader and not get off your actual plot or storyline.
1- You have to stabilize the relationship of character with each other (I LIKE YOUR VIEW ON MORALS AND INTEGRITY -" MORALS ARE WHAT YOU SET FOR YOURSELF AND ARE NOT FORCED").
2 - (CONSIDER HUMAN NATURE OF CHARACTERS)-Your characters lack human nature such as GREED , LUST , RIGHTEOUSNESS, AND MOST IMPORTANT OF ALL POSSESIVENESS.
Every human has those nature it describe who they are and their relationship with other depend on those this could solve your fatal flaw in story.
3-( VARIABILITY OF CHARACTERS)- they are a group of people they all don't have to have same nature.
4-EXAMPLES WHERE YOU WOULD LIKE TO READ IT TO REALIZE ABOVE POINTS -
MATT <-[LOVE]-> ELEKTRA (She is allowed to have a night stand as a broken heart form break up but if she loves him she would treasure herself to not to degrade herself to something he would never except . I think that is also a great point that girls hate getting raped)
BRUCE <-[LOVE(WIFE)]-> BETTY (She is for god fucking sake a married women. The most jealous and possessive creature in universe. Why would she would let her husband have sex with a genetically modified women with more experience with men for him to say that he likes having sex with or something similar that would make her go nuts. It's okay if she was a SANNIN GRADE PERVERT )
MC<-[???]->BLK WIDOW (Although their relationship is not clear but if I know anything about blk widow she is a type who would want nothing more than a happy common life by any means that's why she strive for a cure to her in fertility or less who cares about being a fertile women when will literally was going to be an immortal in this arc.)(MC who the **** would see their said girlfriend whoring another man and declaring that man to be best ****er without having even a little feeling of jealousy or pain for that.)
(Sex might be pleasure source but in a serious relationship it's representation of commitment to their other half. Before and after its not an issue but it is when you are in relationship it's not moral it's issues of human nature of possessiveness and trust guarantor. Other wise people will not kill the man their wife was sleeping with or cry and feel hurt if they found their lover and friends having sex.)
It's not something you should have to feel pressured by and I not changing your mind just to say you can make it more realistic by following human nature theory of mine .
THANK YOU FOR THE CHAPTERS.Marvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential · C28
Obito_Tobi: DELETE THIS SHIT DON'T WANT TO SEE IT ANYMORE OR I WILL REPORT YOU AND THIS STORY THIS ISN'T A STORY THIS IS A SHIT MIX HAREM WHEN DID ALL THIS FUCKING HAPPENED WHEN DID NATASHA WAS SELLED TO BE SEX SLAVE NEVER AND SHE WASN'T INTO ANYONE AND YOU MOTHERFUCKER MADE HER BE A SEX SLAVE IN RED ROOM THEN A BITCH THAT BRUCE CAN FUCK ADD ELEKTRA TOO IN ADDITION TO HIS LEGAL WOMEN BETTY AND OUR MC SUCK HIS DICK HIMSELF ANS FUCK HIMSELF OR MASTURBATE WHILE LOOKING AT THEM FUCKING I DEMAND TO DELETE THIS FUCKING SHIT OF A TRASHMarvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential · C18
Aniket_Sharma_7677: Smartass author copies foundation for this story from another author and tell he can improve plot. ,And litterly makes worse plot **** . Ahhh mental hospitals pls call bye ......I Hacked Everything · C65
I Hacked Everything · C65
The Perverted Evil Cultivator · C95
Aikaya: Its just to make others overconfident and lower their defenses around himDragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C60
DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C60
9_h: Can you tell me why did the people thought he would stand on top of the world when he is just 5 years old, so stupid.Reincarnation That Everyone Desires · C8
Aniket_Sharma_7677: 7chp of attacking? Wtf atleast make them shorter ....sigh,...... anticipating when attack will finish
..stop useless chpIn the DC World with a System · C22
In the DC World with a System · C22
DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C54
Aniket_Sharma_7677: How about make them loyal to you ....instead making every one powerfull without recognising who did favor for them ,,so atleast they will never betrayStrongest multiverse system · C36
Strongest multiverse system · C36
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