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LOLRIP

LOLRIP

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I write stuff I don't like ruthless sociopath murder hobos who kill anyone who blinks at them I am a Broly fanboy

2018-12-29 Joined Global

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Replied to Wonder_whats_here
Thanks dude

I don't want to keep you in the dark about what's happening, especially when some of you are still giving power stones. I also don't want to use the excuse of "This is my first time writing" but my inexperience and 'go with the flow' mentality really fumbled the trajectory of the novel.

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Commented
Mind the capital letters
LOLRIP
Commented
I think 'Has' should be 'As' here
LOLRIP
Commented
Very interesting idea I like the concept a lot but the formatting is a bit off for me When a character is speaking, I tend to describe the appearance and then give an indication that the person speaking in quotes is them Writing the characters name and then what they say after that breaks the immersion a little bit for me personally but the idea is interesting although you'll have to handle the power of the MC being very high from the start
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Replied to That1BoredWriter
nah
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Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to joe_star
that's embarrassing

A young green-skinned woman looked out of the window in her spaceship, bored. She had short green hair and a slender curvy build. She wore a dark green scouter on her left eye and was wearing standard battle armour.

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to BorderlineAnorexic
img
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Replied to BorderlineAnorexic
precision

"Haha! Flying robot go brr!" he shouted as he mashed buttons on his navigation desk.

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
LOLRIP
Replied to James_loren
his personality changes

'That doesn't give you the right to put your hands on her!'

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to Xerstoren
lmfao

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Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to Xerstoren
I'm not a good author
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Replied to DriftingDragon
yah
LOLRIP
Replied to SpineGrasher
The gotenks ghosts

He stepped into the kitchen where several ki ghosts were whipping up meals as quickly as they could, drawing on the knowledge that Broly had while he controlled them mentally.

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to EXTRALARGE_Large
mastered

ch 40 Organic Vs Artificial (40)

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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LOLRIP
Replied to SAIKO
lmfao

"OMEGASTORM!" he yelled, his loud voice echoing through the canyon, like an angry decree from God. He shifted his waist forward and pushed out his cupped hands, releasing every bit of anger he could draw from in one attack.

Dragon Ball Revised

Dragon Ball Revised

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