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TheStormCommando

11mth

Replied to GrimxReaper

Glad to have you back! Hope you find the rewrite and new books to be even more enjoyable!

ch 0 1 A Fluke

Avatar: The Legend of the White Flame: Book I: Survival

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TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to Maze_Nightshade

Thank you very much for your review. They may not be common, but when I do get them, they mean the world to me and inspire me to keep on writing, so thank you very much!

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to OukisLips

Definitely an unreliable narrator. Information is limited and there are also, of course, the impacts of propaganda.

94 years ago, the Fire Nation was invaded by the Air Nation Army on a conquest to spread their cultish religion to all corners of the world, but the Fire Nation intervened hoping to spare the world from another civil war, but it was too late. The Air Nation had convinced the Water and Earth Nations to take up arms against their peaceful neighbor plunging the war in a nearly century long war. In a decisive victory, Fire Lord Sozin crushed the armies of the war-mongering Air Nation and took the first step to bring peace and prosperity to the world.

All That Was Left: Book I: Survival

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TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

To you as well! And Happy New Year!

ch 135 Luke

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

To you as well!

ch 135 Luke

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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TheStormCommando

2yr

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I sadly cannot see which paragraph you were commenting on, but one thing I try to employ a lot of is the unreliable narrator. Sometimes, it will be due to bias, and other times, due to lack of information, just like what you were saying. "The brainwashing and distortion of facts."

94 years ago, the Fire Nation was invaded by the Air Nation Army on a conquest to spread their cultish religion to all corners of the world, but the Fire Nation intervened hoping to spare the world from another civil war, but it was too late. The Air Nation had convinced the Water and Earth Nations to take up arms against their peaceful neighbor plunging the war in a nearly century long war. In a decisive victory, Fire Lord Sozin crushed the armies of the war-mongering Air Nation and took the first step to bring peace and prosperity to the world.

All That Was Left: Book I: Survival

TV · TheStormCommando

TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to OukisLips

Frankly, I have to agree with you on many points. A lot of things from the first book will be relevant later in ways that would be spoilers to say, but notwithstanding, I already am rewriting this first book. It will still be the same setting and such, but I plan on making it a lot more interesting. To tell you the truth, I really appreciate this review. It feels the most honest and constructive. I have an AO3 account where I am currently working on a rewritten version since this is 5 year old work back from when I was a Highschool Freshman. Notwithstanding, I appreciate the honesty, but I still hope you stick around. It's good to have honest people reviewing my work.

All That Was Left: Book I: Survival

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TheStormCommando

2yr

Replied to TheDangerousDino

Hello There! Really glad to see that you enjoyed it. It's review like this that make my day and constantly just give me that extra motivation to keep on writing. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the series, and I look forward to seeing your thoughts on what comes after.

All That Was Left: Book I: Survival

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TheStormCommando

3yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

No worries. Glad to see you back!

ch 66 Boss

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

TV · TheStormCommando

TheStormCommando

3yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

Well, you're just going to have to wait and see. :)

ch 63 Junior Lieutenant Zhao

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

TV · TheStormCommando

TheStormCommando

3yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

Oh no worries. But keep in mind, this kid ain't the Avatar. Sometimes, some people just can't be overpowered. Doesn't make them any worse as characters though.

ch 54 Junior Lieutenant Zhao

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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TheStormCommando

3yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

I'm still debating on whether he'll meet Team Avatar. In mind, I have 2 paths I plan on having the story going down. One that alters the main story and changes things up, and one that is completely separate form the main story so the two could technically work synchronously.

ch 54 Junior Lieutenant Zhao

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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TheStormCommando

3yr

Replied to GrimxReaper

Luke? No. Zhao is a Lieutenant, was demoted to Junior Lieutenant. Boss was a Captain, and really, it won't matter much anymore. There may be some latent respect for those who served in the Fire Nation army, but their authority is gone for the most part.

ch 54 Junior Lieutenant Zhao

All That Was Left: Book III: Honor

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