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  • Living With System

    Living With System

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    Haven't make it yet Note : I don't own any character or anime that i wrote inside of this. their original creator has it Also Note : I write this in my spare time of collage so maybe i cant update it regularly. But, I won't Drop it. in case i drop the novel it was maybe it because i make a new novel.

  • Review Of Some Fanfic

    Review Of Some Fanfic

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    This book is my review about some fanfic novel that i read. Maybe there will some of you that disagree with me. But, i write this book purely just to make a review there is no harm intended in the making of this review. Nothing more.

Moments

You see that. Translating bahasa into english can be a bit tricky. So... Yeah. Admittedly i kind of found this books in english version. But don't remember is it on fanfiction, wattpad or here. View More

SUPEROPSYSTEM: is there someone out there to give me steps on how to translate this in english. I CAN'T READ A THING!!!!!

Cultivator In Dxd World · C1
4 hours ago
I know that feel. I truly know... View More

MADNES: Njir.. 7 thun Baca novel engris, aneh Baca indo...

Cultivator In Dxd World · C1
4 hours ago
Imagine when you summon a servant and you got astolfo, kouha, the cat prince from re zero, pico and many other traps View More

tanatana: SYSTEM: Mission Complete!!! Now you will get Astolfo (Magi edition) as a reward!!!

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C172
18 hours ago

Ero_Usagi: Yoruichi vs kuroka
Literally black cat fight. Place your bet. The odd is 1 : 1

Playing with other Supernaturals · C39
1 day ago
Yoruichi vs kuroka
Literally black cat fight. Place your bet. The odd is 1 : 1 View More
Playing with other Supernaturals · C39
1 day ago
Hm? On my device. The only tag that lost is the new update tag. View More

lsoma: All of the other novels that where on there are gone thou ?

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
1 day ago
And you can only use it on early story. Bcs mid is where the effect fly to the left and right View More

JakeElliott: Hence why I'm using it in GX era

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
2 days ago
Though i still like the original fanfic tag. Hut at least with acg i can reduce the amount of koreans i saw at webtoon. And it was really nice. I mean, that ****t is to cringe and weird. View More

Fiction_Addict: Thanks for clearing that up!

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
2 days ago
If it was on zexal or arc-v. This fairy deck can't do a ****. I mean, there are so many negation effect on monster. View More

JakeElliott: I meant on PC my PSP is broke ;P

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
2 days ago
It was acg. Fanfic tab is mainly used for stuff like film, books or y'know... Korean boyband or whatever that ****. View More

lsoma: btw does anyone know where the fanfiction tab went ? can't find any of the stories. It's now the AGT or something ?

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
2 days ago
To differentiate between fanfic of stuff like korean boyband and agc (animation, comic, games). View More

Fiction_Addict: Yeah i dont know what is up with that

Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C17
2 days ago
I need fou. We need fou.
Love the new merlin animation where fou come and kick his face View More
The Path of a Ninja : Eyes of Death & Body of Life · C11
2 days ago
Wtf is like a sheep to a slaughter. I prefer the name is how to tame you pets. View More

WPOmega: Like sheep to a slaughter. In fact, chapter title: Like Sheep to a Slaughter, Spirit Seal Release, Animal spirits V.S Beast Royalty, Reveal of Nine Layers

Douluo Dalu: Wulin's Legend · C105
3 days ago
Though a second i think about AoE RTS franchise lol. View More

Hall: Aoa? Never heard that before. It’s AoE right?

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C546
6 days ago
So... Somebody care to fill me what this novel about? My memory kind of jumbled. View More
DxD Fate Unbound · C22
6 days ago
They have plus and minus View More

DaoOfTheDragon: Isn't Gate of Babylon better than UBW?

Illimitable Fantasy Works · C13
1 week ago
Reading Status: C1
My disappointment is immeasurable.
1. This author put a fucking english name on japanese family name. Can you all fucking writer just create a name that easy to roll on tongue?
2. And the MC is 13 Y. O when die. What **** did he have taste to get reincarnation? I don't even think he get wet dream yet.
Stop fanboying. Don't put too many OP stuff that makes you can't balance the world power level. View More
SHINOBI in a world of magic
1 week ago
This chapter is utter garbage. Tell me what is inside of your mine putting english name on uchiha clan? And it was the whole family. It doesn't make sense. Stop bull****ting with that doesn't roll on tongue View More

SengokuBangloi: It is just a reference to a song. Go to the last line from God and highlight from 'so' to 'forever' and search, its just part of the lyrics.

SHINOBI in a world of magic · C1
1 week ago
Read the manhua and you will see how weird it was View More

GodxOwn: if I didn't know that Xie Xie love woman I would have thought that he loved Tang Wulin to know him so much xD

Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3) · C111
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: Well, things like this without the detail is still better than 2-3 chapter of same lemon that released on different time. I mean, 2-3 chapter of lemon on different day is similar with watching **** half today and half tomorrow. Ain't nobody got tima for that

King of Gods and Immortals · C7
1 week ago
Its not that i dislike what you do. But you see, there must be some hesitation when ichigo attacking itsuki. With what you are potraying i can just see ichigo as a muscle head that not even thinking at all. Similar with zaraki. View More

DemonicPanda: 3

Rebirth in Bleach · C88
1 week ago
Well, things like this without the detail is still better than 2-3 chapter of same lemon that released on different time. I mean, 2-3 chapter of lemon on different day is similar with watching **** half today and half tomorrow. Ain't nobody got tima for that View More

Weirdo: It's just a minor Dao, branch of Dao of Dual cultivation.... Just relax...

King of Gods and Immortals · C7
1 week ago
Maybe i need to say that we can't write italic or bold on webnovel. (i personally tested it on the web and using app). Trying to use code or stuff like that will make it unreadable on app. So well yeah. View More

TheHiddenSword: There's no censorship you just can't read the words I wrote in bold and italics for some reason. It's a problem with your device.

Other Dimension's Knight · C26
1 week ago
And before i forget. I don't know if it was real or not (cs i havent watch the 4th season of dxd). There is stuff called king pieces where this pieces is used by the top ranker on rating game. Pretty much it was cheat. And some other fanfic said that the highest your rank the closest you with the true satan. I don't know if it was tru or not. Just some head up for you. View More

Peace12345: Hmm I will have to make something up then. How much is a mutated pawn worth?

The New Issei · C7
1 week ago
First of all. Writing a fanfiction or maybe you can say writing a novel is an art of bull****ting. Different with creating your own story and world where you can bull****ting all to your heart content. Fanfiction have some limit to it called lore, world background and canon. You can bull****ting all the way you like even if the writer dislike it but you still need to think, research and do stuff to make it like. The bull**** isn't forced and work as they are intended. One of prime example for a bad BS is whre you take character from anime A, putting power from anime B as his main power and put him in the world C without any reason how that stuff can happend. (though we can take shorcut using ROB). So BS is fine but how you make it so it doesn't look forced is wbat you need to think. View More

Peace12345: I just got a good idea that people are probably not going to like and call it BS when I do it, but oh well. Oh and don't worry it is not using different kinds of pieces.

The New Issei · C7
1 week ago
Twice the original point. And you can't do like knight + pawn. You can only double knight and so on. View More

Peace12345: Hmm I will have to make something up then. How much is a mutated pawn worth?

The New Issei · C7
1 week ago
Y'know i was thinking that the rule about reincarnation is revolved around, king's power, the reincarnated person potential and the pieces. while queen is similar with 9 pawn. Just counting issei elemental affinity and draig is enough to need 1 mutated bishop (14 pawn). And you can't use a different type chest piece. So the only things that can make issei reincarnated-able is the king's power that atleast 1 rank higher than issei (power not **** like high-ranking-devil society but they got no power). View More

Peace12345: Well in mine they will not so he will make Dragonball and Dragonball Z. Got to love the classics.

The New Issei · C7
1 week ago
It feels like watching ecchi anime in my country. Too many censorship View More

GinOokami: I think I need to read this after I have enough sleep. Its so cryptic

Thanks for the chap 👍

Other Dimension's Knight · C26
1 week ago
That is if you make him learn not getting it from system View More

Peace12345: .......HE IS NOT GOING TO BE WITH RIAS!!!! I HAVE SAID THIS MULTIPLE TIMES! Phew.....Sorry. Just got tired of saying this every chapter.

The New Issei · C6
2 weeks ago
You see. I can agree with stuff like swordsmanship, magic affinity and the likes. But i can't make sense for something like phase shift (kamui). 1st it was space-related tecnique which is dxd even if they do have inter-dimension transport. I doubt they got a devil who can do kamui. 2nd even if he got a power to use space-related stuff. You still need to know the reason behind the concept. Did he just put a portal i front of the object that will touch his body. Or did he separate his body part. Even if you know how it looks like it doesn't me you may know how to do. View More

Peace12345: .......HE IS NOT GOING TO BE WITH RIAS!!!! I HAVE SAID THIS MULTIPLE TIMES! Phew.....Sorry. Just got tired of saying this every chapter.

The New Issei · C6
2 weeks ago
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