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  • Living With System

    Living With System

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    Haven't make it yet Note : I don't own any character or anime that i wrote inside of this. their original creator has it Also Note : I write this in my spare time of collage so maybe i cant update it regularly. But, I won't Drop it. in case i drop the novel it was maybe it because i make a new novel.

  • Review Of Some Fanfic

    Review Of Some Fanfic

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    This book is my review about some fanfic novel that i read. Maybe there will some of you that disagree with me. But, i write this book purely just to make a review there is no harm intended in the making of this review. Nothing more.

Moments

Legal loli is another evolution. Like a special class that doesn't have any form of advancement. Because they are already at the peak. View More

Orthanos: And so over time the lolis grew to legal lolis, and the legal lolis evolved into Oneesans. Oneesans into Milfs.and the FBI forever the boundary force between the Legals and the children.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C46
1 day ago
And tht is why medusa got called as kin-slayer View More
Playing with other Supernaturals · C159
2 days ago

Icliptic_Horizon: Yikes Chief, Not gonna lie, didn't see that coming. But I should've gotten the hint from the title.

What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes? · C44
3 days ago
Good one hahaha View More

Peace12345: I am writing two fanfics....Also I was just asking the author a question and he did not take offense at it so why are you?

My Hero Academia: Sun and Moon God · C27
3 days ago
Nevermind i've found it View More

Xumit: My new fanfic link:
webnovel.com/book/15592088205019305

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C20
5 days ago
The name? View More

Xumit: My new fanfic link:
webnovel.com/book/15592088205019305

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C20
5 days ago
Check it on novelupdate... But there is also one piece celestial dragon and one piece pokemon View More

Im_U_Daddy: loves one piece but not understand this language~ any recommendations 1Piece fiction in English?

Me, System and Adventure ( Indo ) · C3
5 days ago
Hataraku maou View More
One Piece : Rebirt With System (INDO) · C5
5 days ago
Chapter 4 tolong diedit. 170cm untuk usia 12 tahun gk masuk akal. Kecuali kl mau jadi tiang listrik View More

NoBrain: Tq. Dan komen dan Makasih masukannya.

Dan memang kadang² masih ada beberapa Miss kalimat Karna Saya Gak Sempat Untuk Baca Ulang..
(╥﹏╥)

One Piece : Rebirt With System (INDO) · C3
5 days ago
Reading Status: C4
Wish fulfillment story or fanboying. Simpelnya sih termasuk kategori trash. Ini seperti cerita yang dibuat oleh otaku sampah yang masih terkena 8th grade syndrome dimana mereka terlalu banyak berkhayal. Not recommended. Kenapa? Karena certia terlalu absurd dan susah untuk dicerna View More
fate/Unlimited fate work
5 days ago
Red cloud? His mothers View More

mihaita98: Im lost. What restaurant is that ?!?

Food Wars: The Golden Hands · C91
6 days ago
At first i dont really care much about this. But dude, are you really going to take every girl like this? It is not i dislike it, but the distance, the tempo, the time... If every chapter you do it like this. Then this novel will be shortlived, you write 2k/chapter. Counting standard at 1k you still just write no more than 60. You take the harem? Fine. You take every canon girl? Fine, but give space and time. Dont just pick it left and right. Do it at least every 10 or 15 chapter. And about freya? Forget it, it was dissapointing. View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C25
1 week ago
No **** sherlock. Hestia is goddess of virginity she can do the job. Just bull****ting around that. View More

Rouxk: For me it's fine

For reader that think she's a slut and ask to remove her

I can't think for another way

Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C25
1 week ago
The next is about the hint... You dont need to tell that they do sex every chapter. Just put the hint once or twice every 5 or more chapter. We dont need to know that... "Oh today i do, tomorrow i dont, the day after tomorrow i do" On detail. View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: Here is your problem. <50 chapter but you already got min 5 harem member. And you want to do lemon chapter. How to make it healthy and interesting?
1. Create a lemon (post it inside only one chapter or at the same time with no delay even if it was 1 hour. You wont like it if i stop you watching **** at half. So better finish the chapter before posting it, i mean it. It is better for you to finish before posting or not posting at all than doing half and half.)
2. You got a lot of harem. How to fix it? Create lemon for 1 or 2. No more than 3. While the other just kind of the idea. Then you can use them after the next tens chapter if you want to create lemon.
This will make your chapter interesting while not repetitive at the lemon.

Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago
Here is your problem. <50 chapter but you already got min 5 harem member. And you want to do lemon chapter. How to make it healthy and interesting?
1. Create a lemon (post it inside only one chapter or at the same time with no delay even if it was 1 hour. You wont like it if i stop you watching **** at half. So better finish the chapter before posting it, i mean it. It is better for you to finish before posting or not posting at all than doing half and half.)
2. You got a lot of harem. How to fix it? Create lemon for 1 or 2. No more than 3. While the other just kind of the idea. Then you can use them after the next tens chapter if you want to create lemon.
This will make your chapter interesting while not repetitive at the lemon. View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago
It is Keep it healthy and interesting View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: Once per girl. After that just hints. Or maybe another after a few tens chapter.

Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago
Once per girl. After that just hints. Or maybe another after a few tens chapter. View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C0
1 week ago
How many times do you think the author almost misspelled duck with *ick View More

Cangkun: Yeah i hope so,
Maybe author will change the Cover with Portrait Chansey & Chopper? Lol

One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C32
1 week ago

Cangkun: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C330
1 week ago
Imagine... He do 'itachi's poking' using his little brother. View More

NexSerus1: The disappointment.... I just want the female 'doctor' to examine his dragon.. hopefully it's nxt chapter

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C330
1 week ago
Today we find another beta View More
Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon? · C19
1 week ago
Well, erza will use it without much think. So... I guess. View More

Aishiya007: Erza: Please Train me
Natsu: Ok (order a maid uniform)

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C7
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: And my money is dying my wallet is crying lord gaben is laughing.

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C764
1 week ago
And my money is dying my wallet is crying lord gaben is laughing. View More

Thoth0: I don't mean to correct you but I think you mean:
Winter is Coming.

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C764
1 week ago
No... Bring back the discount. Steam sell is close need more discount. View More

Kiikuro_Shichigo: Hahaha, you still remember that? Since C15 I guess...

The Rise of the Strongest Vampire Prince of Darkness ( WB-JPN ) · C36
1 week ago
Its because arthur pendragon. In HP goblin and fae is related. I remember reading something like this on bleached universe by coraulten View More

oscar1234: haha the most likely reason

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C40
1 week ago
You arent the only one View More

Glitner: I still have a bad vibe of bell fanboying from our author and that our mc is going to start geting lots of oc girls that are poorly described and Bell geting all Good once

And maybe our mc will be a beta male in this novel, Still the vibe im geting... might be untrue il just wait

while i love a Good Cliff hanger please dont drag it out with em when your already doing so short chapters

Thanks for Chapter was a Good one

Danmachi: Legend of the Argonauts · C12
2 weeks ago
Well, yeah. It kind of pull and push. View More

DioBrando: Great a beta mc

Life in DXD · C2
2 weeks ago
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