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  • Reborn To Be an Idol W/ a System

    Reborn To Be an Idol W/ a System

    Celebrities & Real People

    2.2

    JB is a graduating college student w/ a dream to help his mother and make her proud through her own effort that her son was able to graduate . But one night change his life and reborn as Zian with a system.. This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of "The voice of Korean entertainment" webnovel in ptwxz,here's a link to it; https://www.ptwxz.com/html/9/9012/

  • Ball Master

    Ball Master

    Competitive Sports

    3.8

    Jason is a former point guard of his men's basketball team, He was given a chance to go back in time and become a NBA player.. This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of webnovel in Qidian,here's a link to it; https://book.qidian.com/info/1003568971 I made small changes to the mc's name, sister, teammates, events, love interest and school.

  • Survive Apocalypse with a System

    Survive Apocalypse with a System

    Horror&Thriller

    An orphan who survive apocalypse with help of a system. Follow him in his journey on how he'll survived as he face countless undeads, superhumans, and mutated animals along with his family..

  • Korean Ent. 2015

    Korean Ent. 2015

    Celebrities & Real People

    Reborn, system, sports idol and Kpop domination

  • Reply 2005

    Reply 2005

    Competitive Sports

    After a freak accident, Alex Salva soul reborn in a guy with the same name and a player for Spurs.

  • Kpop vs Undead

    Kpop vs Undead

    Horror&Thriller

    A soldier turned driver-bodyguard of a Kpop girl group, while a zombie disaster is about to happen and can they survived this?

Moments

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Dhennram1992: Nc chap..sana ung update bawat chapter regularly..hehehe

Ball Master · C24
7 months ago

Dhennram1992: Nc chap..sana ung update bawat chapter regularly..hehehe

Ball Master · C24
7 months ago

aleksandar2003: Finally.... you are back !!!

Ball Master · C23
8 months ago

TounsiDMoha: Xp

Ball Master · C23
8 months ago

TounsiDMoha: Xp

Ball Master · C23
8 months ago

TakiMasaki: Good finally your back i ve been waiting for new update

Ball Master · C23
8 months ago

AwronZizao: Quite frankly I think this is a story that could've been enjoyable, if it was written by someone who knew what he/she was actually doing.

The grammar is terrible, the story is literally all over the place and you never know what the hell is going on, people don't even know how to socially interact properly or how to use logic.

The coach gets mad at the main character for sitting on a bench and massaging his legs..? Saying he's lazy, despite him just playing 3-4 games? Then she finds out that he played 4 games and that's why he's tired and massaging his legs, you know what she does?! SHE MAKES HIM RUN 20 LAPS ANYWAY. WHAT!?

He wasn't lazy like you said so, so why is he still being punished? You fucking what?! Where is the logic in that? I literally had to drop it right then and there, because that was utterly ridiculous. It would've been better if the main character said something about him being punished wrongly yet he didn't it's as if being punished for doing good is the most normal thing ever.

Hence, that's where I stopped and gave up. Good luck with your story but I can't handle this broken ass stuff.

Ball Master
10 months ago

DunkNDonut: UPDATE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WE NEED MORE UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
IF YOU NEED POWERSTONE I WILL GIVE YOU 1everyday LOL

Ball Master
10 months ago

jooNic: Can someone please explain why Sports is so little even they can be an awesome topic. It's always romance with one idea like having divorce with someone afterwards is the scene of pursuing her and the final is happy ending. WTH!! This is the reason why i preffered reading SPORTS related.

Ball Master
10 months ago

CatchIt: I'm waiting for more chapters, waiting........, waiting......., hmmmm.........., hmmmmmm..........., Hey Author! Do your best, Bye.















Webnovel suck this 140 characters you mofo ...................................jk

Reborn To Be an Idol W/ a System
10 months ago

hostscope: Need more chapters
I hope this Story doesn't get dropped
has a lot of potential
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Ball Master
11 months ago

WN_grdy_mthr_fker: The content has been blocked

Ball Master
11 months ago
thank you po,, I'll strive to do better.. View More

NC18: Hey, I'm here from a post from GP, and,
I'm quite disappointed

The story, the characters, the pacing, it's just confusing, and funny how you take story tropes and clichés, and making them more mediocre
(Also, note that I will be focusing on the first chapter here so you know I see your story, even just from the beginning)
From a storytelling perspective, you lack world building skills and character development skills.
Your story suffers from too much exposition dump.
The second paragraph of your first chapter is a line of dialogue said by a character to himself
Given the context of the situation and the state of the character is in, if you were that character, would you honestly ever say anything like that? That isn't dialogue. That's exposition dump.
And why do I get the feeling that making your character too OP and oh, he's despressed, and oh, he wants to commit suicide because he isn't in his prime anymore, and oh he wants to be great, is really a reflection of the author and this is a sad fantasy he wants to lives in.

Your "sketch" looks like a screenshot of a drawing that was copied and posted online multiple times, ruining the the quality. Who even made that? "Ball Master" more like Ball Buster

Also, grammar's all over the place. Too much unneccessary detail, redudancy and just terrible grammar.
"Reminiscence the past"? Really? I could forgive a few minor errors, but that is just funny
Or do you have to explicitly write "ha ha ha" when characters are laughing?
Like this one,
"Don't tease us, Boss... then we also taught NBA superstar like Lebron play basketball.. Ha Ha Ha…!"Accompanied with everyone laughing.
Also this one,
"Ha ha ha…" then everyone laughs again
If you were to add a line like "accompanied with everyone laughing" and "then everyone laughs again", YOU WOULDN'T NEED TO WRITE IN "HA HA HA"
That makes the sentence all the more dumb.

All in all, the worst mistake that your story makes is,
It's boring
It doesn't really appeal to someone if they're not basketball fans themselves.


2/5

Ball Master
11 months ago

NC18: Hey, I'm here from a post from GP, and,
I'm quite disappointed

The story, the characters, the pacing, it's just confusing, and funny how you take story tropes and clichés, and making them more mediocre
(Also, note that I will be focusing on the first chapter here so you know I see your story, even just from the beginning)
From a storytelling perspective, you lack world building skills and character development skills.
Your story suffers from too much exposition dump.
The second paragraph of your first chapter is a line of dialogue said by a character to himself
Given the context of the situation and the state of the character is in, if you were that character, would you honestly ever say anything like that? That isn't dialogue. That's exposition dump.
And why do I get the feeling that making your character too OP and oh, he's despressed, and oh, he wants to commit suicide because he isn't in his prime anymore, and oh he wants to be great, is really a reflection of the author and this is a sad fantasy he wants to lives in.

Your "sketch" looks like a screenshot of a drawing that was copied and posted online multiple times, ruining the the quality. Who even made that? "Ball Master" more like Ball Buster

Also, grammar's all over the place. Too much unneccessary detail, redudancy and just terrible grammar.
"Reminiscence the past"? Really? I could forgive a few minor errors, but that is just funny
Or do you have to explicitly write "ha ha ha" when characters are laughing?
Like this one,
"Don't tease us, Boss... then we also taught NBA superstar like Lebron play basketball.. Ha Ha Ha…!"Accompanied with everyone laughing.
Also this one,
"Ha ha ha…" then everyone laughs again
If you were to add a line like "accompanied with everyone laughing" and "then everyone laughs again", YOU WOULDN'T NEED TO WRITE IN "HA HA HA"
That makes the sentence all the more dumb.

All in all, the worst mistake that your story makes is,
It's boring
It doesn't really appeal to someone if they're not basketball fans themselves.


2/5

Ball Master
11 months ago

crouchingTiger: Sport Basketball with a System AND going back in time, unique is going back to college time which gives a lot potential action at college lvl and other future content, a MC that is not greedy but has is own special circumstances, all in all an Interesting story to read.

Ball Master
11 months ago

Jccr: it is very good to support the other gem without classification.I do not understand why people do not read more sports novels if they have recommendations that are welcome.

Ball Master
11 months ago

Redfar: Don't stop this please. This story go in my Library, I wait for my chapters.
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Ball Master
1 year ago
when is the next update? it's 3 long months since the last chapter.. are you dropping this? View More

Maxime: This is a novel about a guy who experienced rebirth, with an undying ambition to become a k-pop idol. That's basically it. The rest is up for you, the readers, to find out.

People usually complain about slow updating.

I plan to release chapters once every 3-4 days, it may be slow, but it's the best I can muster currently. I have school, hobbys and a life to focus on.

I hope you all enjoy reading my novel, and continue doing so.

Becoming A K-pop Idol
1 year ago

Maxime: This is a novel about a guy who experienced rebirth, with an undying ambition to become a k-pop idol. That's basically it. The rest is up for you, the readers, to find out.

People usually complain about slow updating.

I plan to release chapters once every 3-4 days, it may be slow, but it's the best I can muster currently. I have school, hobbys and a life to focus on.

I hope you all enjoy reading my novel, and continue doing so.

Becoming A K-pop Idol
1 year ago

BUTTERFLY0: Author update some more chapter ~~fast please.
I love your story.
So please update more chapters..
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

M very iggar to know what happens next in the story 😋

Becoming A K-pop Idol
1 year ago
Reading Status: C0
i hope more chapters will be uploaded..
a reincarnated person who dreams to be an idol w/ a system w/c make an op character in the story. .
i hope the character can share some of his skills in acting, playing instruments, composing songs, dancing, rapping and singing to other members so that each of them has max level skill and he will be the leader who's an all-rounder in the group..
i hoe the group can sing and dance different kinds of genres.. View More
Becoming A K-pop Idol
1 year ago
Author update more chapter pleaseeee. View More

Maxime: *Goes back to the Mortal Realm, slaps every mortal who doubted this deity, and returned quietly........*

The Adventure of a Lifetime (HxH Fanfic) · C22
1 year ago

Maxime: I decided I'd give this novel a five star review.

Cause I can.

This novel is about Axel Blayne, a guy who transported into HxH, with all of it's knowledge.

Now this alone is already a cheat, but I decided to make him more overpowered. Because, who doesn't like OP mc's?

I tried to make this novel as realistic as possible, but it proved to be quite the challenge. No person in his right mind would do the things Axel had done, so I hope you can take it all with a grain of salt, it's a webnovel after all.

Now this is yet another project that I really want to get started on, but I'm not sure.

I write purely for fun, and if other people enjoy my work, that would be even greater.

So hereby, enjoy!

The Adventure of a Lifetime (HxH Fanfic)
1 year ago
any update on this.. Boss? View More

Maxime: I decided I'd give this novel a five star review.

Cause I can.

This novel is about Axel Blayne, a guy who transported into HxH, with all of it's knowledge.

Now this alone is already a cheat, but I decided to make him more overpowered. Because, who doesn't like OP mc's?

I tried to make this novel as realistic as possible, but it proved to be quite the challenge. No person in his right mind would do the things Axel had done, so I hope you can take it all with a grain of salt, it's a webnovel after all.

Now this is yet another project that I really want to get started on, but I'm not sure.

I write purely for fun, and if other people enjoy my work, that would be even greater.

So hereby, enjoy!

The Adventure of a Lifetime (HxH Fanfic)
1 year ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Almighty Coach · C1
1 year ago
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