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Dying.. Is delicious. That was my last thought thought before it all ended. I know now why it can be so amazing, especially when a gorgeous goddess is begging to be my wife in the after life. Haah~ Turns out I have to work for it though, at least it involves my two favorite hobbies. Adventure and wholesale slaughter!
HaoYue: The author is really determined on making the mc not OP but he gave it mystic eyes of death perception which is an extrmely op ability itself. So what he did is to make mc's other abities below average which is stupid. Reading the 1st part of the novel feels like a nasuverse fanfic instead of naruto. Although the author has great writing skills, the story got put off my his resolute idea of making the "mc op but not op"Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto
Kali_Grapy: Now I only want to ask the author, why do you hate xiao wu so much? Its like you're only tolerating her existence. I know she may be obnoxious or a spoiled girl from time to time but that's because she's spoiled by her family and tang san. And not only that she's a big part of the emotional support of tang San when his father disappeared and when he doesn't have anyone. Tang San doesn't have friends when he was young but xiao wu was there to support him but you made her a side character and make it feel like your about to throw her away.
~~SIGH~~ at the end of the day this is your novel and you can write whatever you want but its just a shame to witness a sweet character like xiao wu be dismissed and not be given the attention she deserved. And don't try to defend it cause you know it yourself that you're dismissing her like she's just their and completely unimportant.
Poor girl. Make a doluo fanfic starring tang san, dismiss xiao wu. Yeah good job.Douluo Dalu System
TycKa: Well, it's not that about being a child but title 'genius' is overkill for him if he can't even think rational. And it's doesn't if he matures a bit as long as he's Gryffindor he will be best buddies with iron triangl.e and plot will repeat itself 1. Potter thinks of something stupid. 2. Mc warns them about the danger and how they lose house points. 3. Potter still insist doing it, Mc again warns them, but Potter says fuc.k off you're not needed and don't get involved with me ever again 4. Mc says I will never talk to you again or get involved with you in any way and goes away. 5. Potter already doing something stupid and Mc comes for help. 6. Next day Mc who almost died meets Potter and mister Potter says 'I'm sorry' and Mc goes like "OK" and they're best buddies forever again.Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
Raixod: After Reading the interaction between Itachi and Jasmine, I decided to drop this novel. If you wanted to give her some power you could have used some other reason. The one you used is lame and force imo.Against The Gods with an Anime System · C22
Blackie_black: Really those op and expensive ass powers if one day she decides to rebel he’s dead and if that foreshadow about another person with a system comes to be then I’m outAgainst The Gods with an Anime System · C22
Bruhnoe: Giving those two powers to her just to know the appearance of someone was certainly stupid. He does not need to know about the woman's appearance and just ask about her in God Realm. Jasmine is very proud and a tsundere is a kind of character that just annoys, there is nothing funny. And spending his own points to empower her is stupid. He should have made her at least get the points for the powers he's giving her. Giving power, free of charge for no reason. I never really liked certain women of the original novel, only Xiao Lingxi, Su Ling'er, Cang Yue, Huan Caiyi (Little Demon Empress). The rest always sucked. Chu Yuechan I also like, but at the beginning not so much as the women of her sect.Against The Gods with an Anime System · C22
9_h: Perfect. While at it you may also write Ron the prisoner of jealousy.or Ron the goblet of jealousy.Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey · C22
SlyImmortalDevil: Do you have to? Let Ron hate haha. Not like you have to be best friends with the guy.Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey · C22
Lyrical: Aha! Ron The Jealous Prick makes his appearence ONCE AGAIN. (someone seriously should make a movie about him...) I'm sorry (not) to all those righteus Ron's fanboys/fangirls but even this Author can't cancel Ron's jealousy! The Author needs his characters to create a path for Ron's ego! Hahaha that's hilarious! The Author knows Ron will never work hard enough on himself first so he needs to have Harry bring Ron to jealousy therapy. Glad this Author knows how Ron really is. Without the jealousy he wouldn't BE Ron. No one would even RECOGNIZE him! Everyone would be like: ''Who the hell is that? Ron? No,Impossible. How can Ron be Ron without his jealousy? He must be a fake! Someone used the Polyjuice potion and became Ron! KILL HIM!!!!!!!'' That's what would happen when Ron is not the jealous prick he is. He would be taken as a spy by the readers and by the other book's characters. And to be honest... I would really like to see Ron's angel side without jealousy and no one believe that bulls.hit trying to kill him thinking he's a fake. LOL
Author even if you make Harry built a castle for Ron's ego it won't be enough. Ron's jealousy won't be satiated with it. If Ron gets 80 and sees Harry get 100,his jealousy will come out anyway. Doesn't matter how many therapy sessions he takes. He will forever reamain a jealous prick. You can't change him. No matter the timeline. Not even the butterfly effect can do anything for him. But i really find hilarious Author's idea of creating Ron's ego a path to lower his jealousy. It's the only way to make a more ''normal'' Ron in a believable way. If he made Ron NOT jealous he would've ruined his character. Hahahah Even Author knows Ron is a jealous prick and tries to change it! I like it but NO! Ron has to suffer. I hate him so much. He always makes me angry. I have a feud with him. Don't know why but i have it! I'm strange but i like myself. I have fun with me. HahahaHarry Potter and The Mystical Journey · C22
gman12567: And regard to losing the kakuja and kagune making sense... it doesn't at all there's nothing about losing it from cultivation ranks in Tokyo ghoul and if your basing it off of Amon it was explained that a mutation occurred increasing his RC level but making it unstable as a result making him unable to use his kagune which obviously means you made it like that which also obviously means you just chose to add it so no it doesn't make sense from a writing nor story perspective.Holy Akashic Conqueror
gman12567: Lol I said it's not even a negative for some people I don't care much whether there is a harem or not my main points was every point besides that one sorry I didn't explain it well but I was saying you left nothing to look forward to in most category's there will be no new romance and no new powers and the powers are the foundation and cornerstone of a action based story and it's not "brainlessly gain power up without any reasons, stupid systems which could make you a god after you kill enough monsters and with points you could buy from system practically everything, traveling into countless worlds and staying in that world for week- getting all females as harem members" its instead not having any interesting progression in power/not having any power progression at all and like I said i'm fine without a harem you just left nothing to look forward to there are plenty of novels that don't have a system nor brainless power ups but don't have the same problems I pointed out. It sounds like you set up the story perfectly for everything to be really repetitive and the only change would come from whatever different world you are in and regards to it not being a Tokyo ghoul fanfic doesn't make sense I get that it won't be the focus in the future but right now it is a Tokyo ghoul Fanfic as it is the only thing your story is based on maybe when you get to a point when you've been to other worlds for a good period of time then it won't be but as of now it is 95% a Tokyo ghoul fanfic.Holy Akashic Conqueror
GhostyZ: I don't read a fan-fic for the plot or story. I read it to see some changes. If it is the same then why read it? System, Harem, and H-scenes changes the nature of such things. Not being rude or anything. Just pointing that out. Hope you do continue not really that much good TG fan-fics out there.Holy Akashic Conqueror
GhostyZ: Aren't wishes just as dumb as a system? And that's why it is called Fan-fics. People can imagine whatever they want. There is no such thing as a 'quailty' fan-fic. If that was the truth then why not just read the original? Still I admit this story is better than most fan-fics.Holy Akashic Conqueror
gman12567: To be fair I've enjoyed a good portion of this story but that said the decisions this story has made so far and has planned for the future are some of stupidest decisions I've ever read in a book to the point where the best future a can see for this book is a mediocre one and for the most likely future it will probably get really bad fast. imo there are three major things people read fanfics for which are the girls, the worlds, and the powers
First off the girls, this can't really be counted as a negative but for a lot of people it will be which is there is no harem he already said he will only have two girls only and no h-scenes. So there will be nothing to look forward to in regard to that if you like harems and stuff like that but the romance is okay so far.
The world was ruined imo I love the idea of a fanfic in the Tokyo ghoul world but the author made the story into a Chinese like story with cultivation and all that stuff which imo conflicts with the atmosphere that made the Tokyo ghoul world interesting in the first place essentially ruining it and so far the prospects for future worlds don't seem interesting either.
Finally the last one I get to which is also the thing that ruins the story and its future the most which are the powers. He's basically a better version of normal ghouls with powers mainly focused on his kagune which is the same as Rize's (and he can detach it to make a katana) and as is RC levels increase he gets three different levels of his kakuja. All that isn't so bad but there are cultivation levels that are based on RC levels like when you hit 10k in RC levels you become baron rank, 100k is viscount I think and it continues like that. The thing that's so stupid is that every time he increases in a rank in cultivation he LOSES ALL PROGRESS IN HIS KAKUJA AND KAGUNE what I mean is every rank increase he loses the ability to use his kakuja and has to increase his rc levels to a certain level (usually to around the middle of whatever rank he is in) and relearn the three levels to them and no there isn't any changes except it being stronger when he gets it back also the author said he doesn't plan to give him any more powers. This is one of the stupidest decisions I've ever read in a book I get he's doing this to keep it ****** and not add a bunch of different powers but he chose the stupidest way to accomplish that literally the entire power progression will be him re-earning the same power over and over....how does that sound like a good idea. Imagine if in Naruto he didn't have any powers except his hand to hand combat skills and his shadow clone jutsu and during the entirety of Naruto and shippuden his power increases and his training new techniques equated to summon stronger clones all the way to the end... it literally sounds like a joke with no punch line. I'll say this again how does anybody think re-earning the same power over and over is remotely not the stupidest idea they've ever heard
The writing quality is okay there are pretty good descriptions of stuff.
That's all I have to say although I could rant on the stupid wishes for a bit to but I can't be bothered and I just want to say I enjoyed it a lot originally but absurd decisions ruined it more and more.Holy Akashic Conqueror
Chibi_Senpai: I was interested in the concept the moment I saw and despite the rating I decided to give the novel a try. Waste of my time. The author might as well have replaced the mc with anybody else because this wasn’t Deadpool whatsoever. Deadpool doesn’t think of the consequences when he does something because his healing factor saves him from dying yet you have this Deadpool tolerating insults because he knows he’s not strong enough. When has that ever stopped him? He’s an ingenious fighter and very creative at unaliving those who piss him off regardless of their strengths. He killed the entire Marvel Universe for gods sakes, a bunch of bratty kids are hardly an issue. I thought he’d then chill until he got stronger and had a little guarantee in overpowering those around him before he showed what he was capable of, but no. Once they start their journey he reacts when insulted by his sister and reveals his regenerative abilities plus mass shadow clone powers. And he doesn’t even do anything to them, doesn’t hit them, kill them, take an arm, tongue, whatever. He just threatens them and warns them not to tell anyone which they obviously do the moment they leave his sight. A day doesn’t even pass and they’ve already told everyone else of his strange abilities and plot to kill him. Deadpool can’t be this dumb, did he expect them to just listen to him? Next he gets lazy and falls asleep instead of training even though he’s surrounded by people who hate him and are stronger than him. Its not like they could kill him but it’s not they don’t try. Deadpool starts playing around like a dumbass flirting with and teasing his sister who want to kill him rather than increasing his strength. He’s not even wary at all of them all of a sudden which allows them to skip a very powerful poison into his food which kills him and leaves behind only a skeleton. What the ****? Of course Deadpool doesn’t die but at this point I’ve already checked out of the story, there was something about an injured vampire queen and her baby running into him but I couldn’t care less. Now he’s meant to protect some vampire baby when he’s so weak and stupid. Another thing about the novel is the cringe fourth wall breaking, it’s overdone and not witty at all. It’s just Deadpool threatening the author as a sort of meta commentary on how generic the plot is which doesn’t excuse the generic plot. Honestly I’m disappointed by this novel because this wasn’t Deadpool, it was a caricature of what the author heard about Deadpool. “Oh he swears a lot, he’s crude, likes to make R rated jokes, doesn’t take things seriously, has two katanas, rapidly heals, and likes to break the fourth wall.” That makes no sense. Maybe my expectations were too high for this novel but whatever, this review is just therapy for me. I’m over this mockery.Deadpool Reborn in a cultivation world.
Rawr_Kitten: Harem mc is just another dude who thinks love is based on how many people he screws... and lets not get into the fact hes way younger than spidermans aunt yet he still screws her even when spiderman is his best freind... sorry but that alone ruins the story for me what type of pure assholery is that to decide yeah hes my best pal so ima screw his aunt and make sure he knows it tooBlue Devil
Time_Kink: Me: You wake up as superman what is the first thing you do?
Friend 1: Go back to sleep and hopefully wake up as Batman!
Friend 2: Yes because if I wake up as an alien demigod who can fly at supersonic speeds and raise an aircraft carrier above his head the first thing I'll think is ”i wish I were an unstable orphan in a bat costume!Marvel: The Strongest Avenger · C2
SamStrike: "side kick god" she is not god, just strong based on his strenght at the time, he already surpassed her at chapter 60. And since when people call their wife 'side kick' she is his wife from his previous life that originated from his soul and is only helping him get stronger to how he was beforeConqueror of All
SamStrike: Totally fake, you probably didnt even read the novel, not even his past as far as you jave read. He didnt say they are corrupt or anything. He simply decide to eliminate them because he is planning on joining the opposite site to them and they are an hidrance.
He is always the leader and make decision for the group himself without others even suggesting him, the want to dominate came from his past and original soul. Did you even reas the novel or just based this review because you read have read random words from the chapter? Go back and reread instead of saying random nosenseConqueror of All
Nirvanic_Sun: I've probably ignored your story by passing it over 100 times due to this review, and I'm glad I did! Now I have 117 chapters to read in a row! Hail the Master Chief!Conqueror of All
tera11: Awe I was hoping for MC to have ancient saiyan bodyThe Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C96
Crixzivion: Stupid mc just use kaiokenThe Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C21
Peak_Plot_Armour: Yea author kinda dropped the ball when it comes to power levelsThe Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C21
Zemophobia: I don't think the MC was really a DBZ fan. Either that, or the author made a mistake with the MC's age when he died. Because this is obviously not a full-grown man (mentally speaking). Unless the MC was on the 'spectrum' in his past life, which I find highly likely since he sacrificed himself for an animal he saw for the first time.The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C21
Shiroyama72: Thanks for the review. I also think there's a lot to improve but I have to point out a few things.
Zenkai boost had a limitation, already said a few times in the series, check the wiki. It was a minor thing ever since the namek saga. Also there's Saiyan power you know? He Growth very quickly compared to other people and he could transform to Super Saiyan without learning from beginning thanks to Goku's legacy.
And regarding MC, I don't think he's a wimp. I just don't make him like R-18 novel mc with cold and shameless personality, basically MC was someone with gentle and determined personality (typical japanese novel or manga MC). But he's not a wimp for sure, if the girls are wrong or look down on him he won't tug his tail between his legs.
I don't think the girl was acting bossy, he's the who decided everything, where's the part of her getting bossy? :/
I know what you mean but I already said in the auxiliary, the reason I let the girl be more independent in their personality was so MC and them can have their own spotlights, I don't want MC to do everything alone and rather have mutual trusts where the girls are all reliable and strong. That's a true harem in my opinion rather than conquered and have them be useless without MC I hate girls like that. To do that MC cannot be have a dictator like personality.
I even want the girls to correct MC by fighting him if he was wrong and vice versa if possible so yeah having MC domineering them is not happening.The Legacy of Son Goku
Alex_Lockheart: Well what do you mean by legacy of goku when there is no sayian like powers. There is no zenkai boost(wait wtf!!), why you put a wimp mc. I mean man he just does how others order him to do. He is spending all his momey on an unknown hirl and she still acts bossy.
Well the part i dont like the most is that he is just another beta male character. Whats the use of harem that you wamt to catch like pokemons.
Gohan was able to kill t-rex before vegeta attacked eathr and he is struggling against bears wtf?!..The Legacy of Son Goku
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